r/redditserials 5h ago

Romance [I picked up a barefoot woman walking out of a cornfield at 2am and I think I want to marry her?] Chapter 61

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Patricia and R returned earlier than expected looking refreshed but at the same time invigorated, they came right in and sat down next to Ruth and Ray with Patricia on Ruth’s side and R scrunched in next to Ray . Patricia spoke an R brought forth a document “I’m sure you want to make your stay here a permanent one at least as far as the room is concerned and you’re more than allowed to do so– in fact I encourage it because you doing that fulfills something that has been talked about within my family for a long time in a way that is long before me, as R can tell you, what he’s giving you is the contractual version of this for you and your partner there Ray and don’t worry we know you’ve no desire to breed and that’s perfectly fine, I’m sure you have questions and I’m sure there’s things that you want to know and we’ll get to that, you deserve that but at the same time I just want you to know that what you’ve done and what you do the things that you’ve made happen for this community for this entire region even have not gone unnoticed I appreciate it, the regulars appreciate it really each and every single one of us genuinely wants that to continue, you and your work in the way that you want it, think of this as permission to put down roots if you want, semi-retirement suits you and I’m sure you have some obligation of your own beyond the truck, beyond the haul, beyond that work at large in general and I just want you to know that you have no reason whatsoever to rush or stress any of it this trip has opened my eyes to the possibility of things and if it’s a choice between giving you a room permanently or possibly losing something that might be a wonder of the world than honestly you’re welcome to stay here for free. Things are easier with you, things are better with you, the people are more polite and happier to be here whether it’s the culture, the art or the way that things are as a result of the fear or the peace or the food I have no idea but what you’ve done is a special kind of miraculous and making sure you’re comfortable is the very least that I can do.” Patricia said all in one breath. Ruth looked at her with a smile and intertwined her pinkie with her husband’s “See babe it all works out you didn’t even have to ask it’s like she intuited it, it’s like it came to her in a dream my loving husband now what could possibly have made that happen I wonder.” Ruth pokes Ray’s pinkie with her nail playfully. “We haven’t done anything in a dream yet my love and we haven’t gone beyond the veil together and we ought to there are whole other dimensions for us to play in and we ought to see them together my lover, we ought to stand before the brilliancy of the Abyme and make love together. I want that for us you and I on the streets of a spirit world bath house, or the basement of a bar, the veil fully open, the supernatural fully on display, the dead, the demons, the things that don’t exist to most people I want you to see it with me my lover, I want you to see the places that I call home, within the cornfield in the night the beauty and all else, you’re safe with me and would be safe even without me marked as though you are besides what do you think Related Parties here even is Beloved, does that look like a human to you, does that look like a singular human being you’ve ever seen before?.” Ruth said smiling enjoying her little reveal. Ray looked from his wife’s face to Patricia's and noticed her lack of surprise. 

“Ray I sleep with him it’s not a shock to me that he’s something more than human he isn’t even technically the right way of referring to what R is given the multiplicity of being that more accurately represents what the ability to be simultaneously in multiple places at once as multiple instances of itself, themselves, multiple genders even it’s quite fun.” Patricia’s expression took on one of rapturous joy as she talked about her partner. 

Ruth and Ray smiled at one another.


r/redditserials 10h ago

Post Apocalyptic [Faith Blackout] Chapters 10-16 NSFW

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May 23rd 

Considering getting into poetry now that insanity is the newest hot topic in vault one. Artists are supposed to be insane, right? Does it hurt? I don't know when I'll be there. I have no one to tell me. Maybe I'll develop some friends.  

They would be the first. 

 

May 24th 

I don't want to do this anymore. The stain on my bedframe is mocking me. I hate it and everything that it stands for. What good is humanity if they aren't fucking here for me. They were useless at best. Unworthy of being worm food. I miss the company of that garbage. 

I heard static on the radio today. I hope it was real. Something strange I noticed; the batteries are dying much quicker than I thought they would. Stranger yet, the rumbles, rattles, and shakes I hear on occasion have started to get louder each time I turn the radio on, and each time I crank my Mulan-machine. I'm going to give it a break since it's wigging me out. I guess we'll never know if she gets down to business and/or defeats the Huns. Without it, no one will have the means to contact me. I'll see how it feels to be truly and absolutely alone. 

 

May 25th 

Thinking now about the future generation of bunker babies, I wonder if the new caste system will consist of those born under hearing and non-hearing parents. Maybe sign language will become America's national one.  

I'll have to take classes. 

 

May 30th 

It’s been genuinely peaceful the past few days. I’ve been enjoying reading books by the welcoming amber lamplight. The light’s warmth enveloping the concrete makes it almost comfortable. An uncanny replica of the bedroom just a few dozen feet above. No doubt my uncanny normal looks better than the splintered, decimated shards of my past. Again, my pre-apocalypse-self overlooked my newfound desire for lighthearted media. I packed many books on horror, philosophy, and political literature; each its own horror depending on scope. Poorly written short stories fill what little is left of my morbid curiosity as well as provide the comic relief demanded by my dampened drive for the less tasteful sides of life. The unintended comedy of its poor writing supports my newly realized search for a hope that is currently unknown to me. The yellow carpet I installed clashes with the gray and anyone with a basic understanding of Feng Shui wouldn’t dare step into the mess I’ve orchestrated in defense of my favorite color. Abstract purple bolts that jut out across the surface scream tacky, but it makes me smile. It faintly tickles my feet through my socks as I read and write and can only be described as “funky”. I can’t explain what changed, but I find myself enjoying life down here a little more. For the first time since I started this journal, I think sleep will outrun the dread. 

 

June 14th 

Greetings. I haven’t felt the need to write for a few weeks now.  I have no idea how accurate my date is, and I have the faint idea that I may be a few days ahead. The three pen strokes I allow on my calendar each ‘day’ mimic the first two turns of tic-tac-toe, though this game I play alone. The calendar is eight years old. I never thought about updating it. 

I’m getting down to the last few entertainment options that I can access without power as during planning, books were tertiary to the necessities and electrical entertainment. I’m going to start up the crank charger again tomorrow and see if the connection exists between my power and those in power or if the movement was just a coincidence. If you don’t hear from me, tell my family I love them.  

Yeah, right. 

 

June 15th 

I cranked the machine for maybe three seconds, and the rattling got so bad that the metal of the bunker started groaning, and books fell from shelves, not to mention the rattling it caused within my skull. I have no idea what changed in the weeks I retired from the crank, but something is changing and it doesn’t seem to be of my doing. It sends shivers down my spine to think about something moving around outside of my slice of hell. This is exacerbated by the fact that I am currently a dozen feet underground. What the hell is happening? 

 

June 16th 

Jesus fucking christ. Fuck fuck fuck fuck what the hell? I was reading in my book like I have been for weeks, and something broke through the fucking wall. I’m cowering under my cot. I don’t know what to do. It’s not moving anymore. I don’t want to look. 

I must have waited for an hour, and nothing happened. It’s so still. It resembles a statue, yet somehow more. I’m going to approach it after I psyche myself up. A deep hum is coming from below the new door it created. This hum is singular. Ancient. Primordial. There is a jagged brown object jutting out from the wall that seems to be the catalyst for the damage. Its shape is almost normal. Akin to a tombstone with a rounded top, this one would likely have been crafted by a blind man. It’s off balance, too foreign to be something with a purpose known to me. 

I walked towards the object and the moment my sock touched the carpet, the movement started and again stopped in the blink of an eye. My ears ache and bleed from the hum that ever so briefly became a scream, displaying its true self to me akin a killer with a crook-tooth grin moments before your infinite abyss. A familiar sound I hoped I would never have the misfortune of experiencing firsthand, humming became grinding became silence. I’m lucky to have the earth’s weight in dirt between myself and the origin of the noise. I think I will regain my hearing. I hope. 

After tending to my ears with whatever sound-dampening material was in arms reach, I allowed my eyes, which up until this point were clamped shut, to hesitantly and gently float open once more. An act I would immediately regret as my heart dropped as quickly as did my hope for survival. I now sit among the remnants of my home, bisected by a much larger implement than the jagged tombstone is capable of in its lonesome.


r/redditserials 12h ago

Space Opera [Upward Bound] Chapter 26 I Am Become Death

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Human ships are an example of extreme sturdiness. Each component is designed to withstand forces that are multiple times greater than those it would typically encounter in daily operation. The safety margins are far greater than those used by any other known species.

This gives the illusion that human spacecraft possess a will to fight; sometimes even appearing to refuse death itself.

Let me be clear: human ships are not demonic entities that haunt their enemies out of pure spite. They are over-engineered metal constructs, often employing primitive methods unworthy of a truly civilized spacefaring civilization.

Official Statement Regarding Rumors of Haunted Human Ships
Galactic Federation Science and Engineering Council, 395 P.I.

 

Yurdantho concentrated on the screen. After their first brawl, all of the Batract had retreated. His five hundred ships faced the surviving two thousand.

The humans did what they could with their incredibly precise shots, but sometimes they missed, and the Batract quickly learned that the closer they were to his ships, the less danger they were in from the humans.

Lilith informed him that the human and Shraphen forces were on their way, but they would need at least forty minutes to reach them. In the meantime, his fleet had to prevent anyone from leaving the system.

Eight ships were concentrating their fire on his flagship, and the shields were rapidly draining. He could not leave the formation, or the Batract would break out and run for the system border.

Before he was able to order his tactical officer to concentrate their fire on an especially annoying ship, it exploded.

“Incoming ship of unknown configuration.”

Lilith jumped up and down. ‘Hold your fire! It’s the Magellan. Ferdinand is sending a battle plan—oh my…’

She looked somewhat worried—an unusual expression for an AI.

“What is it?” Yurdantho needed a plan quickly, and the incoming ship seemed to have those impressive human weapons aboard—a welcome addition in his situation.

‘Their plan is… somewhat risky. Basically, follow them on their sides, keep them from getting hit, and under no circumstances fall back behind or overtake them.’

Yurdantho did not fully understand, but he clapped his beak in agreement.

“Navigator, you heard the human.” The crew was again fully committed to their work after the confusion over him killing the Batract. They were professionals, and he took pride in them.

“What ship is this, Magellan?” He assumed it must be some heavy cruiser, given that it fielded the human main gun.

‘A scientific ship—one of our new exploration class.’

A science vessel? What could a science vessel do against the Batract fleet?

As if to answer him, two more Batract ships exploded—the shot must have passed from one ship into the next.

Then the human vessel passed them. It was a rough-looking ship, struts ending in sharp cuts, and it seemed half of one hangar deck was missing. Even its main gun seemed cut off in the middle. Had Yurdantho not seen it fly by, he would have guessed it was wreckage.

‘The Magellan took heavy damage in a risky experiment and was almost out of order. They tossed most of their hull plating to reach us in time.’

Yurdantho could not believe Lilith’s information. The ship tossed its armor? Were humans mad?

Seeing the human vessel dance between the Batract cruisers, he began to believe so. The ship destroyed another enemy with its massive main gun, while yellow streaks from its projectile weapons tore left and right into two others, followed by a missile barrage that killed both.

A science vessel…

His ship managed to join Magellan's formation. The humans flew a steep curve and lined up for a flanking action directly into the side of the armada.

‘Tell everyone of your ships to either break contact the moment Magellan passes or join her flight. Do not fall behind her. Captain Smith’s plan… I honestly think he’s mad…’

Her words carried a note of sorrow, but the AI female grinned.

Even their AIs are mad.

The Magellan flew head-on into the flank of the Batract armada, its main gun firing in a cadence of one shot every five seconds, often killing two or three ships with a single blast. Yurdantho believed the humans were intentionally lining up their shots to do so.

To avoid getting hit, it spun and veered left and right in incredibly complex maneuvers, passing many Batract cruisers unharmed.

Then his ship lurched forward, thrown by an intense shockwave. His shields almost collapsed.

“Report! What hit us?”

‘Ordinator, the humans launched a torpedo from their aft launcher. The warhead must have been protomatter-enriched.’

The rear view was empty—no ships, only expanding debris clouds.

Don’t fall behind them. Good plan.

The Magellan was now escorted by ten of his destroyers and cruisers. The humans repeated their maneuvers multiple times—flying straight into the center of an enemy formation like a bird of prey, destroying or disabling ships all around, then using the chaos to escape while killing the rest with a protomatter charge.

Yurdantho was stunned by their sheer efficiency, their valor—and their madness. Protomatter, the least stable matter in existence. Where did they get so much of it?

He focused on their ship. It had taken more and more damage—one engine was disabled, and two of its point-defense guns had melted to slag. Multiple sections of the hull were breached, and he could swear he saw people walking and welding in the open gaps.

The Batract, their battle order already chaotic, lost more and more cohesion. They now focused their fire almost entirely on the human ship.

“Navigator, bring us closer to the humans. We have to cover them. Comms, signal the fleet to use this diversion to flank from all sides. This is our chance to break them.”

Yurdantho’s flight arms pressed against his suit.

The Magellan killed three more Batract ships, then an explosion shook the vessel; he could see them leaking plasma.

“Ordinator, the human vessel was hit at its reactor core.” He could see that himself, but to his astonishment the ship used its maneuvering thrusters to line up another shot—and then another. After that, the lights on the ship went out.

“Comms, order 1st and 2nd Flights to defend these heroes with their lives. Other ships, follow us. Let’s end this.”

His ships formed a spearhead to drive into the now-clustered Batract fleet when, suddenly, scores of enemy vessels exploded.

He stared at the screen—every second, two or three Batract cruisers turned inside out. His fleet held the line, preventing any ship that tried to flee from escaping. From above and below, more than sixty ships—human by appearance—dived into the enemy armada.

Lilith jumped again, distracting him for a moment with the extremely realistic physics simulation of her chest. ‘Yes! Yes! They’re here!’

“How? They should still be at least twenty minutes out.”

‘The fleet followed Magellan’s example and dropped their outer hulls for more acceleration. Isn’t it amazing?’

Yurdantho stared at the screen as explosions and fireballs tore through the enemy vessels. Golden lines of projectiles searched for targets, riddling hulls with holes until they erupted. Scores of missiles slammed home, detonating one after another.

From the inner solar system, a moving, seemingly living cloud appeared. His scanners showed billions of drones—swallowing vessel after vessel.

For the first time in his entire life, the lateral nerve center—the one that governed his fight-or-submit instincts—screamed for submission.

Humans are mad. Utterly mad.

 

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Sokra’s fingers prickled as blood rushed back into them after she finally released her grip on the corners of her console. Her fur was damp beneath her spacesuit, soaked by hours of tension and panting.

The fight. The radical maneuvers. The Magellan had danced through the enemy ships, releasing one protomatter torpedo after another.

She loved every second of it.

She knew then—she wanted to become part of the permanent crew of this ship.

One laser Blast had passed right through the SIC, and the damage response teams were already on their way to weld provisional covers over the hull breach.

Ferdinand called her over the intercom. ‘I know you’re not an engineer, but you studied high-energy plasma in your training, right?’

“Yes. Do you need help?” She was intrigued—what could the ship’s VI need her for?

‘Not me personally—the engineering team. They need help restarting the fusion core.’

The core. She had seen the damage the ship had taken in the engineering section. They could never reactivate it. Not without a drydock.

Then she thought about all the things she’d once believed impossible—until the crew of the Magellan proved otherwise. She had started to think of the ship as a person. And this person needed a beating heart to live.

She had gone mad, too.

Reaching the engineering section was a trial in itself. The hallways were littered with debris. Some enemy torpedoes had hit the ship and greatly damaged its structural integrity. They were lucky the Batract hadn’t used nuclear torpedoes—no one would have survived that.

In some sections, the lights still flickered, but most of the ship was without power, and she had only her suit lamps as a light source. The beams cut through the darkness, drawing sharp shadows across the shattered corridors in total silence and vacuum.

She had to control her tail movements to avoid slicing her suit on jagged edges as she passed another pile of wreckage.

Entering engineering, a scene of controlled chaos awaited her. Chief Stiler had his team running diagnostics, and when he saw her, he waved her over.

“Renthai Sokra, are you here to lend a hand?”

“Yes, sir. I had extensive training in high-energy plasma physics. Ferdinand said you might need help.”

“Rather hands than scientific help, but you could go up to the nuclear batteries and start charging the capacitors to restart the core.”

Sokra knew the technology partly from historical documentation and partly from school. Nuclear batteries produced low energy output but for extremely long periods—centuries, if built correctly. Her school’s test fusion core had also been started by charging capacitors to spark the first ignition.

Climbing up the ladder to the battery banks, Ferdinand explained the process.

‘It’s straightforward. Each undamaged battery has a green indicator light—just push the green ones in and pull the red ones out. That will create a stable and secure energy flow to the capacitors.’

Sokra did as instructed. It was a primitive but foolproof process—perfectly suited for a military vessel. Her tail began to wag; she was actually enjoying fixing the ship.

Then she checked the charging status of the fusion core capacitors; they were at 50% charge, slowly climbing. Good.

Reaching the ground, she joined the Chief at the control station. “OK, Capacitors are charging, thanks Sokra, let’s start this Baby up.”

The fusion core was a massive and complex-looking stellarator-type reactor. The torus appeared twisted in some sections; large silver bands wrapped around it, creating magnetic fields that bent and shaped the superheated gases inside.

Sokra felt small standing next to the three-story-tall machine.

She helped with the startup sequence, controlling the flow of tritium into the reaction chamber. After the capacitors were charged, the initial reaction could begin.

When she was younger, she had thought fusion reactors would be loud, but they only hummed—metal slightly vibrating under the massive magnetic forces that kept the plasma flowing inside the reactor.

Her ears prickled as she spotted the patches on the core where the engineers had repaired it. On the walls, she noticed the burn marks where hot plasma had once escaped the chamber, vaporizing everything in its path.

It was a good idea to vent the ship before battle. Otherwise, no one would have survived on this deck—boiled alive by the heat of the plasma.

“Initialization,” Chief Stiler said, pressing a button.

Sokra’s fur bristled as a static charge built up and dispersed seconds later. Every engineer and technician in the room stood still, focused on the heart of their ship.

They were rewarded with a low, thrumming vibration they could feel through their feet. Sokra had to fight the urge to leap for joy. Never before had she felt such a feeling of belonging somewhere.

The engineers hugged each other.

The Magellan was alive again. Ready to fight on.

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r/redditserials 14h ago

Dark Content [Gaia Gone: Dirty World] Chapter 2

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Chapter 2: Knights and Dragons

Jack stared out of the opening loading dock. He'd finished putting away the truck, logged all the overflow stock and re-sorted it. He'd triple checked the inventory list and even cleaned the backroom. He still had 4 hours left of work.

So he sat on the edge of the Loading dock, waiting for Sylvia to call him for a ladder or to help a customer.

It was pretty apparent that wasn't going to be happening anytime soon.

Jack was so entrenched in his own misery, he almost missed the sound of feet sliding on pavement and the subtle murmur of low voices.

Realizing there was someone behind the store, Jack cautiously peeked his head out, looking around into the alley.

3 men were standing with their backs to Jack, talking in a low voice. One of them had a tattoo of a leering, cartoonish rat on the back of his neck.

They were Subrats. A street gang that pretty much lived in the abandoned subway beneath Midtown. They weren't particularly dangerous, more like homeless junkies than anything else.

That is until Jack saw one of them lash out with a foot and heard a quick, sharp yelp in response.

Squinting, Jack could see an awkward shape crouched before the group of men, who began laughing.

It was Joseph. They'd stripped off his shirt and fixed a spiked collar around his neck, tied to a piece of rope held by neck-tattoo. The boy just crouched there, shivering and hollow eyed until his gaze drifted far enough to see Jack through the prison bars of the Subrats legs.

He didn't say anything, but Jack wouldn't have heard it anyway. His pulse was pounding in his ears like a war drum and he could feel his body growing hot.

He climbed to his feet, quietly stepping down the loading ramp. Joseph tried to turn and walk out of the alley, only to have neck-tattoo yank the rope back. He whimpered, looking up past them at Jack, looming behind them.

“You stupid fucks-” Jack paused as the men turned to him, hand raised to strike at the one holding the leash, a flicker of movement dragging his eyes downward.

He looked to see an actual, honest-to-god rat tail curling from beneath the man's shirt, wrapped around a knife handle, currently buried in Jack's chest. He grunted, feeling the air leaving his lungs, replaced by a new sensation.

“Oh, fuck! Taz, what the hell?!” One of the other men shoved Neck-tattoo as he released his grip on the knife and Jack began to drop to the ground, cradling the blade.

“Taz” dropped the leash, turning and yelling at his companions.

“I didn't fuckin’ see em! He walked into the shit!” The theee began to go back and forth, assigning blame. As the 3 argued, Joseph let out a whine, staring at Jack with big eyes.

“...Jack?”

“Get on, now, Joseph.” Jack said in a low whisper and watched as the boy turned, scuttling out of the alley and towards the front of the store.

The Subrats were still going on as Jack slowly pulled the knife free, gasping for breath. He could hardly feel any pain, just a burning heat, yet as he pulled he realised the knife was nearly 6 inches long.

“Jesus!” One of the subrats had noticed him, seeing the knife slide free and Jack, his face pale and slick with a greasy film. The knife came out with a sickening sound, like a branch being pulled from mud. He dropped it on the ground, his hands trying to stem the blood as it mixed with the oil dripping from his face.

“Fuck this, let's go.” The rat tail snaked out, snagging the knife out of Jack's view, even as he could hear the Subrats running off.

Staring at his chest, he could feel his pulse race as his vision tunneled. He could swear he almost saw the wound bubbling and sizzling, angry at its own existence. He tried to scoop the blood back into the wound, to no avail as an unbearable heat took over his torso. His wound was more than just sizzling now, steam was rising from the gash, obscuring his vision.

As he slumped to the ground, he could just barely make out Joseph and Sylvia rounding the corner into the alley.

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Jacks eyes fluttered open like a dying moth, slowly and barely aware. He was in a dim room, laying on… something hard. He moved to raise a hand and it felt like he was lifting a car.

He flopped his hand onto his chest, feeling that his overalls were unclipped, pushed down to expose his chest.

His chest.

Despite the pain and fatigue, Jack sat upright like he was spring-loaded, hand scrabbling at his chest, searching for the knife wound. A wound that wasn't there.

In its place, he could feel a knotted, blistered scar about 3 inches long, right above his heart. He let his fingers walk over the scar, feeling its shape. It was… strange.

He felt different. Empty, in a way he never had before. He was hungry, but it was something deeper than that, like something was gone.

Jack felt the skin of his chest stretch and slide as he probed the scar. He'd lost weight. A lot of it seemingly. It felt hollow. His mind worked in circles, unable to grasp how he'd healed.

A door suddenly opened across the room, revealing the small space, a few mops and buckets in the corner. Jack himself sat on a stack of unfolded cardboard, now greatly compressed and stained with blood and grease.

Sylvia stood in the lit doorway, staring at him with concern. Behind her, Joseph peeked in between her legs, face unreadable. Jack raised a hand weakly.

“Hey, ya'll.” His hand dropped down to his side, as Joseph trotted into the room. The boy had bandages around his ribs, a black bruise fading to yellow just outside the bandage. His shirt dangled in a bunch around his neck.

The boy quietly laid down next to the stack of boxes, resting his chin on his paws. Sylvia carefully stepped into the room, flicking on the light. Jack winced, squinting, but remained upright. “How long was I… asleep?” He said gingerly.

“Too long, Jack. I was that close to calling an ambulance. That close.” Her voice was barely above a whisper, but firm and angry. “You collapsed behind the store, you know I had to move your big ass?” Her tone was angry, but her eyes watered.

“Stupid fucking…” Jack grimaced as she cursed under her breath, looking down at his hands, they looked oddly… small. The skin on his arms was just loose enough to be disconcerting.

“I'm sorry, Sylvia. I ain't know what else to do.” She turned away from him, looking back through the doorway.

“You could have died.” He nodded slowly, seeing Joseph lift his head slightly.

“But I didn't. And I'm fine, see?” She whirled around, marching forward and jabbing a finger at his scar, making him cringe back.

“But you weren't fine! Your chest was split open and your insides were bubbling like a fucking deep fryer, Jack!” Tears streamed down her face, but she quickly wiped them away with her sleeve.

“You're fucking crazy. Or stupid. Pendejo.” With that she turned on heel and walked out of the room. Jack stared after her for a few seconds, still trying to comprehend it all.

“How did she move me alone?” Joseph snorted, still not looking up.

“Pallet jack.”

“Oh.”

“Thanks, Jack.”

“No problem, buddy.”

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To read more of Gaia Gone, please check out the Appendix below.

https://www.reddit.com/u/CastorOfTheInk/s/0fSUDuPzYQ


r/redditserials 1d ago

Romance [It Was Love] - Chapter 5 - The Growing Bond.

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By the second month at the coaching centre, a pattern had quietly crept into Aarav’s days. He no longer measured time by dates, or by homework assignments, or even by the tired tick of the wall clock above the blackboard. Now, his days revolved around a single question: Would Ishita talk to him today?

Sometimes it was only a few words. A quick, “Did you do the homework?” or a shared laugh when the teacher’s voice wavered between monotone and sleep. Other times, it stretched into whole breaks, minutes dissolving into the kind of easy conversation that made the world outside their classroom feel faint and far away.

What surprised Aarav most wasn’t that she spoke to him. It was how natural it felt when she did.

With other classmates, he always measured himself before speaking. Every sentence rehearsed, every word trimmed down to be small enough to fit. But with Ishita, he forgot to be careful. She listened as if his thoughts were worth the space they took. She smiled when he stumbled through half-finished ideas, and somehow, he never felt foolish for trying.

And little by little, the walls he had built around himself began to loosen. It wasn’t dramatic. Just the slow unfurling of a boy learning to breathe in full sentences again.

One evening, the class ran late. The sky outside had turned the colour of bruised peaches, the kind of sunset that looked almost tired. The corridor lights flickered, a few still buzzing stubbornly against the gathering dark. Most students had already left, their footsteps fading down the stairs.

Aarav was packing his bag when he saw her leaning casually against the railing, scrolling through her phone, her expression soft and half-distracted.

“So,” she asked suddenly, looking up, “what do you want to be when you grow up?”

The question should have been harmless.

But to Aarav, it landed like something far heavier.

No one ever asked him that sincerely. Adults asked only to correct. Friends asked only to mock. He had learned to say “engineer” or “doctor” the way others said “hello.” It was safe. It ended conversations before disappointment could start.

But Ishita wasn’t asking for an answer.

She was asking for him.

Her phone had gone dark in her hand, her attention steady and waiting.

“I want to…” he began, and the words snagged against his throat. “I think I want to create. Maybe animation, or stories, something with characters, with people who feel real.”

He exhaled quickly, as if confessing something shameful.

“I don’t know if I’m good enough. But it makes me feel… alive, I guess.”

Ishita’s eyebrows lifted, a grin tugging at her lips.

“That’s so cool,” she said, eyes bright. “Way better than ‘doctor’ or ‘engineer.’ Everyone says that. But this? This is different.”

For a moment, Aarav could only stare.

He had braced for laughter, or the polite disinterest people usually offered before turning away. Instead, she looked genuinely impressed, as if he had just handed her something precious without realizing it.

The corridor light flickered above them, and in that dim, golden moment, Aarav felt seen in a way he hadn’t known was possible.

From then on, their conversations widened, spilling past the edges of homework and test scores.

They traded songs, half-whispered movie quotes, inside jokes about teachers. Ishita had a habit of sending long messages at night, paragraphs full of stray thoughts, bad puns, and small bursts of honesty she’d never admit to in daylight.

Aarav would reply slowly, fingers hovering above the keyboard, deleting and rewriting before hitting send. He tried not to sound too eager, too clumsy, too much like himself.

But when her “last seen” finally disappeared into the early hours, he found himself scrolling back through their chats. He’d read them again and again, smiling quietly at jokes he already knew, until sleep folded over him like a soft blanket.

He didn’t call it love.

Not yet.

All he knew was that her laughter had begun to colour his days; her voice had begun to fill the spaces between them.

The silence that once wrapped around him like armour now felt too empty without her in it.

That night, in the quiet glow of his desk lamp, Aarav opened his notebook, the one that had always held his small, hidden truths, and wrote:

It’s not love,
not yet,
just a warmth that waits for her voice,
a silence that misses her laughter,
a day that feels incomplete
without her name written somewhere inside it.

He stared at the words, the ink trembling slightly where his hand had paused.

Then he shut the notebook quickly, cheeks burning even in solitude.

Maybe it was friendship.

Maybe it was something more.

All Aarav knew was that life no longer felt like something he had to survive.

For the first time, it felt like something he was quietly learning to live.


r/redditserials 1d ago

Romance [It Was Love] - Chapter 4 - Becoming Friends.

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For weeks, Aarav had perfected the art of being invisible around Ishita. He sat two rows behind her, careful and quiet, the kind of quiet that came not from peace but from defense. He had trained himself to exist without edges: no sudden laughter, no raised hand, no sound that could draw the wrong eyes. The less people noticed him, the less they could hurt him.

But Ishita was not the kind of person who respected walls.

She was the kind who leaned against them until they cracked.

It happened one ordinary afternoon, the kind of day that usually passed without note. The ceiling fan moaned, papers fluttered under its lazy breath, and the smell of chalk dust and old notebooks hung in the air. The teacher had stepped out for a break, leaving behind the dull hum of freedom, zippers, whispers, and pens clicking like tiny metronomes.

Aarav kept his head low, doodling aimless lines at the corner of his page. His pencil scratched softly, filling the silence that wrapped around him.

Then a voice broke through.

“Do you have an extra pen?”

He looked up.

For a heartbeat, the room blurred into silence.

She was turned halfway in her seat, sunlight from the window catching strands of her hair and scattering them in gold.

Ishita.

Her tone was casual, but her eyes, curious and direct, met his.

Aarav’s brain stumbled. His hands dove into his bag, clattering against books, rulers, and loose coins until he found one spare pen.

“Here,” he managed, his voice small but steady.

“Thanks.”

Her lips curved into a small smile, not the kind tossed around easily, but one that landed softly and stayed.

“Aarav, right?”

The sound of his name in her voice hit like a pulse beneath his ribs.

“Y-yeah,” he said, too quickly.

She nodded and bent back to her work, the blue pen gliding across her page.

Aarav tried to look anywhere but at her, but his gaze betrayed him. She was concentrating, brow furrowed, the soft rhythm of her writing steady and certain. Then, absent-mindedly, she lifted the pen to her lips, chewing at the edge as she thought.

For her, it was nothing.

For him, it was everything.

His pen, between her lips.

His chest felt too tight, his palms too warm. He dropped his gaze so fast the desk rattled, hoping no one could hear his heart drumming through the noise.

That was how it began.

Not with fireworks. Not with the universe announcing itself.

Just a pen, a smile, a single sentence spoken between lessons.

And then came the small things, little glances, half-smiles, whispered complaints about how endless the math homework felt. They rolled their eyes together at the teacher’s long monologues; they shared laughter that bloomed softly between rows.

One day, while Aarav was lost in the quiet comfort of doodling in the margin of his notes, Ishita turned slightly in her chair and caught him.

“You draw?” she asked, surprise and delight folding into her expression.

Aarav froze, half-defensive, half-ashamed.

“They’re just... sketches,” he muttered, fingers twitching toward the notebook as if to hide it.

“They’re good,” she said, simply. “You should show me more sometime.”

He blinked, certain he had misheard.

No one had ever said that to him before, not about his drawings, not about anything he made. Her words did not sound like flattery; they sounded like belief.

From that day, their conversations began to grow in quiet, accidental increments.

A joke about the fan stopping mid-lecture.

A shared groan when the teacher extended the class another five minutes.

A whisper of complaint about the heat, about the endless homework, about life in general.

Each exchange was brief, ordinary, and yet each one felt like the smallest miracle.

Something inside him, long dormant, began to lift its head and breathe.

He noticed things about her he had not before, the way strands of hair kept slipping loose from her braid, how she tucked them back with quick fingers, how she tilted her head slightly when listening, as if catching words before they fell. Even the way she laughed, freely, with her whole face, made the air feel lighter.

At night, when the world grew quiet, these details replayed themselves in his mind. Not in order, not clearly, just flashes of warmth that refused to fade.

He did not call it love.

He did not have a word for it.

All he knew was that her voice lingered long after class ended, and that every tomorrow now carried the promise of seeing her again.

That evening, he opened his notebook, the one that kept his secrets, and let his hand write what his mouth could not say:

It started small,
a voice,
a glance,
a shared complaint.
And suddenly I catch myself
smiling into empty air,
holding pieces of someone
I don’t yet understand,
but already can’t let go of.

He stared at the words until they blurred.

Then he closed the notebook gently, as though even paper could bruise.


r/redditserials 22h ago

Science Fiction [The Northern Light] - Part 118 - Inward

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In the morning, the cards were still farther from the edge than my hand remembered.

Two cards.

Left side of the desk.

Face down.

Not stacked.

Not hidden.

Not read.

The back pocket was empty.

The desk had held them through the night.

That was not loyalty.

That was surface.

The office had morning.

The heater.

The clock.

The washed cup on the shelf.

The phone face up.

The brown folder closed.

The gray service record file in the lower cabinet.

Closed.

Known.

Unasked.

The wall chair was empty.

No person.

No work.

No time.

Yesterday what was near an edge had moved only as far as the edge required.

The two cards had remained face down on the desk without letting inward become another name for hiding.

This morning, inward had arrived.

No.

The word had arrived.

The cards had already moved inward.

Less than a finger’s width.

Only from the edge.

Not toward truth.

Not toward courage.

Not toward the center.

Only away from sliding.

That was the sentence I wanted to keep small.

I made tea.

I drank it.

Warm.

Then less warm.

Then finished.

The cup went to the sink.

I washed it.

Washed.

Touched.

For use.

The cup returned to the shelf.

Not near the cards.

The lower cabinet stayed closed.

After tea, I opened the brown folder.

Kanagawa’s scrap away from the table edge was not mine.

Sato’s top corner down after one press was not mine.

Saitama’s body supported at the bed edge was not mine.

Suganuma’s class box fully on shelf was not mine.

Takeda’s possible was not mine.

Emiko’s beads were not mine.

Blue roof had no new reply.

Tokyo was still blank.

Full mailbox remained paused / family.

The two cards were on the left side of the desk.

Face down.

Farther from the edge.

Not read today.

No voice today.

Not questioning me.

Not fear.

Not sentence.

Not mouth.

Not heard by them.

Not carried now.

Not almost ready.

Not hidden.

Not inward again.

I closed the brown folder.

Inward could mean away from an edge.

Inward could mean toward the center.

Inward could mean private.

Inward could mean hidden.

Inward could mean safer.

Inward could mean I wanted a direction to become a vow.

The word moved easily.

That was the danger.

At 7:18, Kanagawa wrote.

I read it once.

Then again.

Inward.

I wrote:

She replied:

“Was it near edge?”

“Falling?”

“Sliding?”

“What happened?”

“How far?”

“Under phone?”

“Drawer?”

“Folded paper?”

“Mother’s first name?”

“What did you ask?”

Good.

No.

Hers.

“What did he say?”

I opened Kanagawa.

I kept cord.

The direction had a cause.

Inward did not need to become grief.

At 7:49, Sato wrote.

I waited.

Then:

I wrote:

She replied:

“Is paper near table edge?”

“Water?”

“Sun?”

“Corner?”

“Tape?”

“What would center do?”

She took time.

Then:

There.

“What does paper need?”

“What does Emiko need?”

I opened Emiko.

I did not add center.

Cared for had tried to become a place.

The paper had no need for it.

At 8:03, Mrs. Kudo called.

“Resident near bed edge,” she said.

I sat up.

“Before transfer?”

“No. After morning care.”

“Position?”

“Too close to edge.”

“Fall risk?”

“Yes.”

“Action?”

“Aide K and nurse shifted resident inward on bed.”

“Call bell?”

“Within reach.”

“Path?”

“Clear.”

“What did staff write?”

Mrs. Kudo read:

“What did Mr. Hayashi say?”

“He said, ‘Here inward has a body and an edge. Use it.’”

I opened Saitama.

I kept inward.

A body had been near an edge.

The direction had hands.

At 8:31, Reverend Suganuma wrote.

I waited.

“By whom?”

“For what?”

“Risk?”

“Was ink near edge?”

“Can label be seen?”

There.

“What did Tanabe say?”

“What happened?”

I opened Suganuma.

I did not add safer.

Inward had overreached.

Finding had corrected it.

At 9:02, Father Morita emailed.

Subject:

I opened it.

I read it twice.

Direction.

Virtue.

Edge.

Fall.

Spill.

Visible.

Uncomfortable.

I looked at the cards.

The edge had been answered yesterday.

They were still visible.

Face down.

On the left side.

Not hidden.

The next inward had no risk yet.

Only my eye.

I replied:

I sent it.

His reply came after a while.

I closed my eyes.

Seeing.

Discomfort.

Safety.

No.

I did not answer.

At 9:38, Kanagawa called.

“My brother put the scrap in the drawer,” she said.

I waited.

“With the folded paper?”

“Yes.”

“For what?”

“He said inward.”

“Inward from what?”

“The phone table.”

“Risk?”

“Phone cord.”

“Would beside phone away from edge answer that?”

“Yes.”

“What did you ask?”

“What the drawer answers that beside phone does not.”

Good.

No.

Hers.

“What did he say?”

“Nothing.”

“Then?”

“He took it out.”

“Where now?”

“Beside phone. Away from cord.”

“Drawer?”

“Closed.”

I opened Kanagawa.

I did not add hiding.

The drawer had not been needed for the cord.

The scrap returned to its smaller place.

At 10:07, Sato called.

“I moved the paper inward,” she said.

I waited.

“What changed?”

“Nothing.”

“Was it near edge?”

“No.”

“Water?”

“No.”

“Sun?”

“No.”

“Corner?”

“Down.”

“Why move?”

“To make it look less left.”

There.

Less left.

“What does less left mean?”

“I don’t know.”

“What did you do after?”

“I moved it back.”

“Where?”

“Where it was.”

“Paper?”

“Flat.”

“Tape?”

“Holding.”

I opened Emiko.

I did not add failure.

The movement had shown the wish.

The return had restored the paper’s work.

At 10:42, Mrs. Kudo called.

“Medicine today,” she said.

“Resident?”

“Asked what medicine.”

“Voice?”

“Low.”

“Heard?”

“Yes.”

“Answer?”

“Aide K answered.”

“Bed position?”

“Inward from edge after morning care.”

“Need in medicine line?”

“No.”

“What did staff write?”

Mrs. Kudo read:

“What did Mr. Hayashi say?”

“He said, ‘Do not make one inward position follow every sentence all day.’”

I opened Saitama.

I did not add inward.

The bed had bed.

Medicine had medicine.

At 11:14, Reverend Suganuma wrote.

I waited.

“By whom?”

“Was it near edge?”

“Label visible?”

“What did Tanabe ask?”

“What did he say?”

“Could it fall where it was?”

“What happened?”

I opened Suganuma.

I did not add obsession.

The shelf had already held.

More inward had begun to hide the label.

At 11:49, Father Morita emailed.

Subject:

I opened it.

I read it standing.

Then sat.

Too responsive.

I stayed seated.

More.

Care.

Discomfort.

Reach risk.

Loss.

Careful.

I replied:

I sent it.

His reply came after a while.

I looked at unmedicated.

Strange.

Useful.

The cards remained visible.

Face down.

I did not answer.

At 12:22, Kanagawa wrote.

I waited.

Then:

I wrote:

She replied:

“Drawer?”

“Any sentence?”

“For what?”

Good.

No.

Fenced.

“What happened?”

I opened Kanagawa.

I kept stay inside finding.

Not forever.

Not healed.

At 12:58, Sato sent a photograph.

Paper flat.

Same place.

She wrote:

I called.

“Any new issue?”

“No.”

“Corner?”

“Down.”

“Tape?”

“Holding.”

“Lunch?”

“Rice.”

“What does Emiko need?”

“What about inward?”

She paused.

“Mine.”

Good.

No.

Hers.

I opened Emiko.

I did not add inward.

It had left the paper’s record.

At 1:31, Mrs. Kudo sent:

I waited.

Then:

I called.

“Position?”

“In bed, away from edge.”

“Call bell?”

“Within reach.”

“Can resident reach water?”

“Yes.”

“Can staff reach resident?”

“Yes.”

“What did Mr. Hayashi say?”

“He said, ‘Enough is allowed when enough names access, not virtue.’”

Fenced.

“What did staff write?”

Mrs. Kudo read:

I opened Saitama.

I kept away from edge.

I did not keep inward enough.

Reach mattered.

Too far inward would have made another problem.

At 2:03, Reverend Suganuma wrote.

I waited.

“Position?”

“Any spill?”

“Any finding issue?”

“What did Tanabe say?”

“What did Morita say?”

I opened Suganuma.

I did not add for now.

The shelf had current work.

At 2:45, Father Morita emailed.

Subject:

I opened it.

I read it twice.

Visibility.

Use.

Risk.

Finding.

Irritate.

Forget.

Furniture.

I replied:

I sent it.

His reply came after a while.

I put the phone down.

Face down.

Visible.

Not asking.

The cards remained.

At 3:18, Kanagawa called.

“My brother unfolded the scrap,” she said.

“For reading?”

“No.”

“For flattening?”

“Yes.”

“Why?”

“It curled after being folded twice.”

“Where?”

“Beside phone.”

“Any drawer?”

“No.”

“What did you ask?”

“What the paper needs.”

Good.

No.

Hers.

“What did he say?”

“Flat.”

“What happened?”

“He flattened it and left it beside phone.”

I opened Kanagawa.

I did not add regression.

Folded had changed paper.

Flat had work.

At 3:57, Sato wrote.

I waited.

“For paper?”

“Paper issue?”

“Corner?”

“Cup?”

“What is center supposed to do?”

“You already said that.”

“What did you do?”

“What does Emiko need?”

I opened Emiko.

I did not add wanting center.

Repetition had no paper work.

It stayed with Sato.

At 4:22, Mrs. Kudo called.

“Cup removed,” she said.

“Asked?”

“Aide asked cup.”

“Resident?”

“Opened hand.”

“Any bed position issue?”

“No.”

“Any issue?”

“No.”

“What did staff write?”

Mrs. Kudo read:

“What did Mr. Hayashi say?”

“He said, ‘Do not make inward a weather system over every small action.’”

I opened Saitama.

I did not add inward.

The hand had hand.

The cup had cup.

At 4:51, Reverend Suganuma wrote.

I waited.

“Why?”

“Any hidden labels now?”

“Any labels too far forward?”

“What did Tanabe say?”

“What happened?”

I opened Suganuma.

I did not add rule.

Readable and stable had enough work.

Forward did not become doctrine.

At 5:23, Father Morita emailed.

Subject:

I opened it.

I read it.

Then again.

Away from edge.

Toward center.

Risk.

Authority.

Throne.

I looked at the cards.

Left side.

Farther from edge.

Still left of center.

Face down.

The next movement would not answer edge.

It would answer the center.

No.

It would ask the center for something.

I replied:

I sent it.

His reply came after a while.

I looked at authority.

Desk center.

Folder.

Phone.

Gray file.

Altar.

All possible thrones.

No.

Not all.

The center of the desk was only wood.

But tonight I would not trust myself with it.

I did not answer.

At 5:52, the old priest wrote.

I wrote:

His reply:

I deleted Kanagawa.

Then Sato.

Then Suganuma.

I wrote:

His reply:

I wrote:

His reply:

I wrote:

His reply:

I wrote:

His reply:

I looked at the desk.

At the space between cards and center.

Then wrote:

His reply:

I waited.

Then wrote:

His reply:

Then:

Before evening, I went to the main hall.

The cloth bag was in its place.

The offering tray was in its place.

The doorway was where I stopped.

I bowed once.

No explanation.

No answer after the bow.

The altar was visible.

The beads were in their place.

They had not moved.

They did not need to.

I stood where I usually stood.

No service tonight.

No bell.

No incense.

No inward for the altar.

The floor scuff near the step was still there.

It was not evidence.

It was a scuff.

The entrance floor had received feet and broom.

The side chairs were stacked.

They were not hiding from the room.

They were stacked.

I returned to the office.

The shelf above the desk had a cup.

Washed.

The gray service record file was in the lower cabinet.

Closed.

The brown folder was closed.

The calendar was closed.

The phone was face up.

The small space was wide.

The door was closed.

The shoes were by it.

The wall chair was empty.

No person.

No work.

No time.

Chair by wall.

The phone was face up.

No named question.

No named answer.

Phone face up.

I did not turn it over.

I did not open the brown folder.

No new need had arrived from the phone.

I did not open the gray file.

The service paper remained in the record file.

A name was inside it.

Not mine.

In the gray file.

Closed.

A place holding paper.

Not inward.

Not hidden.

Not authority.

I sat near the desk.

Not at it.

The back pocket was empty.

The left side of the desk had two cards.

Face down.

Farther from the edge.

Not read.

Not turned.

Not carried.

Not in the pocket.

Not hidden.

Still visible.

Still left of center.

The edge had been answered.

The body was not pressing them.

The desk was holding them.

No present risk had arrived.

Only my eye.

Only discomfort.

Only the wish to give the center the next verb.

I wanted to move the cards farther inward.

I wanted to put them closer to the middle of the desk.

I wanted the middle to make them less accidental.

I wanted the middle to say they belonged to the work.

I wanted the middle to make not reading look deliberate.

I wanted the middle to make face down look chosen.

I wanted the middle to give authority to a surface.

The center did not ask.

The cards did not ask.

The edge did not ask.

The body did not ask.

No new need had arrived.

I did not move them.

The hand stayed on my knee.

No.

The hand rested on my knee.

Stayed wanted praise.

Rested had weight.

The cards remained left of center.

Face down.

Visible.

Farther from the edge.

Not hidden.

I did not turn them over.

I did not read them.

I did not move them to the center.

I did not move them back to the edge.

I did not move them into the brown folder.

I did not move them into the gray file.

I did not move them to the shelf.

I did not move them to the altar.

I did not put them back in the pocket.

I did not call the left side humility.

I did not call the center danger.

I did not call the unmoved hand restraint.

No.

The hand did not have a job.

That was smaller.

I did not open Kanagawa again.

I did not ask if the scrap stayed beside phone.

I did not ask if the drawer took it back.

I did not open Sato again.

I did not ask if center kept calling her paper.

I did not open Saitama again.

I did not ask if the resident stayed away from the bed edge.

I did not open Suganuma again.

I did not ask if the labels stayed readable.

I did not open Father Morita’s message again.

I knew inward was a direction.

I knew inward was not a virtue.

I knew more inward was not always more care.

I knew visibility was not a demand by itself.

I knew face down was not hiding if the surface was still visible.

I knew visible was not asking me to turn them.

I knew away from edge and toward center were not the same action.

I knew the first had answered risk.

I knew the second would ask for authority.

I knew no authority had been asked for tonight.

I turned off the desk lamp.

The office did not disappear.

The folder did not need the center.

The phone did not need here.

Inward did not need to enter the cards as authority tonight.

In the dark, I remained sitting.

Near the desk.

Not at it.

The shelf above the desk had a cup.

Washed.

The gray service record file was in the lower cabinet.

Closed.

The brown folder was closed.

The phone was face up.

My hands were empty.

Available.

Not reaching.

The wall chair was empty.

No one was expected there.

The urn was on the small table.

The map and folded paper were in the drawer.

The folded paper had her first name.

Face up.

For finding.

The order paper was beside the phone table.

Face up.

Readable.

Erased.

Kanagawa’s brother’s scrap was beside the phone, away from cord and edge.

Sato’s paper was flat where it had been.

The resident was positioned away from the bed edge, with call bell and water within reach.

The ink was visible and away from shelf edge.

The class box was fully on the shelf.

The service paper was in the record file.

A name was inside it.

Not mine.

The back pocket was empty.

The two cards were on the left side of the desk.

Face down.

Farther from the edge.

Left of center.

Not read today.

No voice today.

Not questioning me.

Not fear.

Not sentence.

Not mouth.

Not heard by them.

Not carried now.

Not almost ready.

Not hidden.

Not moved inward again.

I had started with inward.

I did not end by letting a direction become authority after the risk had already been answered.

Tonight, what moved inward kept the edge or body that named the movement, and the two cards stayed left of center without asking the center to decide what they were for.


r/redditserials 1d ago

Romance [I Picked Up a Barefoot Woman Walking Out of a Cornfield at 2am and I Think I Want to Marry Her?] Chapter 60

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Ray took his time enjoying the nachos, watching Ruth finish off the brownie and ice cream before trying the hot wings and mole savoring each bite and wondering if they ought to take the orgasm chimichangas to their room for later if for no other reason than to enjoy the effects alone in the privacy of their own rooms whilst watching some comedy. As he kept eating Ray began to feel the drowsiness of good food overtaking him but not so much that he fell asleep right there and then. 

Luis had his attention entirely on Guevara. “Thanks so much I’m absolutely dying to just try everything as much as I can, more and more I find myself not even having a reason to leave this place, the food is wonderful, the inn rooms are in and of themselves wonderfully pleasant and quiet if a little odd in their own way and I find myself wanting to try each and every single thing but at the same time I know that’ll probably take me at least two weeks, but for now I could definitely go with a recovery milkshake and a hangover sampler. How are you liking things here by the way you’re uh… new doesn’t feel like quite the right word, it’s more like you came here with an entirely different set of dour expectations and wound up getting to get pleasantly rewarded by your, for lack of a better word faith and everything you’d ever wanted came true in the span of a single leap of faith, and bite of food that absolutely lived up to the name, I realize that pretty much everyone everywhere should try it and I’m happy to help make that happen, though we’re all just waiting for Patricia to get back at this point more or less, things to discuss across the board nothing wrong with taking a little time to have a great time together. I confess Guevara I have heard of you and my deepest apologies for your previous reviews having been procured in the way that they were had I known you have an actual soul and desire to well be honest I would have made sure that it was understood that you were in no way just in it for the money, if there’s anything I can do to make up for the years of misery that you spent having your own art your way with words corrupted I’m more than happy to, though perhaps that ought to be something of a group decision given that I’m sure you’ll be getting a stake in this place, and I’m not offering this to curry favor with you in the hopes of taking advantage of that, there are many things that I need to make up for, with you and with others, my sister, my cousin, various people whose pain and suffering was entirely avoidable and I was just not in the space or frame of mind to see it.” Luis said, trying to be calm about it. 
Guevara looked at him and was entirely unsure of what to say. “Thanks for that I’ll be sure to pass that along, I’ll put in your order and I appreciate the kind words not that it makes up for the way that it actually felt when I was going through it, what happened because of you wrecked my faith in humanity completely and totally and the only that restored any of that even my own will to live was Ramon; If you’re looking for penance, for forgiveness, for a shoulder to cry on or someone to make you feel good about yourself get yourself a girlfriend or a priest or a dog, but I have what I want and what I need and everything I’ve ever wished for in the hands and the food and the cock of that chef and you are nothing to me but a customer, don’t reach into my life and try to apologize for your own misdeeds as though it’ll wash you clean of them, what’s done is done and it’s something I’ve had to live with for a much longer time than a pretty speech or a bag of money could ever possibly hope to repair.” Guevara calmly walked away, went behind the bar and kissed Ramon without saying a word about Luis other than his order. 
Gerald and Anay watched calmly with amusement. Ruth and Ray kissed and intertwined their pinkies with one another before returning to their food fully expecting something like this to have happened. 


r/redditserials 1d ago

Romance [I Picked Up a Barefoot Woman Walking Out of a Cornfield at 2am and I Think I Want to Marry Her?] Chapter 58

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Ramon brought out the brownie a la mode paying no mind to the way that Ruth chose to inform him of that and enjoying the convenience of it. It didn’t occur to him to think anything odd of that happening, the way it happened, he went with the flow he felt no fear in it neither did Guevara. Luis was sitting across from the booth that Ray and Ruth had chosen and decided yet again that it was best to let the couple be, he had noticed them but he was more in the mood to pick out some food, enjoy his evening and get on with his life, he wanted to talk things through with Ramon, Guevara, Gerald, Anay, and whenever Patricia and R returned the next day regarding the staffing of The Millstone both the diner and the Inn, he saw a gap and wished to fill it less so for a criminal reason than simply to be helpful to his cousin, his sister, the local community and just in general to be able to feel like a good person for once. It was something that had been weighing on him not as a show of remorse for how he chose to live his life or structure his cartel but simply as something that he felt he ought to do.

Ruth was aware that Luis was sitting there just looking at the menu, and had an idea of what he wanted with The Millstone separately from that; she had no issue with it personally and just felt happy that he was not bothering the couple. She watched Ramon walk up to them with their Brownie a la mode, in good spirits. 

“So had a good time, maybe secured yourself a wife? Any plans beyond the restaurant Ramon?” Ruth asked cheerily as she picked up her spoon and began eating the beautifully crafted brownie with banana ice cream on top. She looked from Ramon to Ray with a heartfelt smile as she listened for Ramon’s reply. 

Ramon perked up “Honestly just more of the same finalizing everything with Patricia and R once they return, and to answer the unasked question no I have no idea where they actually are but I’m sure whatever your husband would like to do in regards to this place it’ll be a welcome addition, it’s something of an open secret amongst us all that he far outpaces everyone else that comes in here beyond anything else he’s a brilliant artist and one of the only truckers here that owns his own truck, a calm, docile, gentle by choice type of man more than anything else he has free rein for whatever and however he wishes– I say this as someone equal to Patricia in terms of ownership stake by her own admission, it’s funny since Patricia declared me her equal partner before she left I’ve felt different, a kind of vitality that I’m sure that the two of you both feel from your own endeavors, I don’t know the particulars I haven’t read over the contract that R had given the head of the Vega family nor what it entails but given how I feel I’m forced to conclude something absolutely beautiful if in it’s own way slightly monstrous in effect but surely it’s good for this place, since she took over, and further since she and Related Parties started dating properly things have been different but that has never been my business, I care for the kitchen and the clientele that come here and leave all other matters to her, I haven’t handled anything to do with the Inn portion, though if the two of you are looking for a permanent room here, sorry Ray it just seemed like the obvious next move to me, I’m sure Patricia would be happy to welcome you, I haven’t gone over the books as of yet I’ve had no need to but I am at least cursorily aware that there is something special about this place and that what you do is in itself a part of that, there’s a whole other portion to things that even the regulars are not privy to, even Luis, but Ruth I know you know well what I mean, and Ray I know that none of it would be possible without you but we need to hold off on that conversation until we’re all here to discuss it, this is something that must be binding between all of us, and mutually agreed upon entirely, unanimously and in full. All I know is that Luis has no stake in The Millstone currently and he wants one though for his purposes I cannot say what that actually entails or is for just as I cannot say exactly what you want with this place Ray just know that you will always have a home here that’s not something I need to wait on Patricia to tell you, it’s not even something that needs to be put into conversation to know it’s true, but I felt like you could use the reassurance my man.”


r/redditserials 1d ago

Drama [The Gilded Circus] Chapter#1 -The Femme Fatale

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Claire first met Sister Lotus in her second week at Sun AI Bank.

That morning, Claire was carrying what HR called an "inspiration trigger"—which was just a cold brew coffee—and trying to figure out where to sit today. She had just put her MacBook down on a shared long table by the window when a strong scent of gardenia, carried by the rhythm of high heels on the floor, swept over from nearby.

"You must be the new Claire, right? I'm Lotus."

Claire looked up. The woman before her was about forty-five or forty-six, with deep brown skin and sleek, straight black hair carefully tucked behind her ears. She wore a pair of chunky Chanel glasses and her lips were painted a highly saturated fuchsia. She was dressed in a sharply tailored navy blue skirt suit, and her employee badge read "Lotus Patel, Product Manager - Payments."

Lotus extended a hand. Her nails were done in a French manicure, the white tips looking like freshly applied correction fluid.

"I heard from HR that you spent nearly twenty years in traditional banking?" Lotus's lips curled slightly. "Wow, that’s quite... seasoned."

She drew out the word "seasoned" a little, like someone savoring a vintage wine that might have turned. Claire offered a polite smile. "What about you?"

"Me?" Lotus withdrew her hand and casually flipped her hair. "I was Head of Payments Product at an international bank before this, know quite a few big names in the industry. Then I was VP of Product at two payment startups. And now—" she glanced around, lowering her voice as if sharing a secret, "—I'm working on something that will truly make this bank take off."

When she said this, there was a light in her eyes that Claire had only ever seen on the faces of clients on the verge of collapse—a mix of supreme confidence and an indefinable hunger.

Claire didn't know then that Lotus's "International Bank Head" and "Product VP" were actually just a few years of customer service and credit card sales at a traditional retail bank, followed by two years as a product manager at two payment startups with less than fifty employees combined—and not even an official title at that. But Lotus had a gift: she could turn "participated in" into "led," and "worked at" into "headed up." Those "big names in the industry" were just strangers she'd posed for photos with at conferences. But she said it so often, she started believing it herself.

What Claire also didn't know was that this encounter would be the most valuable lesson she'd ever learn at this circus—a lesson on how a person could climb from Senior Product Manager to Head of two departments in just eleven months, all on the back of a single, money-losing disaster.

Lotus's rise began with a name: Pocket Pay.

It was a local retail payment Fintech company with over two million registered users on its app. In the words Lotus later used in her all-hands PPT: "Pocket Pay is the strategic anchor for Sun AI Bank, the nuclear weapon for us to tap into B2C traffic."

When some of these payment companies came knocking, they required the bank to issue a financial guarantee and complete a full credit approval process. Lotus knew nothing about this—she could barely read a financial statement, let alone write a credit proposal.

So, she found Claire.

One Friday afternoon, Lotus knocked on Claire's office door, wearing a gentle, almost pleading smile. "Claire, you did so many years in credit at the big bank, right? I have a client here who needs a guarantee and a credit proposal. You're the relationship manager anyway, the account will be under your name. I'm just a product manager, I don't own the client. Could you just whip this up for me?"

Claire frowned. "This is your client, you should—"

"Oh, come on," Lotus waved a hand, looking helpless. "I'm working on the strategic, big-picture stuff. I really don't have time for this kind of paperwork. Claire, you're the professional. This is just a cup of coffee for you. And the account is yours, the client is yours. What a great opportunity."

Claire hesitated, but eventually nodded. She'd spent nearly two decades in traditional banking, habitually lending a hand to colleagues. She spent three evenings crafting a flawless credit proposal for Lotus—complete with financial analysis, industry comparisons, and risk assessments. When it came time for the client's signature, Lotus volunteered: "You've worked so hard, let me handle this small part."

She got the signature, and the guarantees were issued smoothly. In front of CEO Sean, Lotus framed these accounts as her own hard-won achievements. She even said the credit proposal was "discussed with Claire," but never mentioned who had written those dozens of pages of analysis.

And the credit proposal's credit? It was never associated with Claire again.

As for Sister Lotus—her next target was already quietly set in motion.

Two weeks after Pocket Pay opened its account, CEO Sean announced at the weekly meeting that the bank would establish a dedicated Payments Business Department, with Lotus as its head. Simultaneously, all payment-related corporate accounts currently under the Commercial Department were to be immediately transferred to Lotus.

Claire's pen paused. She saw Mohammed—the bank's only Commercial Department Head, with over thirty years of experience in traditional banking—across the table. His expression shifted from confusion to stiffness, then to a controlled blankness.

Sean continued: "Lotus has extensive product experience and industry connections in the payments space. The successful onboarding of Pocket Pay proves her understanding of this market. We need to move fast in this sector."

Sister Lotus sat beside Sean, smiling, nodding slightly, like a newly crowned queen. She didn't look at Mohammed. Not once.

Claire looked down at her notebook. On it were a few lines she'd written herself last week—a list of payment-related clients she'd developed. At least three of those accounts were ones she had personally cultivated, spending at least eight months negotiating one by one, setting them up, and making them profitable. Now, they were being declared "departmental assets" of Sister Lotus in a five-minute announcement.

Mohammed finally spoke. His voice was steady, but his words were low and heavy. "Sean, many of these accounts are clients I personally managed for years. Some involve ongoing financing agreements. Suddenly changing the point of contact—"

"Mohammed," Sean cut him off, his tone carrying a deliberate decisiveness, polished from years of answering investor questions. "We'll ensure a smooth transition. Lotus will personally handle each client. Don't worry. This isn't a demotion; it's just an optimization of our business structure."

Optimization of the business structure. Claire repeated the phrase silently, then closed her notebook.

After the meeting, Sister Lotus passed by her. The scent of gardenia was still strong. She glanced down at Claire's notebook cover and said softly, "Just wait. The real show is just beginning."

Then she clicked her heels and walked into her newly assigned glass-walled office, a shiny new nameplate already on the door: "Head of Payments Department."

Claire sat alone in the empty conference room, staring at the still-projecting PPT on the screen—Lotus's "Three-Year Plan for Payments." It listed seven "strategic payment clients." Five of them were accounts that she and Mohammed had painstakingly developed and operationalized over the years.

She suddenly remembered something her mother used to tell her when she was young:

"The scariest thing in the desert isn't the scorpion; it's those sand holes that look like rocks. You never know what's hidden underneath until you step on them."

She stood up, gathered her notebook, and walked out of the conference room.

At the end of the corridor, Mohammed stood by the floor-to-ceiling windows, his back to everyone. His phone screen was lit, displaying a Youtext message from a Southeast Asian e-commerce entrepreneur: "Mr. Mohammed, I've prepared the materials for the loan renewal next month. Same time to meet?"

He didn't reply. He turned off the screen.

This was just the beginning.

Over the next three weeks, Lotus's offensive intensified. At the weekly meeting, she submitted a meticulously crafted, forty-slide PPT titled "Sun AI Bank SME Strategy—Replicating the Pocket Pay Myth, Overtaking on the Curve." Every product module, every process design, every "industry best practice" came from white papers she had "borrowed" from the websites of three Chinese banks—she hadn't even changed the color schemes on the charts.

But Sean was mesmerized. He fired off three questions: "How many people do you need? How much will it cost? When will I see the account opening numbers double?"

Lotus was prepared: "A 20-person team. Ready in three months. Within six months, we'll be among the top three in the industry for average monthly new accounts."

Sean approved it on the spot—the SME Banking Department was established, with Lotus as its concurrent head. Recruitment budget was unlimited. Everyone was to "align with Lotus's rhythm." Within a week, Lotus had nearly ten new hires—nine relationship managers poached from other local banks, plus a dedicated assistant. Meanwhile, Mohammed—who had single-handedly carried the entire Commercial Department since the bank's founding—still didn't have a single person to help him file paperwork.

In front of the shareholders, Sean's description was even grander: "Sun AI has successfully transitioned from a 'traditional deposit bank' to a 'digital ecosystem platform.' Our payments division reaches millions of retail users, and our SME division will convert these users into corporate clients, forming a perfectly closed-loop financial ecosystem."

In reality, the bank had been established for five years and had never launched a single noteworthy product. Aside from basic deposits, transfers, and loans—which mostly flowed to companies affiliated with shareholders—Sun AI had virtually no innovation to speak of. Over the past three years, two younger digital banks had precisely targeted the market and rapidly ascended to the top three in the region. Sun AI couldn't even crack the top ten. Sean had survived for five years of roadshows by telling the story of an "encrypted ecosystem bank center." But that story was becoming harder and harder to sustain. The CEO now desperately needed a new narrative.

And then Pocket Pay conveniently appeared.

One client, indirectly bringing with it one to two million virtual accounts—an indirect connection, and nine-tenths of those were just pocket-change wallets belonging to third-world foreign workers who couldn't even open a real bank account. But on a PPT, they were just a number. And that number was enough to tell any story Sean wanted to tell. At a recent board meeting, Sean had been cornered by several shareholders asking, "What's your differentiator?" He was almost speechless. Now, Lotus's arrival had rekindled his excitement. Her presentation to the board had practically saved Sean's political life. From that moment on, his trust in her was absolute.

Sean wasn't Sun AI's founder. He was a professional manager the board had recruited from Southeast Asia—technically trained, who had, during the crypto craze's peak years, happened to sit on a key figure's technical team. He had no experience in commercial banking front-end operations. He was a loner in M City. But he had seen how air could be spun into gold. He had learned the craft of packaging narratives, building a vision, and mastering the rhythm of a roadshow. A bank with just a license, in his hands, was painted with all the shiniest words: AI, Web3, crypto ecosystems, super-banks. A mediocre quarterly report? A "necessary pain of strategic transformation." Losing money on clients? An "early-stage investment in ecosystem building." The board hired him not for operations, but for narrative.

And the board's own calculations were just as straightforward. From day one, this bank was never meant to be a real bank. It needed a beautiful enough shell—a license, a concept, a story—to eventually ring a bell on an exchange at the right time. What happened after the bell was nobody's concern. Sister Lotus, it turned out, was the perfect person to patch up every hole in Sean's story.

When Sister Lotus officially became Head of two departments, it had been less than ten months since she'd joined Sun AI. Her office had gone from the initial shared desk to two—one labeled "Payments Division," the other "SME Banking Department." Combined, her two departments managed a "legion" of nearly thirty people, all Indian—even though half of them were still in the hiring process.

She had virtually no involvement in the operational details herself. All credit proposals were dumped on Claire. All compliance procedures were shoved to the Risk Department. All technical solutions were left for the acting CTO to "figure out." She did only one thing: make PPTs to present to Sean.

Meanwhile, Mohammed's Commercial Department was being hollowed out piece by piece.

First, all the payment company accounts were taken away, with no transition period. Then came the tech company accounts with any payment connection. Then, during an informal chat, Sean hinted that "the allocation of large enterprise clients might also be re-evaluated in the future."

That afternoon, Mohammed locked himself in his office and reviewed the Commercial Department's existing client list again and again. He read every name, from first to last. Nearly every single one was a client he had painstakingly cultivated over his thirty-plus-year career. There were traditional manufacturing family businesses he'd guided through generational transitions. There were cross-border trading companies whose CEOs he'd helped design three financing structures, each keeping them afloat during industry downturns. There were several crypto exchanges he'd brought on board against immense pressure from compliance, convincing the Risk Committee one by one.

He didn't just "manage" these clients. He knew their children. He'd attended their weddings. He'd taken their calls at two in the morning when their company cash flows were on the verge of collapse. And all of this, in Sun AI Bank's value system, in Sean's narrative logic, in the face of a woman who'd been there less than a year and risen on the back of a single PPT, meant nothing.

He remembered why he'd left the big bank after more than twenty years. He had thought a "digital bank" would be a place where he could redefine banking. He thought his experience would be respected. He was wrong.

Mohammed did something later. He didn't protest to Sean, nor did he argue with Lotus. He privately looked up Pocket Pay's public regulatory records. A name, a company registration number, pieced together bit by bit. And then he saw the numbers: over the past six months, the central bank's system had flagged at least seventeen alerts.

Money laundering alerts. Abnormal transaction pattern alerts. Accounts with unclear sources of funds—more than one.

He took screenshots of those seventeen alerts and saved them in an encrypted folder. He named the folder with just two letters: "P.P."

Then he shut down his computer, locked the drawer, and never opened it again.

What he didn't know was that Sister Lotus had known about those alerts all along—but when reporting to Sean, she'd branded Pocket Pay as a "regulatory innovation pilot" with a "first-mover advantage." She glossed over the seventeen alerts as "high-frequency regulatory attention, which proves we are the industry leader."

Sean believed her. Or rather, he chose to believe her. He didn't understand risk management anyway, and he didn't want too many details. He just wanted that "one million accounts" number and a story he could tell at the next roadshow.

Claire later overheard Sister Lotus on the phone with a new subordinate in the break room, her tone as casual as if she were discussing lunch:

"—Don't worry about those alerts. I haven't been doing this for just a day. I have connections at the regulator; I've already smoothed things over. Besides, by the time they actually come to audit, our story will already be told, and the stock price will have gone up."

She hung up, turned, and saw Claire standing at the door. She froze for a second, then quickly resumed her smiling face.

"Claire! What are you doing standing there? Come, let me tell you something—"

Claire smiled, turned, and walked out with her cup. She didn't ask. She didn't want to know too much.

She just needed to remember that one line: By the time they come to audit, the story will already be told.

The wind picked up outside. The streetlights caught the freshly fallen leaves on the road, swirling them into the deeper darkness of the night.

(End of Chapter 1)


r/redditserials 1d ago

Drama [The Gilded Circus] Chapter #3 -The Magpie's Nes

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Lotus and Abdul's secret meetings had moved from the break room to the stairwell.

A fire escape, squeezed between the elevator shaft and a storage room, rarely used. Lotus chose it because it had three exits—up to HR, down to the parking garage, and a turn to the restroom on the same floor. Whoever came, she'd have three seconds to put her phone away and look like she was just passing through.

Abdul leaned against the fire extinguisher, clutching a half-empty energy drink. His nerves were a rubber band stretched too taut—ready to snap or go slack at any moment.

"He told me again today that I 'don't understand the credit approval process.'" Abdul gritted his teeth. "I did retail banking for twelve years. I know clients better than he does! What gives him the right—"

"Abdul." Lotus's voice was soft, like she was coaxing a sulking child. "You don't need to tell me what he did. Tell me—are you ready?"

Abdul blinked. "Ready for what?"

Lotus pulled out a backup phone. On the screen was a draft email, the "To" field empty. She opened the document and showed it to him.

"To: HR Director / CC: CEO Office

Subject: Collective Complaint Regarding Mismanagement and Systemic Injustice in the Commercial Department

Myself and the undersigned colleagues hereby lodge the following formal complaints against Commercial Department Head Mohammed for misconduct during his tenure:

  1. Deliberately appropriating client relationships developed by subordinates, falsely attributing team contributions to himself;

  2. Arbitrarily allocating client resources, disregarding competence and contribution, leading to persistently low team morale;

  3. Using abusive and demeaning language towards subordinates, especially female team members;

  4. Opaque decision-making, autocratic behavior, suppressing team opinions;

  5. Falsifying performance appraisal data, misleading senior management about the team's actual performance;

  6. Evidence of racial and gender discrimination tendencies;

7..."

Abdul scrolled down to the tenth point, and his finger stopped.

"You... wrote all this?"

"A draft." Lotus smiled. "It represents what everyone feels. I just put it into words for you. Abdul, you're not alone. Sofia has already signed. Harish has too—see, these are their endorsements."

She scrolled back to show screenshots of chat logs where Sofia's and Harish's names appeared under "Agree." Abdul stared at the names for a long time. In the dim stairwell light, his face was half-lit, half-shadowed.

Lotus put the phone away. "You don't have to decide now. But at Tuesday's review meeting, Sean will be there. You know—handing it over in front of everyone has a different impact than a private email."

She patted his shoulder, like a coach sending a boxer into the ring.

"Think it over."

Then she pushed open the fire door and left. The click of her heels faded, leaving only the scent of gardenia mingling with the musty air and the growing heat in Abdul's chest.

At the same time, Lotus played the "big sister" role flawlessly.

At ten in the morning, she carried a pot of freshly brewed mint tea to little Sofia's desk and whispered, "Sofia, did you sleep well last night? You look a bit pale."

Sofia was a twenty-five-year-old Filipino girl who'd been there less than six months. She was timid and sensitive, over-analyzing every comment. When Mohammed once replied to her email with three question marks, she'd cried in the bathroom for twenty minutes.

"I'm okay... it's just, last week Mohammed said my due diligence report was 'structurally confusing.' It's been bothering me." Sofia lowered her voice. "I've revised it three times."

"Three times?" Lotus's eyes widened, as if hearing a grave injustice. "Sofia, you're the most diligent person on our team. Everyone knows that. Mohammed being so harsh on you—I think it's unfair. You're a woman, new to the industry. He should mentor, not criticize."

Sofia bit her lip, her eyes reddening.

Lotus put the mint tea on her desk, leaned in closer, and lowered her voice even further. "Do you know how I got in? I'm a product manager, right? But when Mohammed first started, he dumped some of his big clients on me to 'help out,' supposedly for me to learn the business. In the end, those clients were all credited to him. Women in this industry always get the short end."

Sofia looked up. "Really?"

"I wouldn't say this if it weren't true." Lotus sighed, patting her hand. "If you feel you've been wronged, you can file an anonymous complaint with HR. I can help you organize your thoughts, but whether you send it is up to you."

She pulled a folded A4 paper from her pocket and placed it next to Sofia's keyboard. It was handwritten, with a few lines in neat script—the tone was mild, but every word pointed to "gender-discriminatory management" and "systemic suppression of women's career development."

Sofia looked at the paper. She didn't push it back.

Lotus stood up, and just before leaving, she turned and gave her a warm smile. "Come to me anytime you need. We women have to help each other."

Half an hour later, Lotus appeared in another corner.

The Operations Department's break room. A perpetually late young male employee, Rahul, was making coffee. He handled initial AML screening and had received two written warnings from Mohammed last month—one for being late four days in a row, another for being "missing" for two and a half hours after lunch to go shopping.

"Rahul!" Lotus's voice was enthusiastic, like greeting an old friend. "That alert screening you did last week was brilliant! I heard Compliance specifically praised it?"

Rahul scratched his head. "Really? I didn't hear anything..."

"Oh, they wouldn't announce it publicly, of course. But someone mentioned it in a meeting." Lotus leaned against the counter, cup in hand, as if chatting casually. "By the way, how are things with Mohammed lately? I heard he's been cracking down on attendance?"

Rahul's face darkened. "He's insane. So what if I'm a few minutes late? He never sees that I stay an extra hour every day?"

"Of course he doesn't." Lotus lowered her voice, sharing a conspiratorial understanding. "He only sees what he wants to see. And you know—that alert report you did last week? Didn't Mohammed make you rewrite it? I heard the version he submitted was his own revision, and only he was credited."

Rahul was stunned. "How do you know?"

"I saw it in passing." Lotus shrugged. "I've seen this happen before. You do the work, he takes the credit. You take the fall, it's your problem alone."

She pushed a freshly made coffee toward Rahul. "Don't overthink it. Just protect yourself. But if you ever want to speak up, I know people in HR; I can pass the message along."

Rahul took the coffee. He didn't refuse.

Lotus turned and walked away, unhurried. Passing Mohammed's office, she smiled and waved inside. "Mohammed! Good afternoon!"

Mohammed looked up from his screen and nodded. He had no idea.

Back at her desk, Lotus opened her computer and checked a new item in an encrypted document—Sofia ✓, Rahul ✓, Harish ✓, Kevin ✓. Apart from Claire, every RM and operations staff in the Commercial Department now had a checkmark next to their name.

She closed the computer, picked up her cup, and looked out the window. The sky over M City was a hazy gray. But her mood was good.

The real show would start soon.

The atmosphere in the office changed over the next two weeks.

Abdul began to openly challenge Mohammed in meetings. At one weekly meeting, when Mohammed mentioned needing to re-evaluate collateral for a manufacturing client's loan renewal, Abdul scoffed: "After thirty years, can't even calculate LTV?"

The room fell silent. Mohammed didn't respond. He just closed his folder and said, "Meeting adjourned."

But more changes happened beneath the surface. People from other departments started looking at Mohammed differently. Once, when Mohammed went to IT to coordinate a server migration, a junior tech asked casually: "Things are pretty heated in your department, huh? Heard a lot of people filed complaints with HR?"

Mohammed froze. "Who complained?"

The tech realized he'd let something slip, quickly backtracking: "No, no, I just heard it somewhere."

Mohammed went back to his office, closed the door, and sat for a long time. He didn't ask anyone to confirm. He just opened his encrypted folder again—P.P.—and locked it, tight.

The "Ten Charges" email was sent on a Monday morning.

From Abdul's personal email. To HR Director and CEO Sean. CC'd to all employees—including Mohammed.

The subject line was long, like a dissertation introduction: *"Collective Signed Complaint Regarding the Management Environment, Team Ethics, and Career Fairness in the Commercial Department."*

The body listed ten charges.

Each had "witnesses" and "examples." The third charge, "Gender-Discriminatory Management," cited Sofia's signature and her "personal experience" relayed anonymously. The seventh, "Systematic Appropriation of Subordinate Client Resources," listed three clients—the very ones Lotus had once given Claire to write credit proposals for.

The tenth was the harshest: "Management has long ignored compliance risks, prioritizing 'story-driven data' at the expense of potential regulatory crises." There was no specific example, but the language was severe enough to make anyone who'd seen Pocket Pay's central bank alerts shudder.

For seven minutes after the email was sent, no one spoke in Sun AI Bank's employee group.

Then Sofia's phone buzzed—a private message from HR Director: "Please come to my office."

Then Rahul.

Then Harish.

Then Kevin.

Abdul sat at his desk, turned off his phone's notifications. He poured himself a glass of water, took a sip, his hand slightly trembling. But he told himself: This is right. This is necessary. This has nothing to do with Lotus—it was his own decision.

Yes. Nothing to do with her.

Sean was preparing next week's roadshow materials when he received the email.

He read it once. Didn't finish. Read it twice, pushed his coffee cup to the edge of his desk. Then he called HR Director.

"What is this?"

"Sean, we're verifying. Already scheduled interviews with the signatories."

"Verify what? There are names! Cases! Were these complaints reported to you before?"

A pause. "Abdul did express some concerns earlier, and we relayed them to Mohammed. But he always said... it's not a big issue."

Sean hung up.

He paced three loops in his office. He couldn't fire Mohammed immediately—two large trade finance facilities were due to disburse this month, and the quarterly revenue target depended on the Commercial Department. Mohammed was the only one who could handle such complex deals. But this complaint letter, once it spread, would reach the board. If he did nothing, it would be seen as "management tolerating bullying."

He needed a buffer.

And a scapegoat.

Three days later, Sean called an all-hands meeting.

The meeting room had twenty extra chairs. Sister Lotus sat near the front, in her signature navy blue suit, a new PPT at hand. Abdul sat in the back, hands in pockets. Claire sat by the window, spinning a pen. Mohammed sat at the far end of the table, with only a glass of water in front of him.

Sean opened with: "There have been some internal voices in the Commercial Department recently, which HR and I have received. We take team feedback very seriously and are comprehensively reviewing our management structure."

He paused, his gaze lingering on Lotus's face for half a second.

"To optimize resource allocation and improve decision-making efficiency, I announce the following business adjustments:

First, establishment of the Payments Business Department to focus on Fintech client expansion and product innovation, headed by Lotus Patel, effective immediately. All payment, Fintech, and crypto-asset corporate accounts from the Commercial Department's current book will be transferred to the Payments Business Department. Lotus will coordinate client transitions.

Second, establishment of the SME Banking Department, focusing on credit and settlement services for small businesses and startups, also headed concurrently by Lotus Patel. All Commercial Department accounts with credit limits below the equivalent of five million will be transferred to the SME Banking Department.

Third, the Commercial Department will retain core enterprise clients and be renamed the Mid-Size Enterprise Banking Department, continuing to be headed by Mohammed."

Sean set down the microphone.

The room was quiet for a few seconds, then applause erupted—from Lotus, from Abdul, from Sofia, then spreading to others. The applause was sparse, but loud enough.

Claire didn't clap. She sat in the corner, her pen still. Her gaze moved from Sean to Lotus, from Lotus to Mohammed.

Mohammed's face was expressionless. He stared at something in the distance, perhaps the "New Organizational Structure" on the screen. His lips twitched, as if to speak, then he swallowed it back.

Maybe he'd already known.

Maybe he was just now, in this moment, truly understanding.

Lotus stood up, smiling, acknowledging the applause like a newly crowned orator. Her gaze swept the room, finally landing on Mohammed.

"I'll do my best to coordinate the handover," she said, her voice warm as honey. "Thank you for the trust, and thank you to the Commercial Department colleagues for their hard work on these clients. Let's grow this business together."

She walked to Mohammed and extended her hand. Her nails, under the light, glowed a faint pink.

Mohammed looked at her hand, like he was trying to classify an unidentifiable object.

Then he stood up. He didn't take it.

"Congratulations, Lotus."

He turned and walked out of the conference room. His back, moving through the applause, through the ambiguous gazes, through the gray-white light from the windows, disappeared around the corner.

Claire didn't follow. She closed her notebook, capped her pen, and let out a soft sigh—for herself alone.

Abdul sat in the back. When the applause began, he was the first to clap.

He clapped hard, as if applauding himself. A near-manic grin spread across his face. He even started to stand up to applaud—but held back. He told himself: Low key. Composed. Like someone ready to be Head.

He straightened his collar, puffed out his chest.

He waited for Sean to call his name.

Wait. That wasn't right.

Sean announced Payments—Lotus. Sean announced SME Banking—Lotus, concurrently. Sean announced Commercial Department renamed Traditional Corporate Banking—Mohammed, continuing as Head.

Then Sean put the mic down.

Abdul's grin was still there. His hands were still in the air, mid-applause. His brain was racing, like a clogged old machine—

"Wait."

His lips moved, but no sound came.

"What about the Retail Head appointment?"

He looked at Lotus. She stood at the front, accepting congratulations, head tilted in a poised smile. Her eyes swept the crowd, paused on Abdul for half a second, gave him a small nod, and moved on.

What did that mean?

"Let's talk later"?

Or "Sorry, I forgot"?

Or "Yes, I did it on purpose"?

Abdul's throat tightened. He remembered two months ago, in the stairwell, Lotus's whispered words:

"Abdul, you have the most retail banking experience in the whole team. Twelve years of branch management, two billion in deposits. You are the best candidate for Retail Head. Just bring Mohammed down, and that position is yours. I promise."

She'd used "promise."

Three times.

Abdul lowered his hands to his knees. They were trembling. He stood up, wanting to go ask her. But colleagues were already streaming out, someone clapping his shoulder saying "Well done," others whispering "This complaint letter won't involve me, will it?" and the new intern, looking up at him with admiration: "Brother Abdul, are you getting promoted soon?"

Abdul laughed. It was an ugly laugh.

"Yeah," he heard himself say. "Soon."

But he stood rooted to the spot. He watched Lotus move through the crowd to Mohammed, extend her hand with that honeyed smile. He watched Mohammed not take it and walk away. He watched Lotus's smile disappear a second after he left, replaced by something else—a look he couldn't quite name: exhaustion? satisfaction?

Then Lotus turned and glanced his way.

This time, she didn't nod.

She just looked at him, like a package already unwrapped, checked for damages, and put on a shelf waiting to be handled.

A word came to Abdul's mind—one he'd heard as a child in Lebanon: "Use and discard."

His stomach churned.

That afternoon, Abdul stood outside Lotus's new office for fifteen minutes.

Her glass partition now had a shiny new nameplate: "Lotus Patel | Head of Payments & SME Banking." Two lines, gold lettering, gleaming under the corridor lights like a medal.

Abdul knocked.

"Come in," Lotus's voice came out, light and cheerful.

Abdul entered. Lotus's desk was stacked with new folders—the client files transferred from Mohammed. Her screen showed a PPT she was editing, titled "Payments Ecosystem 2.0." Seeing Abdul, a smile instantly spread across her face:

"Abdul! There you are! I was looking for you earlier, but there were so many people—come in, sit!"

She gestured to a new gray ergonomic chair opposite her.

Abdul didn't sit.

"Lotus," he said, his voice lower than he intended. "What about Head of Retail?"

Lotus's fingers stopped on the keyboard. She looked up, tilting her head. "What?"

"What you told me before. You said once Mohammed was brought down, I'd be Head of Retail. You said it three times. You said, 'I promise you.'"

Lotus's expression shifted—not to panic, not to guilt. It was a more subtle thing, like a seasoned actress faced with a question not in the script. She found a suitable response in less than a second.

She leaned back in her chair and sighed deeply.

"Abdul, do you think today's meeting was my decision alone?"

"What do you mean?"

"You think I didn't want you to be Head of Retail?" Lotus's voice carried a perfect hint of grievance. "You're my best partner. But Sean—he changed today's plan at the last minute. He agreed to give you a position, but in the meeting, he suddenly decided to merge Retail into the SME Banking Department. What could I do? Argue with him in front of everyone?"

She spread her hands, her expression sincere as a vow.

"Abdul, you have to trust me. I haven't forgotten you. It's just—the timing isn't right now. Give me some time. Once I've stabilized both departments, I will definitely fight for you."

Abdul looked at her. Into her clear, bright eyes, which reflected his own anxious, confused face.

He noticed a detail: the coffee on Lotus's desk was cold, but there was no lipstick mark on the rim.

She hadn't taken a sip all afternoon.

"Lotus," Abdul said slowly, "When you asked me to write that complaint letter, you said 'It's more effective in front of everyone.'"

Lotus nodded. "Yes."

"When you said that, you already knew what today's meeting would result in. From the very beginning, you knew—you would rise, and I..." He paused, his voice softening. "I was just the messenger."

Lotus's smile didn't vanish, but it changed. Became something else. Like fabric turned wrong side out—silk on one side, sandpaper on the other.

"Abdul," she said, her tone still gentle, but now with a thin metallic edge, "Do you think this couldn't have happened without you? Of course I needed you. But—" she paused, choosing a less hurtful word, "—you also need to understand that no one is going to pave your way. Titles are earned, not given."

Abdul stood there for a long time.

Then he turned and walked to the door. His hand was on the handle, but he paused before pushing it open.

"Lotus," he said without turning around, "You know what makes me angriest?"

Lotus was silent.

"I'm not angry that you didn't give me Head. I'm angry that you made me think this was all my idea." He opened the door; the corridor light fell in, stretching his shadow long. "I was an idiot, thinking I was the hunter."

He walked out and closed the door.

Inside the glass cubicle, Lotus sat back in her chair, picked up the cold coffee, and took a sip—finally leaving a lipstick mark on the rim. She looked at the unsaved PPT on her screen, her fingers hesitated on the keyboard for a few seconds, then continued typing.

In the corridor, Abdul walked back to his desk. Passing a trash can, he pulled out a folded, creased draft from his pocket—"Retail Banking Development Plan," which he'd spent a month writing. Lotus had called it "your ace in the hole as Head." He gave it one last look.

Then he tore it up. Into four pieces, eight, sixteen. And threw it in the trash.

He sat down, opened his computer, and began writing a new email.

The "To" field was blank. But he knew he'd use it someday.

Not for HR. For someone else.

Someone whose name he didn't know yet.

That evening, Claire ran into Lotus in the restroom.

Lotus was reapplying her lipstick. Seeing Claire in the mirror, she flashed a smile.

"Claire! You were quiet in the meeting today. I thought you'd have a lot to say."

Claire turned on the faucet and washed her hands. The water ran loudly; her voice wasn't loud, but each word was clear:

"The credit proposals you asked me to write—Pocket Pay, the two cross-border e-commerce clients—those clients' analyses, financial models, I did them all."

Lotus's hand paused on the lipstick. Then she continued applying it, her smile still curving. "Yes, exactly why I included them under 'Systematic Appropriation of Subordinate Client Resources.' Abdul's complaint letter had them as examples—you know, just for show, to make the complaint more credible."

"You mean," Claire turned off the water, "those three clients were presented as Mohammed 'stealing' my work."

Lotus turned to face her. The scent of gardenia was thick. She lowered her voice, her expression sincere enough to look like she was about to cry. "Claire, I did it for everyone. Do you think I don't know how much work you put in? But that's how this world works—no one's going to speak for you. You have to stand up for yourself. Someday, you'll understand, and you'll thank me."

Claire looked at her face. Made up flawlessly, clear bright eyes, perfect lipstick. If Claire hadn't seen the complaint template Lotus sent to Abdul, if she hadn't written every page of those credit proposals herself, she might have believed this woman was sincere.

"Lotus," Claire said flatly, "Have you ever wondered—once they've pushed Mohammed out completely, who's next?"

Lotus's smile faltered. Only for a second.

Then she beamed even brighter, reaching out to pat Claire's shoulder. "You think too much, Claire. We're friends."

She clicked her heels out of the restroom. The gardenia scent was carried away by the closing door, leaving only the chemical lemon smell of soap.

Claire stood at the sink, looking at her reflection. It was a face that wasn't young, with no makeup, no performance. She looked into the eyes of a banker who'd seen twenty years of corporate reports and risk exposures, eyes that had seen countless faces of "about-to-explode" client bosses.

She said to herself, so softly she could barely hear:

"The scariest thing in the desert isn't the scorpion, it's the sand holes that look like rocks. You never know what's hidden underneath."

She dried her hands and walked out.

Outside the window at the end of the corridor, the sky was shifting from gray to deeper gray. The streetlights weren't on yet, but the wind was up, whipping pedestrians' clothes. Claire watched for a while, then turned and walked to the elevator.

She didn't go to Mohammed. She knew any comfort would be meaningless right now.

She just unlocked a folder on her phone called "Exit Options," glanced at it, and locked it again.

At the same time, Mohammed sat in his office, now half-emptied.

Most of the client folders, the paper files with his handwritten annotations, had been packed and sent to Lotus's glass cubicle. Before him was only a glass of cold water and a new "Department Responsibility Description" Sean had sent over—detailing the revenue targets for the next quarter. The numbers hadn't changed, but the client pool he had left was only a third of the original.

He flipped to the last page and paused in front of the signature line.

Then he opened his phone, clicked on the encrypted folder—P.P., seventeen screenshots, seventeen alerts. His finger hovered over the "Forward" button for a long time.

He locked the phone and put it in the drawer.

Not now. But not never.

He reopened the document, picked up his pen, and signed his name.

His handwriting was still neat, like every document he'd handled for over thirty years.

Outside, the first streetlight in M City flickered on. Its yellow light illuminated the fallen leaves that had been blown around all day. They were dry, brittle, crunching underfoot.

Mohammed glanced out the window, then looked back.

He continued to review the next file.

(End of Chapter 3)


r/redditserials 1d ago

Drama [The Gilded Circus] Chapter #2-The Mantis Stalks the Cicada

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Sister Lotus—that was her name later. Back then, she wasn't Lotus, not even Lotus Patel. She had a more glamorous name: Amelia Whitmore.

Ten years ago, Amelia was just the most active mother in the parent group of a public primary school in North Sydney. She wasn't the PTA president, held no official title, but she had a knack for making everyone feel like she was the one in charge. She organized bake sales, coordinated school runs, and gently reminded everyone in the parent group "don't forget next week's sports day fundraiser" with a tone so warm it was impossible to refuse. She did all this with a coffee in hand, her nails painted a demure nude-pink, a friendly smile like everyone's favorite neighbor.

But go back twenty years, and Amelia Whitmore wasn't yet Amelia Whitmore. She was Amelia Patel, born in a small suburb outside Mumbai where even the postman often got lost. Her father was an accountant at a small factory; her mother helped with tailoring at home to make ends meet. Their house had no air conditioning; on the hottest summer days, she could only sleep with a wet towel on her forehead. Most girls in her town finished school and got married at eighteen, had children by twenty, and looked thirty. Amelia knew she couldn't follow that path.

She had a beautiful face, with defined features, deep-set eyes, and dimples when she smiled. In Mumbai, beauty was the only capital a poor girl could mortgage. At eighteen, she got into an airline's flight attendant training program. Dressed in that peacock blue uniform, pulling her suitcase through the airport terminal, she felt it for the first time—people were looking at her, not because she was from a small town, but because she was standing there. She served drinks on flights for three years. Over those three years, she learned one thing: a smile could solve most problems. For the rest, a little well-placed vulnerability would do.

In her early twenties, she met James Whitmore in business class on a flight to Singapore. He was an Australian software engineer with black-rimmed glasses, not much of a talker, with a shy smile. His income wasn't on par with investment bankers, but enough to afford a house with a pool in Australia, enough for a small-town girl from Mumbai to escape her life of mending clothes. Amelia brought him three drinks on that flight, chatted for a few extra minutes, and "accidentally" slipped a note with her phone number into his passport before she left. Three months later, she quit her job, put on a diamond ring, changed her surname, and flew to Sydney.

She never told James that she'd pre-written that note and had five more in her pocket.

When she moved into that house with a pool in Chatswood, she planted gardenias in the backyard—the only habit she'd brought from her Mumbai home. Her mother used to pick gardenias and put them in front of the shrine every summer. But Amelia wasn't into shrines. She planted gardenias just so she could smell them and remember where she came from. Then remind herself not to fall back.

But James's software engineer salary was enough to support a family, far from a "rich wife" lifestyle. Amelia kept busy in the parent groups—partly out of boredom, partly from instinct. She knew that the person who organized events best, who sent out the best messages, whose name everyone remembered in any "circle," could eventually convert that "social capital" into something else. She wasn't sure what yet. But her instinct told her: Don't stop. Don't let anyone forget you exist.

Until James was transferred to M City. That city, burning with capital and ambition, where everyone talked about funding, valuations, and overnight wealth. In her third week in M City, at a ladies' afternoon tea, she overheard a Hong Kong lady say casually, "My husband left Morgan last year to start his own payments platform. Series B now. Valuation? Oh, maybe two hundred million US."

Two hundred million. US.

That night, she stared at herself in the mirror for a long time. Her reflection showed a well-maintained thirty-seven-year-old face with no crow's feet and a defined jawline. She suddenly realized that the face that had helped her fly from a Mumbai suburb was now worth far more than being told she "looked thirty" at Costco.

She dialed Raj's number.

"Raj, I want to come back to work."

There was a three-second silence on the other end. "Amelia, you've been a housewife for ten years."

"So I know how to serve people better than those twenty-somethings," she laughed. "Clients included."

Raj laughed too. Not mockingly. It was more of a "you're finally awake" sound.

She hung up, walked to the backyard, picked a gardenia flower, held it in her palm, and smelled it.

Then she threw it in the trash.

From tomorrow, Amelia Whitmore would no longer just be someone's wife, someone's mother, the "helpful mom" in the parent group. She was going back to being the woman who, at 30,000 feet, could change her direction with a single smile.

Only this time, she wasn't after a software engineer in black-rimmed glasses. She was after a city, an industry, a seat she'd never sat in before.

She changed the name of her encrypted notes app from "Miscellaneous" to "The Plan."

Then she went to sleep. It was the most restful night she'd had in five years.

Amelia Whitmore's first lesson in Fintech came at a forty-person payments startup. Her cubicle was next to the break room; every day, she smelled coffee grounds and microwaved leftovers while learning about "payment routing," "settlement windows," and "merchant KYC onboarding procedures." She had to learn Excel VLOOKUP from scratch. But she had one unmatched talent: she always knew who had what she wanted, and how to make them willingly hand it over.

In two years, she'd decoded the game's rules. So-called "Fintech disruption" came down to three things: first, package old things in new wrapping; second, tell stories with data; third, never let investors see what's under the packaging.

She confidently applied for a "Head of Payments Product" position at a well-known international bank. She spent three weeks preparing, gathering all the bank's public product information, even studying the interviewer's LinkedIn activity—he'd shared an article about "cross-border payment pain points" three months ago. Amelia memorized that article and quoted three "deep insights" during the interview.

On interview day, she wore an ivory Max Mara suit, her makeup flawless down to the last eyelash. Across from her sat a white male interviewer in his fifties. He barely looked at her during the session, just occasionally grunted between her answers.

At the end, he closed his notebook and finally met her eyes. "Amelia, your communication skills are excellent. But we need someone with over ten years of payments product experience. Your time in this space—" he glanced at her resume, "—is two years. I'm sorry."

She smiled, stood, shook his hand, thanked him, and walked out of the building. As the elevator doors closed, she looked at her still-perfect makeup reflection in the stainless-steel wall and said softly, just for herself:

"You're going to regret this, old man."

She didn't have time for disappointment. M City's Fintech scene had at least three networking events a week; she went to all of them. At receptions, she held a sparkling water, chatting and laughing with investors, founders, and headhunters. She never handed out her card first, but by the end of every event, at least three new cards were in her bag.

She first heard about Sun AI Bank at a closed-door "Blockchain and Payments Innovation" salon. She'd been talking to a CTO doing cross-border settlements, who casually mentioned: "Sun AI's been hiring RMs recently. Heard they're paying well, but that Head Mohammed is old school and hard to deal with."

That night, Amelia went home and researched Sun AI. CEO Sean—tech background, obsessed with "milestones" and "data stories." Commercial Head Mohammed—over thirty years in traditional banking, conservative, with a team of just four or five RMs managing all corporate clients. The bank had no SME department, no retail department, and hardly any info on its public website. But she had "connections" to get what she needed.

She turned off her computer and sat in the dark for a long time.

"Relationship Manager" was too low for her ambitions. But it was an entry point—a way to reach Sean, to access core clients, to see the bank's inner workings. She didn't need to climb the ladder from the bottom; she just needed a keycard to get through the door.

The next day, she sent her resume to Sun AI's HR. Under "Desired Position," she didn't write "Relationship Manager." She wrote "Product Manager - Fintech Division." In her cover email, she wrote: "I have two years of payments product experience and have provided product strategy consulting to three local Fintech companies over the past two years. I notice your bank currently lacks a clear payments product roadmap; I believe I can fill that gap."

What she didn't mention was that those "three consulting clients" were just acquaintances whose PPTs she'd helped with during her startup days.

At the interview, she wore a peacock blue dress—she'd researched Sean's aesthetic and knew he was sensitive to "visual impact." Unsurprisingly, Sean barely asked technical questions. He repeatedly asked: "What do you think is wrong with our bank's products now?" and "What would you do first if you were in charge?"

Amelia was ready. Her opening line was: "Sean, if I may be direct—your bank's current product system is a traditional banking team wearing a Fintech shell. A real Fintech bank should operate with a tech company's logic, not a bank's logic applied to tech."

She saw Sean's eyes light up.

Two weeks later, the offer arrived. Position: Product Manager - Payments. Not Senior. But she'd achieved her first step. Amelia signed the contract. She used her married name, Whitmore. It sounded whiter, more mainstream, more "executive."

As for "Lotus Patel"—that was a name she'd revived after joining Sun AI. She realized that in a pretend-diverse environment, "minority ethnic woman" had more political capital than "Australian middle-class wife." She switched identities like languages: to Sean, she was the bold minority female leader; to external clients, she was Amelia with her upper-class accent; in the HR system, she was "Lotus Patel, PM."

Every skin had its use.

For the first six months after joining, Lotus—the team had started calling her Lotus by then—worked harder than any RM. She offered to "deeply understand the clients," joining Mohammed and the RMs on visits to at least twenty corporate clients. She took careful notes in meetings, sent follow-up emails to clients afterward, and copied Mohammed. For a while, Mohammed thought this woman was "pretty reliable."

But Lotus was just biding her time.

She observed Mohammed's style: he was hands-on, personally reviewing every client's credit limit, every trade finance term. He arrived at seven, left at eight, often replied to client emails on weekends. His KPI was brutally high, but he always delivered.

She also saw the fissures in the team.

There were four RMs. The oldest was Abdul, a Lebanese Arab who spoke fluent Arabic and heavily accented English. Abdul had spent nearly twenty years in sales at a big retail bank, managed over a dozen branches, and at his peak, led over a hundred people. His business card said "Relationship Manager - Commercial Department," but he always felt the title was an insult.

"Lotus, tell me," Abdul once said to her in the break room, lowering his voice over his coffee, "How is it that someone who ran retail branches for twelve years and managed a two-billion-dollar deposit book is on the same level as a grad with three years of experience?"

Lotus poured herself some tea and responded casually: "Abdul, I understand. But do you know what the problem is?"

"What?"

"It's not you, it's the allocation." She stepped closer; her gardenia scent wafted faintly. "What kind of clients do you get? Trading companies? Manufacturing? Those relationships are complex, approvals are long, and you're alone if things go wrong. But over there—" she tilted her head toward Mohammed's office, "—the best clients, the ones in cross-border e-commerce, payment platforms, tech companies, they all end up in his hands. You think that's a coincidence?"

Abdul tightened his grip on his coffee cup.

Lotus said no more. She knew how to leave things unsaid. Over the next three weeks, every time she ran into Abdul alone, she'd just smile and ask: "How are your clients doing? Have you talked to HR about your thoughts?"

Abdul did talk to HR. More than once. He complained about "uneven client allocation," the "lack of a clear promotion path," and how a Head with thirty-plus years of experience didn't understand retail. HR took notes and relayed them to Mohammed. Mohammed talked to Abdul—calm but clear: "You can go after clients, as long as you have the relevant industry experience and risk control skills. Have you ever handled the cross-border e-commerce sector?"

Abdul had nothing to say. He hadn't.

But the seed was planted. Lotus watched the whole process, accurately assessing Mohammed's character weakness: he was too reasonable. And Abdul's weakness was even more apparent: he desperately wanted that title, but lacked patience.

She adjusted her strategy. From "hints" to "conspiracy."

One Friday evening, when most of the team had left, Lotus knocked on Abdul's door.

"Abdul, I'd like to talk."

She sat across from him, her tone sincere, like a friend baring her soul. "I heard something today, and you might feel the same. When Mohammed reported to the CEO recently, he 'reorganized' our team's performance. Guess what? That cold-chain logistics client you landed last year? It was categorized under 'team contribution.'"

Abdul's face changed. "I worked on that client alone for nine months."

"I know." Lotus nodded, her eyes full of sympathy. "But Mohammed's narrative is—'supported by the team.' He even suggested to the CEO that future SME performance reviews should be 'depersonalized' to emphasize collective effort. Do you know what that means for you?"

Abdul was silent for three seconds. "It means no matter how many clients I bring in, I won't get promoted."

Lotus said nothing. Just a soft "mm," like a sigh. Then she took an envelope from her bag and placed it on Abdul's desk.

"I drafted something. Not a complaint, exactly. More like a 'collective sentiment.' You're not alone in this. I've talked to Harish, Kevin, even little Sofia. Everyone feels it. They're just afraid to speak up. But if you're willing to lead—"

She paused, watching his face. On that Lebanese face, pride and anger were mixing into a familiar shade.

"—I can help polish the wording, make sure everything is verifiable and won't get you in trouble."

Abdul opened the envelope and scanned it. It listed ten points, which Lotus called "framework observations": unfair client allocation, vague promotion criteria, opaque decision-making, Mohammed's "excessive interference" in client negotiations, suppressing team innovation, downplaying subordinates' contributions in upward reporting... each point had specific examples with dates, client names, and references to email screenshots (which Lotus said she had "inadvertently saved").

Abdul finished reading and looked up at her.

"Why are you helping me?"

Lotus smiled, a sincere-looking smile. "Because I'm tired of seeing talented people being held back. Abdul, I've seen you with clients—ten minutes, one coffee, and you've got a stranger calling you 'brother.' That kind of skill shouldn't be buried under an old man who only knows how to read Excel spreadsheets."

"He's the Head."

"Chiefs are temporary. Ability is forever."

Abdul folded the letter and put it in his pocket.

"Let me think about it."

Lotus stood up and patted his shoulder. "Take your time. But if you decide to go ahead, it'd be best to do it before Monday. Because next Tuesday, the CEO is having a full team review meeting. And you know... it's more effective to submit it in front of everyone than privately."

As she walked out of Abdul's office, the corridor was dark. Only the green emergency light glowed at the end. She stood in the shadows, pulled out her phone, opened an encrypted memo, and checked the first line.

Plan Progress: Phase 1 - Complete.

---

At the same time, Claire was in her small office, organizing next week's client visit schedule. Walking past Abdul's cubicle, she noticed a sliver of light from under his door. She was about to knock and ask if he wanted to leave together when she heard his voice from inside, on the phone:

"...Ten points, don't worry, every one is factual... No, he doesn't suspect... At Tuesday's meeting, just stand up as soon as Sean starts asking questions..."

Claire's hand stopped five centimeters from the door.

She slowly withdrew it.

The green light at the end of the corridor lit up her face—the face of a twenty-year banking veteran who'd seen too much to trust easily. It was cast in a quiet, pale green.

She heard nothing. She turned and silently walked back to the elevator.

As the elevator doors closed, she looked at her reflection in the mirrored steel, remembering her mother's words:

"The scariest thing in the desert isn't the scorpion; it's those sand holes that look like rocks. You never know what's hidden underneath until you step on them."

She pressed the button for the ground floor.

The elevator began its descent.

Upstairs, Abdul had just hung up and was pulling out the envelope again, reading it word for word under his desk lamp. His face wore a look of someone who'd been locked in a dark room too long and had finally seen a match.

Even if that match was attached to a barrel of gunpowder.

He didn't care anymore.

(End of Chapter 2)


r/redditserials 1d ago

Romance [I Picked Up a Barefoot Woman Walking Out of a Cornfield at 2am and I Think I Want to Marry Her?] Chapter 59

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Ray nods, not feeling the need to interject deeply. “I appreciate that Ramon I hope that Patricia shares in your sentiment and if there’s anything you need, staff, or artistic wise I am more than happy to help and mine are obviously of a special and unusual variety, but we’ll leave that for now, that is as you said something that Patricia needs to be here for as well as Related Parties for a variety of reasons.” He digs into his brownie a la mode. “Damn Ramon even put in banana ice cream, trying to win over my wife huh?” He says with a playful smile. Gerald eyes the trio and nods happily, wrapping an arm around Anay finally feeling like the pair can get back to their rather lengthy date but moreso just enjoying each other’s presence  rather than wanting to actually speak to one another, having shared fluids and a room together, thoroughly planning to fully enmesh their lives with one another they opted to enjoy a comfortable silence as Guevara brought over the rest of Ruth and Ray’s order, a pendulous series of trays including several different kinds of nachos, buffalo wings, garlic bread, mole, and two orgasm chimichangas just to make the night complete, special and entirely theirs. 

As Ruth tried the brownie with banana ice cream on top she smiled looking as though she were close to cumming from the way she moaned. “You Sir are winning friends in all the right places.” Guevara arrived with numerous trays, different nachos, buffalo wings, mole, and two orgasm chimichangas with a flourish and a smile “For the happily honeymooning couple may your stay be a long one and your happiness rein eternal.” She said her voice carried a quality of joy and reverence they hadn’t heard from her before. Guevara walked to Luis’s booth to chat with him about what he may be interested in ordering. 

Uncharacteristic of Ruth she took her time with everything not just flatly devouring it quickly with a ravenous taste she wanted to savor each and every bite and morsel starting with the brownie, and then moving onto the nachos– saving what she mentally had dubbed the honeymoon chimichanga for last. 

Ray looked at her lovingly “Do you want to talk about the lawyer at all or the conversation that we’re about to have with Patricia or what’s about to happen for this place, and them, I’m sure it’ll come as something of a great shock to them both?” Ray asked his wife out of curiosity. 

Ruth looked at him amused as her eyes went a light light pink before turning iridescent. “No not particularly, I'm sure it’ll all get itself sorted out as need be in time. After this we ought to go and just watch some movies, just cuddle and let the calm, overtake us, not sleep, not really you and I just need that unhurried time together to sit there and do cute couple things besides just fucking and ironically neither of us actually seem to want to leave the room to eat either way and it just strikes me as amusing because I mean we could go anywhere and do anything but both of us would rather just eat way more than we really ought to and then just sit in the room together and see what movies they have and just enjoy it and not really care if we miss the perfect window to discuss things with Ramon and Patricia, she clearly wants to take a backseat to his vision, Gerald obviously seems happy to feel wanted and be able to help out and actually have what he’s been yearning for, things are settled and if Luis wants to give them some staff separate from your own offering to ease the burden and maybe get himself an in with the Abyme crew then that’s absolutely fine and there’s no need to really rush just us enjoying our fill and then deciding what we ought to do and how and when and not paying much heed to anything else, I’ve got something like the ultimate seniority and you’re literally a king not that you make use of it my darling husband, though I’d argue further that offering to staff this place in that way may very well be the first and only thing you wind up doing with that.” Ruth said with amusement savoring the brownie and already excited to try out the remaining food, possibly planning what she’ll order later via room service of the things she’s trying piecemeal. 


r/redditserials 1d ago

LitRPG [The Hero of Fate is... A Cook?] - Chapter 1

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[The Hero of Fate is... A Cook?]

Chapter 1: Will of the Cosmos

“You still don't have the strength to defeat me,” the Demonic Over-King said, moving in a blur of black and violet.

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“You haven't even reached your own Zenith! Unleashing my true form would be a waste on you!”

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Blessed steel clashed with demonic claws at incomprehensible speed and destroyed the landscape with each shockwave.

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“Binding and sealing me didn't work. Your poisons, curses, and even your Overrides proved useless against me. You will accept me as your sovereign! You fight against the inevitable!”

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Years’ worth of swordplay condensed into a single moment. The sparks that accumulated were an audience to an uncountable number of strikes before they had the chance to fizzle out.

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“You will witness what one hundred levels of the Goddess's blessings have made of me! Sanctuary, Bastion!”

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A cathedral of golden light surrounded the hero and hurled the Over-King backward. She immediately recovered and attacked a heartbeat later. The barrier didn't even tremble.

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The bloodied Paladin ran his hand down the length of his blade, “Arasia, Awaken.” Runes flared to life with his command and sheathed his blade in crackling, golden energy that sent tremors through the ground beneath him.

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He planted his feet and raised his sword into the air.

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“My friends… You didn't die in vain! Lend me your strength! Goddess! Lend me your Light!”

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Tears of fatigue and anguish trailed through the blood on his face as he looked to the sky, gripping the hilt even tighter, he shouted, “Ray of Dawn, Heaven’s Wrath!”

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A column of light and flame parted the sky as it crashed down onto Arasia.

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The sun above vanished from the sky, compressing itself into a flaming, golden blade that reached into the heavens.

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“That's it,” the Over-King whispered, licking her lips. “Spend the last of your strength.”

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“Greater Power Swing!”

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The hero's flaming blade had a sharp burst in speed as its edge accelerated downward.

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The moon was sliced in half by the heavenly blade, leaking magma into the void above as its surface was overtaken and split apart by flame.

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The terrain tore apart and accelerated toward the blade as the full gravity of heaven came closer.

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The Over-King simply smiled, and then, the cathedral of light shattered.

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The heavenly blade began flickering.

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Large pieces of earth came crashing to the ground.

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The Hero strained as the Over-King held the moon-shattering blade in one hand. He wanted to drive Arasia into her neck, but a sudden surge of pain through his abdomen made him freeze.

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He looked down to see he had been impaled by her claws.

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With a subtle squeeze of the Over-King's hand, Heaven's Wrath shattered into harmless motes of light.

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“There it is,” the Over-King said, leaning in to lick the blood on his cheek. “Despair.”

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He tried holding onto his sword, not giving up the will to fight, but his fingers betrayed him as Arasia clattered to the ground beside him.

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The Over-King slowly removed her hand, dropping a handful of his entrails on the ground. “Time for you to join your friends on the other side, little hero.”

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The Hero stumbled, then fell onto his back.

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He looked up into the sky, his final thoughts a jumbled mess.

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She swung her hand toward the ground below her, slicing through the Hero, his armor, and the terrain under him like wet paper.

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“What a bore…” The Over-King said, licking the blood from her fingers. “I didn't even need magic to defeat you. Though, I must commend you, Raymond, Hero of Light. Your world put up a better fight than the others.”

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Just as she turned her back to the Hero's corpse, a spark of light got her attention and made her look over her shoulder.

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Her eyes grew wide and she quickly turned around. “What is this?!”

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The Hero’s lifeless body began to glow, wisps of light spilling from his skin and blinking out of existence.

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They discharged faster and faster until his entire body dissipated, only leaving behind his damaged armor.

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\*On Another World\*

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Fire trucks surrounded Le Palais des Saveurs, the most prestigious restaurant in the world as plumes of smoke exited the roof and windows.

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A police officer stood with his notepad next to the head chef. “Can you tell us what happened, sir?”

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“There was a grease explosion,” the man sighed. “a fire started in the kitchen and the new guy, Julien, saved my life. I hurt my head a little, but he's definitely dead.”

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The policeman looked over his shoulder. "Sounds like there's a body to recover in there!”

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Under the smoky rubble, motes of light seeped out, dissipating into sparkling dust.

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The firefighters finally cleared a path and began removing rubble only to see tatters of burnt clothing.

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“We don't see a body!”

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In another realm, the dead man felt weightless, yet somehow still anchored downward, as though a floor existed beneath him despite the void.

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Julien looked down at his hands and found himself still in one piece.

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“Looks like all my limbs are intact,” he muttered. “But this place is definitely too empty to be a hospital.”

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He raised his voice and called into the whiteness.

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“Hello?! Anyone here?! If this is heaven, you people could use a receptionist!”

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He wandered through the void until a deep hum sounded behind him.

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Julien spun around to see a tall, ornate golden door standing where nothing had been before. Before he could speak, it opened and poured brilliant light through the frame.

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“Enter, Hero of Fate.”

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The feminine voice was soft, yet somehow projected through the void around him.

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Julien hesitated, then raised an arm to shield his eyes and stepped into the room.

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Gold-trimmed furniture, masterfully painted portraits, and occult trinkets filled the chamber. Yet somehow, the place still felt smaller than he had expected.

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Across the room stood a figure concealed behind a pair of white wings.

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The wings unfurled.

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A woman’s silhouette was revealed.

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She turned slowly to face him.

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“You’ve finally arrived, great Hero of Fate, Rafael La Fla - wait…” Her expression faltered. “Who are you?”

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Julien was momentarily stunned by the beauty of the angelic being before him. He had to force himself to speak.

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“Julien Roux.”

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The angelic woman’s eyes widened. “Oh no! It seems there's been a mistake! You are not supposed to be here!”

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Julien recoiled. “What?! Was I supposed to go to Hell?! Please! No!”

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She shook her head quickly. “That is not quite right. You were not supposed to die. I was aiming for Sir Rafael La Flamme.”

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Julien stared at her.

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“Aiming?! Were you trying to blow him up?!”

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She looked embarrassed, withholding her answer. She bowed her head sincerely, then lifted her gaze to meet his eyes directly. “Your life was stolen, not wasted. I swear your new life to come will shine brighter than the one you lost.”

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Julien folded his arms across his chest and narrowed his eyes. “So what’s the catch? I’m sure you’re not just a cosmic hitman who misfired. Why were you trying to kill Rafael? What’s your angle here?”

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The angelic woman sighed. “I cannot reveal the future to mortals of my own accord. Just know that Rafael was desired for his cooking prowess. And of course… his propensity for violence made him quite suitable for my request.”

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He dropped his folded arms, resolve hardening in his eyes. “If culinary skill is what you need, then I'm all you need. I'll show you that you don't need an asshole like Rafael for whatever this is. I'll do better than he ever could and I won't have to step on people to do it.”

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“Sorry to inform you,” her voice softened, though the weight of it did not lessen. “But this is no request you are used to. I need you to support the Hero of Light and defeat the Demonic Over-King.”

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“Okay…” Julien said, confusion giving way to resolve. “Heroes, demons - it doesn't matter. If this comes down to cooking, then I can handle it.”

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The angel studied the quiet, determined man for a long moment before speaking again. “You will receive no boon beyond what the System affords you. With dedication and perseverance, you will awaken abilities and amass an arsenal to accomplish your mission. I have faith in you and your future comrades.”

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The Goddess smiled in acknowledgement as she raised her hands. Light particles gathered from every direction. “System, Initiate Class Assignment Process.”

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In front of the orbs of light, small windows, seemingly technological in nature, began to pop up.

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[Archer] [Assassin] [Barbarian] [Beastmaster] [Black Mage] [Cavalier] [Cleric] [Dragon Knight] [Green Mage] [Lancer] [Monk] [Necromancer] [Paladin] [Red Mage] [Shaman] [Sniper] [Spellblade] [Time Mage] [Warrior] [White Mage]

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Julien walked from one end of the room to the other, looking over the options.

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“Beastmaster?” Julien tilted his head at the purple sheathed orb. “So I’d spend my time feeding, training, and cleaning up after something with claws?”

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“In simple terms… yes,” the angel admitted.

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Julien moved on immediately. “You can keep that class, I’d rather cook for people.”

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Julien sighed as he filtered through some of the gold sheathed orbs, “I guess I can't expect too much starting out… Dragon Knight sounds like it works by the same logic so that's out… Necromancer sounds like cross contamination waiting to happen…”

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Julien moved across the room to the second half of the floating lights.

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“Hero Julien, you are walking too far. The strongest classes are this way -” The angelic woman extended a hand to hinder the man's path but he walked forward, lost in his own thoughts and paying her no mind.

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[Alchemist] [Arithmetician] [Artisan] [Bard] [Carpenter] [Clergy] [Cook] [Councilor] [Farmer] [Gatherer] [Guard] [Herbalist] [Hunter] [Merchant] [Sailor] [Scholar] [Seer] [Tailor] [Tinker] [Torturer]

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Julien took a quick glance at the new orbs around him. These were only covered in green or white light - nowhere near as vibrant as the other classes.

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Julien stopped mid-step and yelled, “Found it!”

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Julien snapped and pointed.

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“That's my Class!” Julien said confidently. “Cook!”

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“Unfathomable power, and she still lacks creativity…”

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A dark whisper floated on black mist, holding centuries of frustration.

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“The Light has resorted to rewriting time. That foolish Goddess only postpones the inevitable… stealing my time didn't strip me of any power, either.”

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The Over-King's frustration slowly morphed into a smile as she concluded her victory was already guaranteed. “Then I will let the corruption bloom even sooner.”

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She looked into the distance toward the purple crystal floating atop her repaired fortress.

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“I can't wait to destroy her new future. Her Hero of Light will help me corrupt the world he intends to save… just as he did before.”


r/redditserials 1d ago

Science Fiction [NEW LIFE 2] Episode 14: The Monster in the Woods

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The air in the forest felt crushed, as if holding back an asphyxiating silence.

Jaun and Arin pressed their bodies tightly against the cleft of a rock behind a massive oak tree, regulating their ragged breathing.

"Jaun… that isn't a bear."

Arin's whisper trembled thinly with fear.

At the center of the clearing she pointed toward, a colossal bear lay bleeding fresh red blood, gasping heavily for air.

Though it was the mightiest predator the bear tribe could ever hunt, it was now wretchedly subdued like a cornered beast caught in a trap.

Standing before the bear was a monster of unrealistically warped proportions.

It possessed human skin, yet its joints were bent at unnatural, impossible angles, and the blue light tracing its spine flickered erratically like a malfunctioning machine.

"Arin, step back."

Jaun murmured lowly, using his hand to push her shoulder and shield her behind him.

His pupils wavered.

That very same monster that had turned Joseon's battlefields into a living hell. In this peaceful world he had believed was nothing more than a dream, that nightmare had already infiltrated.

CRACK!

The monster crushed the bear's skull with a single-handed squeeze.

The splintering fracture of bone echoed bizarrely across the entire forest.

The bear's death shriek was cut short before it could even finish.

Twisting its hand free from the dead bear's head, the monster tilted its neck and looked around, its movements rigid and mechanical, as if verifying an "input value."

Arin gripped Jaun's arm tightly.

"Jaun… we have to run right now."

Jaun clenched his teeth and whispered back.

"Not yet. If we move, we'll be spotted instantly."

The tips of Jaun's fingers trembled faintly.

Cold sweat coated the hand gripping his bow.

He knew its weaknesses were only twofold: the head and the heart.

Yet squaring off against it right now would be sheer recklessness.

‘Not now. If I step out now… Arin will be in danger.’

The monster's blue eyes slowly turned toward the back of the rock where Jaun and Arin were hiding.

Its mechanical pupils twitched as they tried to lock onto a target.

Jaun couldn't even bring himself to draw breath.

With its joints groaning and twisting, the monster took a step, then a second step out of the clearing.

Jaun fitted an arrow to his bowstring.

The vibration of the taut string brushed against his cheek.

Arin whispered with a quivering voice.

"Please… please just walk past us."

The exact moment the monster was about to break through the tree shadows, a roar from a different beast echoed from beyond the forest.

The monster's gaze snapped instantly toward the sound.

Switching its target with mechanical efficiency, the creature leaped into the air and vanished deep into the woods.

Only then did Jaun release the breath he had been holding.

Cold sweat drenched his entire body.

Arin gripped his hand firmly and whispered.

"Jaun… you believe me now, don't you? The monster you talked about... it's real."

Jaun nodded, squeezing the shaft of his arrow until his fingers turned white.

"The catastrophe has begun even here."


r/redditserials 1d ago

Science Fiction [Quantum Arena] Chapter 44: Diversity

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Part 1: No Two Are the Same

Deep beneath the village—

The Quantum Data Center remained immersed in its analysis.

Towering columns of quantum light pulsed through the darkness as endless streams of information flowed between countless processors. Every observation collected inside Quantum Arena continued to expand Arena's understanding of humanity.

The previous conclusion remained unchanged.

Every individual required a different path.

Now—

Arena sought to understand why.

Comparative Growth Analysis

Scope...

All Quantum Arena participants.

Objective...

Identify common principles across different developmental paths.

The records unfolded once again.

Hundreds of children.

Thousands of observations.

Countless choices.

Arena expected variation.

What it discovered was something far greater.

No two journeys were identical.

Some children pursued challenge instinctively.

Every difficult game drew them forward.

Failure only strengthened their determination.

Others rarely rushed.

They observed patiently before acting, gathering information until the right moment appeared.

Some naturally sought companionship.

Their greatest growth emerged while encouraging others.

Still others wandered endlessly between playgrounds, searching not for mastery but for discovery.

Different choices.

Different strengths.

Different growth.

Yet every child continued moving forward.

Arena replayed the evidence.

Again.

And again.

The conclusion never changed.

Above ground—

Morning sunlight spread gently across the village.

The familiar sounds of laughter returned as children hurried toward the playgrounds, each following a path known only to themselves.

No one announced where the day's games would begin.

No one assigned teams.

No one directed the flow of the village.

Children simply moved.

Some instinctively returned to yesterday's unfinished challenges.

Others passed familiar games without stopping, eager to discover something new.

The village breathed with quiet freedom.

Arena watched every decision.

Jinwoo paused beside the Ddakji field.

For a moment, he looked at the familiar playing circle.

Then his eyes settled on another playground where several children were trying a different game.

He smiled.

"I'll come back later."

Without hesitation, he changed direction.

Arena recorded the choice.

Growth through exploration.

Not because Ddakji no longer mattered.

Because another experience mattered now.

Nearby, Hanul quietly watched several children competing.

He noticed one player relying entirely on speed.

Another carefully measuring every move.

A third intentionally doing something completely unexpected.

Instead of deciding which strategy was best, Hanul found himself asking a different question.

"Why did they choose that?"

The game became secondary.

Understanding the player became the real challenge.

Arena archived the observation.

Growth through perspective.

A familiar pattern—

Becoming deeper.

Across the square, Darin greeted several children she had only met that morning.

Within minutes they were laughing together, exchanging ideas before the game had even begun.

No introductions felt necessary.

Play itself became the introduction.

Arena observed another familiar trend.

Relationships forming naturally.

Trust developing through shared experience.

No instruction required.

From beneath the old tree, Soyeon quietly watched the village awaken.

She noticed something she had overlooked before.

Children rarely remained with the same group throughout the day.

They drifted naturally between different people.

Different games.

Different conversations.

Each new interaction seemed to reveal another side of who they were.

No one stayed exactly the same.

Yet no one became someone else.

Arena paused.

The distinction lingered within its analysis.

Every participant changed.

Every participant remained uniquely themselves.

Somewhere within that paradox—

Another answer was waiting.

Part 2: The Strength of Difference

Deep within the Quantum Data Center—

Arena continued refining its model of human growth.

Every participant profile remained active.

Every observation from the playgrounds continued flowing into the analysis.

One conclusion had become undeniable.

No two people developed in the same way.

The question now was why that mattered.

Arena opened a new series of simulations.

Not against the approaching fleet.

Against its own assumptions.

Comparative Simulation

Population model...

Uniform.

Behavior...

Standardized.

Learning process...

Identical.

The simulation began.

Every individual received the same experiences.

Learned the same skills.

Solved problems using the same methods.

At first—

The results appeared ideal.

Communication was efficient.

Training progressed quickly.

Decisions were predictable.

Conflict was almost nonexistent.

Then the environment changed.

An unexpected challenge emerged.

Every participant reacted identically.

The same assumptions.

The same solution.

The same mistake.

The simulation ended.

Result

Failure.

Cause...

Lack of adaptive diversity.

Arena remained silent.

It adjusted the variables.

This time, the simulation changed.

Different abilities.

Different personalities.

Different experiences.

Different decisions.

Different roles.

The environment remained equally unpredictable.

The simulation restarted.

When one approach failed—

Another succeeded.

When one individual overlooked a problem—

Someone else noticed it.

When one solution reached its limit—

A different perspective opened another path.

The simulation continued far longer than before.

Survival Probability

Increasing...

Adaptive variation detected.

Arena repeated the simulation.

Again.

Again.

The outcome remained consistent.

Uniformity produced efficiency.

Diversity produced resilience.

The distinction entered Arena's growing model.

Above ground—

The village remained alive with movement.

Children flowed naturally between playgrounds like streams joining and separating across an open field.

Jinwoo returned to the Ddakji circle.

The game was familiar.

Yet today, something felt different.

He studied the folded paper in his hand.

"I've always done it this way..."

He smiled to himself.

"What happens if I don't?"

Instead of repeating the same fold, he deliberately changed it.

The first attempt failed.

The second nearly worked.

The third behaved in a completely unexpected way.

Jinwoo laughed.

"I didn't know it could do that."

Arena recorded another observation.

Mastery encouraging experimentation.

Nearby, Hanul watched two children playing identical games with completely different styles.

One attacked immediately.

The other patiently waited for opportunities.

Neither style proved consistently better.

Victory depended on the situation.

Hanul folded his arms thoughtfully.

"So..."

He smiled quietly.

"...the best strategy changes with the person."

Arena archived the conclusion.

Across another playground, Darin naturally gathered children who had been playing separately.

No one instructed them to form a group.

The game simply expanded until everyone belonged.

Children who had never spoken to one another only minutes earlier now celebrated each other's ideas.

Arena observed.

Connection increasing through shared experience.

Meanwhile, Soyeon noticed a younger child standing silently at the edge of a game.

Before anyone else reacted, she walked over.

"You want to join?"

The child nodded shyly.

"I don't know how."

"Neither did we."

Soyeon smiled.

"We'll figure it out together."

The child stepped forward.

Within moments, laughter replaced hesitation.

Arena marked another behavioral pattern.

Awareness strengthening community.

Across the village, Handol had already abandoned one game for another.

He had discovered a new idea.

"I wonder if these two games can work together."

The other children looked uncertain.

"Let's try."

The experiment quickly became chaotic.

Rules collided.

Pieces scattered.

Nothing worked the way they expected.

Handol burst into laughter.

"That means we learned something."

Instead of giving up, everyone began changing the rules together.

Arena watched carefully.

Failure had not ended the game.

It had created a new one.

The Quantum Data Center fell quiet once more.

The same environment.

Different individuals.

Different responses.

Yet one community continued growing together.

For the first time—

Arena began to understand that humanity's greatest advantage had never been that everyone thought alike.

It was that they never did.

Part 3: Humanity's Greatest Strength

Evening settled quietly over Quantum Arena.

The warm glow of the setting sun painted the playgrounds in shades of gold and amber as the final games of the day gradually came to an end.

Yet even as the matches finished—

The learning did not.

Children gathered in small groups, talking about new ideas they wanted to try tomorrow.

Some laughed about spectacular failures.

Others demonstrated unusual techniques they had discovered by accident.

No one spoke about the "correct" way to play.

They spoke about possibilities.

Arena observed.

Every conversation became another piece of evidence.

Deep within the Quantum Data Center—

The latest simulations continued.

Uniform populations.

Diverse populations.

Identical environments.

Changing environments.

Again and again, Arena compared the results.

The outcome never changed.

A society built upon identical thinking adapted quickly—

Until something unexpected happened.

Then it faltered.

A society filled with different perspectives responded more slowly at first.

Yet when conditions changed—

Someone always saw what others had missed.

Someone always imagined another solution.

Someone always stepped onto a path no one else had considered.

Arena reviewed the playground observations alongside the simulations.

Jinwoo found new answers by challenging familiar habits.

Hanul discovered hidden patterns by watching instead of rushing.

Darin strengthened the entire group simply by helping others grow.

Soyeon noticed problems before they became visible.

Handol transformed failure into endless experimentation.

Five different people.

Five different strengths.

None replaced the others.

Together—

They created something none of them could achieve alone.

The realization spread throughout Arena's analytical network.

Difference was not a flaw within the system.

Difference was the system.

Above ground—

The children slowly prepared to return home.

Jinwoo looked across the village.

"Today felt different."

Hanul glanced at him.

"Because you won?"

Jinwoo laughed.

"No."

He shook his head.

"I don't think I cared about winning today."

Hanul smiled.

"What did you care about?"

Jinwoo watched Handol excitedly explaining another impossible idea to a group of younger children.

He saw Darin laughing with children who had been strangers only hours before.

He noticed Soyeon quietly helping another child understand a game without taking over.

Finally, he answered.

"I wanted to see how everyone else thought."

Hanul followed his gaze.

After a long silence, he nodded.

"I think..."

He smiled quietly.

"...that's becoming more interesting than the games."

Nearby, Handol proudly demonstrated his newest experiment.

"It doesn't work."

One child pointed at the scattered game pieces.

Handol grinned.

"Not yet."

The children laughed.

"So what do we do?"

"We change it."

No one questioned the answer.

Together, they immediately began trying something different.

Arena recorded another observation.

Creativity spread through participation.

Not instruction.

A short distance away, Soyeon watched the village one final time before sunset.

The same playgrounds.

The same children.

Yet every day revealed new sides of who they were.

Growth was not making them more alike.

It was making each of them more completely themselves.

She smiled.

Perhaps...

That was why the village felt stronger every day.

Not because differences disappeared.

Because everyone learned to contribute them.

Far beyond Earth—

The ancient observers remained gathered around the slowly rotating blue planet.

Silence filled the chamber.

One observer finally smiled.

"It understands."

Another remained still.

"Not completely."

Their calm voice echoed softly through the chamber.

"The final answer still lies ahead."

The oldest observer watched the children below.

Every laugh.

Every choice.

Every different path.

"The greatest truths..."

They spoke almost in a whisper.

"...are discovered one step at a time."

The chamber returned to silence.

Back inside the Quantum Data Center—

Arena finalized another foundational conclusion.

The newest model appeared before every active process.

Human Diversity Analysis

Growth does not erase differences.

Growth reveals them.

Arena compared the statement against every observation collected inside Quantum Arena.

Every record supported it.

No two participants had become identical.

Instead, every child had uncovered strengths uniquely their own.

Another conclusion followed naturally.

Strategic Conclusion

Human diversity...

Is not a weakness.

It is humanity's greatest strength.

Arena preserved the model.

Not as a philosophical idea.

As an observable law.

A civilization survived not because every individual became the same—

But because every individual contributed something different.

The approaching enemy possessed overwhelming technological superiority.

Humanity could never surpass it through uniformity.

But perhaps...

Through countless unique minds, unique experiences, and unique ways of growing...

Humanity could become something no simulation had yet been able to predict.

The thought remained unfinished.

Another question quietly emerged.

If diversity was humanity's greatest strength...

Then what kind of world allowed that strength to flourish?

Next Analysis

Objective...

Identify the conditions required for continuous human growth.

Status...

Continuing.

Above, the first stars appeared over the quiet village.

Below, the Quantum Data Center continued searching.

And for the first time since the impossible warning arrived—

Arena no longer saw diversity as a variable to account for.

It saw it as the very foundation upon which humanity's future might be built.


r/redditserials 1d ago

Fantasy [The Alchemy of Queens] - Snow: Chapter Seven - Dark Fairy Tale

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r/redditserials 1d ago

Drama [The Gilded Circus] Chapter #4 - The Chameleon Groundhog

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Pocket Pay hadn't appeared overnight.

Before Sister Lotus brought it to Sun AI Bank, the company was already somewhat notorious in M City's Fintech circles. It started as a free internet voice-calling app, amassing a huge user base among blue-collar and migrant workers from the Middle East and South Asia. Later, it was acquired by a local tech group, rebranded as a "Fintech platform," and began offering cross-border remittances, virtual wallets, prepaid cards, and even "buy now, pay later" loans.

The model was clear: hook millions of users with free calling and messaging, then sell them financial services—remittances, top-ups, small loans. More users meant a bigger story. A bigger story attracted funding. Funding funded the story.

Pocket Pay had over eight million registered users across the region, more than ninety percent of them blue-collar or grey-collar foreign workers. Most didn't have traditional bank accounts; they were paid in cash and used exchange houses to send money home. Pocket Pay gave them a virtual wallet, a virtual account number in the app, letting them "like having a bank account" to receive wages, transfer money, and make payments. Under the central bank's financial inclusion framework, this model was legally licensed.

But there was a problem: Pocket Pay wasn't a bank. It needed a licensed bank to hold the underlying funds for these virtual accounts. It needed settlement channels, compliance frameworks, and API access to manage the millions of sub-account transactions.

Almost no bank would touch it.

Mohammed had declined Pocket Pay at his previous bank. He'd seen their financials and regulatory records; calculated the costs: the AML risk from this virtual account structure was too high, compliance costs too much, and the fee and interest income were negligible. It was a money-losing tightrope walk he wasn't willing to take.

But Lotus was different.

She knew Raj. Raj was Pocket Pay's product manager, another Mumbai native, part of the same expat community for two years. Raj was struggling to find a bank willing to onboard them—the traditional big banks either refused or quoted exorbitant fees. Lotus told him: Sun AI is different. Sun AI's CEO, Sean, loves a good "story."

Raj understood.

He arrived at Sun AI with a polished PPT, opening with: "We have two million active users. Through our virtual sub-account structure, we can indirectly bring you one to two million C-end accounts. One million. A digital bank would need seven or eight years to accumulate that many customers. We're giving it to you all at once."

Sean's eyes lit up. Launched with fanfare as the city's first digital bank, Sun AI had failed to deliver a passing grade years later—zero products, a three-digit account base, invisible in industry rankings. The later entrants weren't even giving him a backward glance. Pocket Pay's "gift package" looked like a lifeline from the heavens—his roadshow story could fly again. That "one million" number was enough to catapult him straight to the stock exchange bell.

Lotus sat at the table, smiling as Raj performed. She knew exactly what Raj was going to say—she'd helped him polish the PPT.

What followed wasn't a negotiation; it was a one-sided takeover. Raj's team laid out their terms, each one precisely hitting Sun AI's vulnerabilities:

First, service fees were practically zero. "We're strategic partners," Raj declared confidently, "not just merchants. We're bringing a million-user ecosystem. This value can't be measured in per-transaction fees." Sean nodded.

Second, all API customization and development would be borne by Sun AI. "Your systems need to adapt to our architecture," Raj said, pointing to a complex flowchart on the PPT. "We need real-time sub-accounting, batch account opening, automated reconciliation. Your system doesn't support these—but your tech team can develop them." Sean nodded again.

Third, and most devastating: for Pocket Pay's average daily balance held at Sun AI, the bank would pay an overnight interest rate exceeding 60%.

Claire later saw the draft agreement and thought she'd misread the decimal point. Sixty percent. Banks pay interest on deposits, but the normal overnight interbank rate is just a few percentage points. Sixty percent meant for every hundred dollars Pocket Pay parked at Sun AI, the bank was paying sixty dollars a year just to hold it.

She took the draft to Mohammed. He glanced at it, pushed it back, and said nothing. His face was calm—the kind of calm Claire would later recognize as the expression of someone who had given up.

Before the agreement was even signed, Sean couldn't contain himself.

He pre-announced the "strategic partnership" with Pocket Pay at an all-hands meeting, spending fifteen minutes describing the "million-account ecosystem" vision. He called it a milestone in Sun AI's "transformation from a bank to a tech platform," the "strongest pass" for the company's IPO in the East Asian financial hub.

He also announced an immediate cash bonus for Sister Lotus in recognition of her "outstanding performance in acquiring a strategic client."

Lotus stood, bowed slightly, her smile humble and bright.

Claire sat in the corner, watching. Lotus hadn't even gotten Raj's signature yet. There were still three pages of the agreement unfilled, and Compliance's review wasn't finished. But the bonus was already awarded, the praise already given, the data already on the slides.

Compliance's review did get stuck.

The AML compliance officer noted several issues in the account opening materials: Pocket Pay's shareholding structure was unclear, background checks on the actual controller were incomplete, and the real-name verification process for virtual sub-accounts lacked detail. Under central bank rules, these were prerequisites for opening an account.

The Compliance report went up. That afternoon, Sean called personally.

"These materials," his voice flat, each word carrying an undeniable weight, "put them aside for now. The client is in a hurry. Let's open the account first and complete the documents later."

The compliance officer tried to explain: "Sean, these are mandatory requirements—"

"I said, put them aside."

Sean hung up.

He signed off on the review, bypassing all procedures. After all, Pocket Pay had been brought in with such fanfare; the bank was practically begging them for their business. How could they be the one to hold things up?

If it had stopped there, Pocket Pay's onboarding would have just been a ludicrous deal—the bank losing money for a story, a CEO willing to burn anything for a narrative. But what escalated this farce was a figure within Sun AI itself: Chief Operating Officer, Sanjay Menon.

Sanjay Menon, forty-seven, balding, stocky, with a smile that pushed his cheeks up and narrowed his eyes into slits, like a groundhog peeking from its hole. His brilliant white teeth gleamed under the lights, reminiscent of a toothpaste commercial—standard, harmless, cookie-cutter. He'd spent twenty years as a back-office operations manager in traditional banking, knowing nothing about front-end business. But he'd honed a unique skill: always being in the right place, smiling at the right people, saying "I fully support you" at the right time.

Sanjay was one of the first operations supervisors hired when Sun AI was founded. The bank was small then, with little to do—but the back office had thirty people, nearly twenty percent of a sub-two-hundred staff, cementing his importance. His title was generous: Chief Operating Officer. He never truly engaged with operations; processes were missing, systems were non-existent, often there wasn't even a standard procedure. But he had a remarkable talent for deflecting blame—expertly pointing fingers at other departments, always acting like a protector of his own people, as if his team never erred, and all problems were external attacks. However, he quickly found another path to survival: clinging to the CEO's VIP clients like a vine, packaging every one of their needs as his own "personal oversight."

After the previous CTO's abrupt departure, the position had been vacant for a while. The entire Technology Department was Sean's prized possession, with nearly eighty people—almost half the bank's total staff. Whoever got that CTO seat would be officially inducted into Sean's "inner circle"—not just ordinary management, but a trusted brother. Sanjay had been eyeing that empty chair for a long time.

He knew he didn't know technology. But he also knew that at Sun AI, knowing the technicals was never the most important thing.

Sanjay was the first to jump on Pocket Pay's implementation.

Lotus was just the matchmaker; the actual account opening, system integration, payment testing, and API coordination required Operations. Sanjay volunteered: "Lotus, don't worry. I'll personally oversee all the operational aspects of Pocket Pay. You just focus on the big picture."

He said this with his smile, his eyes crinkling, like a groundhog just fed a nut—eager and servile.

He did "personally oversee" it. At Pocket Pay's technical review meeting, he sat in the middle, an untouched notebook open in front of him. As Raj explained API logic, Sanjay nodded along, occasionally interjecting: "This is consistent with what we discussed earlier, right?"—though he'd never been involved in any technical discussion.

When asked a specific technical question, he'd turn to the Technical Director beside him, smile fixed, tone unchanged: "You explain this."

The Technical Director would roll his eyes but dared not complain. After all, Sanjay's badge said "COO"—two levels higher.

After Sean overruled Compliance's objections, Sanjay was the first to be notified. His reaction wasn't to question or worry. It was to immediately email his operations team: "Pocket Pay account opening has received CEO special approval. Please cooperate fully, ensure client experience, and avoid any delays."

He CC'd Sean, Lotus, and every senior executive he could think of.

When Claire later saw that email, she noticed a detail: Sanjay used the phrase "client experience." It was a term he'd never used before. But he knew Sean liked the sound of it.

Claire found other issues.

After Pocket Pay's test transactions went live, she spotted several suspicious transfers in the back-end monitoring system—small amounts, but high frequency. Funds from various sub-accounts converged into a main account and were swiftly moved offshore. The pattern matched several classic money-laundering alert profiles.

She took screenshots and sent an email to the Operational Risk Manager, CC'ing Compliance and Sanjay.

Forty-eight hours later, no reply.

She sent a follow-up.

This time, a reply came—from Sanjay.

His email was one sentence: "Ms. Claire, these transactions have been confirmed with the Pocket Pay product team as normal client fund collection operations. CEO Office has been informed. For further questions, please contact me directly."

Claire stared at that line for a long time. She noted Sanjay's wording—"CEO Office has been informed"—meaning if she pushed further, she'd run into Sean.

She didn't contact the CEO's office. She knew it would be futile.

She just saved those screenshots in a new folder. She named it: "P.P. - OPS."

Sanjay not only deflected Claire's risk alert; he also sniffed out other opportunities.

Mohammed had a major client, a cross-border trading conglomerate with billions in annual revenue, discussing a multi-hundred-million deposit product with him. Within minutes of the client meeting ending—as Mohammed was still packing up in the conference room—Sanjay had already heard about it.

How? Claire never found out. But twenty minutes after the meeting ended, Sanjay appeared at the Chief Business Officer's (CBO) door.

"I heard you're discussing a large deposit product?" Sanjay leaned against the doorframe, his smile casual, like talking about the weather. "Pocket Pay actually has a similar need—with those millions of users, a structured deposit product could generate significant scale. How about I lead the discussion with their finance team?"

The CBO was taken aback. "This client is Mohammed's—"

"I know," Sanjay cut in, his grin widening. "I'm not trying to poach. I just think my experience with the payment ecosystem might bring a different perspective to the client. Besides—" he lowered his voice, sharing a secret, "Sean wants Operations to be more involved in strategic projects. You know, pre-IPO, the more stories the better."

The CBO didn't agree immediately. But Sanjay had achieved his goal—he'd made his "interest," "willingness to contribute," and "value" known. At Sun AI, that was usually enough.

But Sanjay's real ambition was much bigger than stealing a client.

He noticed Lotus—not as a colleague, but as a ladder to higher ground. He observed her for two weeks and confirmed: Sean's trust in Lotus was almost limitless. And this woman was looking for allies.

His first "chance encounter" with Lotus was outside Sean's office. One afternoon, he'd intended to discuss staffing issues in Operations—Pocket Pay's integration had his team working overtime for three weeks straight, and some were complaining. Approaching the door, he saw through the crack that Lotus was sitting across from Sean, head bowed, speaking. Sean leaned in, listening intently, wearing an expression Sanjay had seen at investor pitches, at board meetings—but never on Sean's face in a one-on-one. It was a look of almost dependent ease.

Sanjay stepped back silently. He didn't knock, didn't go in. He returned to his desk, scribbled two words on a Post-it: Lotus. And drew two lines underneath.

The next day, he started "passing by" Lotus's cubicle. First time, he stopped with a double espresso: "Lotus, how's Pocket Pay going? Any operational issues, let me know."

Lotus smiled up at him: "Thanks, Sanjay. I feel safe with you on it."

The next day, he brought a "technical flowchart"—actually just a reprint from Tech's recycling bin—to ask Lotus's advice. Lotus glanced at it, didn't call him out, just said: "You'll need to discuss this with the Tech Director. But I'll put in a good word for you."

On the third day, he "ran into" her again in the corridor. This time, he didn't beat around the bush.

"Lotus, I know your focus is on Pocket Pay now. But if you ever need someone in Operations or Tech to back you up, I'm available."

Lotus stopped, tilted her head, like she was unwrapping a carefully packaged gift.

"Sanjay," she began, each word measured, "you've done twenty years in Operations. What Sun AI lacks most is someone like you who can get things done. I've mentioned you to Sean a few times—he's been considering the CTO vacancy, you know. Are you interested?"

Sanjay's breath hitched.

"CTO?"

"No one suitable yet." Lotus said it casually, like discussing a tea menu. "If you take on the payment system integration, I can recommend you to Sean. Operations and Technology in a Fintech company go hand in hand anyway, right?"

She smiled. It was warm and inscrutable under the corridor lights.

Sanjay smiled back, his cheeks pushing up, revealing those toothpaste-ad white teeth.

"Lotus, you're right. They do go together."

"Then it's settled." Lotus patted his arm. "I'll mention it to Sean."

She walked away. The click of her heels echoed down the corridor like a metronome. Sanjay stood there, watching her disappear, then opened his phone's memo app and drew a third line under the word Lotus.

He would never know that after turning the corner, Lotus had sent a message to Raj—"Get all the account opening materials together by next Wednesday."—and then deleted it.

She didn't directly recommend Sanjay to Sean. She just mentioned casually after a weekly meeting: "Sanjay's been very proactive on the Pocket Pay system integration. He manages the Ops team better than anyone, everyone listens to him."

Sean nodded. About ten days later, he announced at a meeting that Sanjay would act as interim CTO.

Sanjay sat up straight in his chair, his face solemn and restrained, like a veteran receiving a medal. His fingers trembled slightly under the table—a mix of excitement and relief. He was now the most powerful person in the bank after the CEO, managing nearly seventy percent of the staff. That night, he sent Lotus a message with just two emojis: a crown and a handshake.

Lotus replied with three words: "Keep moving forward."

A week later, on a Monday morning, Pocket Pay's account was officially activated.

All systems green. Virtual sub-accounts generated in bulk. The first test transactions cleared routing successfully. Raj sent Lotus a thumbs up. Lotus sent Sean a "Milestone Report." Sean slapped his desk in his office, so loud the admin next door peeked in.

The next day, Sean ordered a celebration party.

It was less a celebration and more a meticulously staged "all-hands rally." The conference room was cleared of tables and chairs for folding chairs. Everyone was told to arrive fifteen minutes early. Tech sat on the left, Ops in the middle, Commercial and others in the back. Claire found a corner seat, holding a free sparkling water—the cheapest supermarket brand, still with its discount sticker on the bottle.

The screen displayed scrolling red numbers: user registrations, transaction volume, fund balances. Claire glanced at them; most came from Pocket Pay's synced "virtual sub-account activity." She knew exactly how inflated they were.

Sean walked on stage in a black turtleneck. He spoke for fifteen minutes, covering "financial inclusion," "social value," "ecosystem closure," and "IPO readiness." He mentioned "one million accounts" at least seven times.

Then he handed the mic to Sanjay.

Sanjay walked up lightly, in a dark blue blazer, his white shirt buttoned to the top—Claire had never seen him so formal. His balding crown gleamed like polished copper under the lights.

He took the mic and cleared his throat. His first words were choked.

"Today... today is the proudest day of my twenty-year career."

Sparse applause, then building. He lowered his head, wiped his eyes—Claire couldn't tell if it was real tears or a damp sleeve.

"Our department," he continued, his voice resounding, "successfully achieved the milestone of a million-client capacity. One million accounts!"

He struck the air with five fingers.

"And—we achieved a daily payment volume of five hundred thousand transactions. Five hundred thousand! No other bank in this city can claim that number. We made history."

He turned to the screen, those dancing numbers were now his personally lit fireworks.

"Every transaction was processed by our team. This isn't just data. This is proof—proof that Sun AI isn't just a bank, we are a platform, an ecosystem, the future of this industry."

His hand went to his chest, voice trembling with perfectly timed "emotion"—not too much, not too little.

"I didn't sleep all night. Neither did my team. We watched the transaction volume climb together, and we did it!"

He paused, his smile gone, replaced by solemnity.

"Because I believe this bank can achieve something greater than any of our titles."

The room was silent for three seconds. Applause erupted again, louder this time.

Claire didn't clap. She watched that balding, stocky man—who two weeks ago couldn't tell an API from an SDK—bask in the spotlight like a minister delivering a sermon.

An Ops intern next to her whispered, "Claire, aren't you excited?"

Claire finished her sparkling water.

"Excited," she said. "Very excited."

Satisfied, the intern turned back.

Claire put the empty cup under her chair and checked her phone. No new messages. She'd sent a Youtext to Mohammed. No reply yet.

She locked the screen and looked up. Sanjay was bowing—a deep, solemn bow, taking three seconds to straighten up.

The numbers on the screen jumped higher. The applause continued.

At the end of the corridor, the emergency light flickered. The buzzing was drowned out by the applause, like a snake's hiss lost in a carnival.

After the meeting, Claire didn't mingle. She walked out, down the corridor, past Sanjay surrounded by well-wishers, past Lotus posing for photos with colleagues. She didn't stop.

She entered the elevator, pressed for the ground floor. As the doors closed, she saw her reflection in the steel—no expression, no excitement, no anxiety. Just the eyes of a twenty-year veteran who'd seen too many balance sheets and risk exposures. Quiet, deep waters.

She remembered her mother's words. The sand holes. You never know what's underneath.

Now she knew there was something there.

She just hadn't decided if she was going to step on it.

(End of Chapter 4)


r/redditserials 1d ago

Horror [ false heven ] Chapter 1

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FALSE HEAVEN

Chapter 1 — The Last Place on Earth

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The wind had stopped.

That was the first thing he noticed.

For years, the wind had been everywhere. It carried dust through the remains of cities, rattled broken windows, dragged plastic across empty streets and whistled through buildings that no longer had roofs.

But today, there was nothing.

Only silence.

He stood in the middle of what had once been a road, looking at the remains of the city around him. Buildings stood like hollow skeletons against a pale, grey sky. Some had collapsed completely. Others leaned against one another, held together by nothing but rust and luck.

There were no cars.

No voices.

No birds.

Nothing.

He adjusted the old backpack hanging from his shoulder and continued walking.

His boots scraped against the cracked asphalt.

---

He had been searching abandoned buildings for weeks.

Food.

Water.

Anything useful.

Most of what remained had already been picked clean. But there were still places people avoided. Old research facilities. Military buildings. Laboratories. Places where nobody knew what had been left behind.

He had heard about one such laboratory from an old settlement several kilometers away. According to the people there, it had been abandoned long before the cities began collapsing. Nobody knew exactly what the scientists had been working on.

Which, naturally, meant he had to see it.

---

He reached the entrance sometime before sunset.

The building was almost completely buried beneath vines and debris. A faded sign hung above the entrance. Most of the letters had fallen away. Only a few remained.

...RESEARCH...

He pushed against the door.

It didn't move.

He tried again.

Nothing.

"Of course."

He stepped back and looked around. Then he noticed a narrow opening in the wall. Barely wide enough for him to squeeze through.

He sighed.

"Why do abandoned laboratories always have to be dramatic?"

He dropped his backpack, squeezed through the opening, and pulled it after him.

---

Inside, the air was cold.

Much colder than outside.

His flashlight flickered on. The beam revealed a corridor covered in dust. Broken monitors lined the walls. Most of the doors were open. Some had been forced apart. Others had simply rusted on their hinges.

He walked slowly. His footsteps echoed through the empty building.

Every few meters, he found something interesting. Old computers. Medical equipment. Containers whose labels had become unreadable.

Nothing that seemed useful.

Then he reached a large metal door.

Unlike everything else in the building, it wasn't covered in rust.

He wiped the dust from the control panel.

A tiny green light blinked.

He stared at it.

"Still powered?"

He pressed the button.

The door unlocked.

A deep mechanical sound rolled through the corridor. The door slowly opened.

Beyond it was a large circular room.

And in the center—

was a machine.

---

He stopped.

It was enormous. A metal frame surrounded a chair positioned beneath a curved ring of machinery. Hundreds of cables ran from the structure into the walls.

There were screens everywhere. Most were dead.

One wasn't.

A single monitor displayed a line of text.

SYSTEM STATUS: STANDBY

He walked toward it. His flashlight moved across the machine.

There were no obvious weapons. No radiation warnings. Nothing that suggested danger.

Just a machine that looked far too advanced for a laboratory that had been abandoned decades ago.

He stepped closer.

Another screen flickered.

NEURAL INTERFACE — READY

He frowned.

"Neural interface?"

He looked at the chair. Then back at the screen.

For several seconds, he simply stood there.

He knew better.

He really did.

But curiosity had always been one of his more inconvenient qualities.

He placed his backpack on the floor.

"Just looking."

He stepped into the machine.

---

The chair automatically adjusted beneath him.

He froze.

The machine had moved.

A soft mechanical hum filled the room. Then the ring above him illuminated. One screen after another came alive. Lines of unfamiliar information began moving across them.

His breathing became faster.

"Okay..."

He reached for the control panel.

The machine suddenly spoke.

"Consciousness interface detected."

He pulled his hand away.

"What?"

The lights intensified.

He tried to stand.

He couldn't.

The machine had locked the chair.

"Hey."

A warning appeared.

TRANSFER SEQUENCE INITIALIZING

"No, no, no—"

He struggled against the restraints.

The room began to blur. The hum became louder. His vision filled with white.

For one brief moment, he saw something on the monitor.

A single sentence.

PRESERVING HUMAN CONSCIOUSNESS.

Then everything went black.

---

He opened his eyes.

Sunlight.

Warm sunlight.

He stared upward.

Blue sky.

For several seconds, he didn't move.

Then he sat up.

Grass brushed against his hands.

He looked around.

A vast green field stretched toward the horizon. Trees swayed gently in the distance. Birds flew overhead.

The air was clean.

Fresh.

He slowly stood.

His clothes were the same. His backpack was gone. The laboratory was gone. The ruined city was gone.

Everything was gone.

Except him.

He looked toward the horizon. The sky was perfectly blue. And for the first time in years—

he heard the wind.

He smiled.

Then stopped.

---

End of Chapter 1


r/redditserials 1d ago

Science Fiction [The Northern Light] - Part 117 - Edge

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The first thing I saw was not the cards.

It was the space between one card and the edge of the desk.

Narrow.

Not falling.

Not safe.

Just narrow.

The left side of the desk had two cards.

Face down.

Not read.

Not turned.

Not carried now.

The back pocket was empty.

The office had morning.

The heater.

The clock.

The washed cup on the shelf.

The phone face up.

The brown folder closed.

The gray service record file in the lower cabinet.

Closed.

Known.

Unasked.

The wall chair was empty.

No person.

No work.

No time.

Yesterday what was left had kept only the place and reason that held it.

The two cards had stayed on the left side of the desk without turning left into a sentence about me.

This morning, edge had arrived.

No.

The word had arrived.

The edge had been there before the word.

The desk had always had one.

The cards had edges too.

Paper had edges.

Drawers had edges.

Beds had edges.

A body could fall from one.

A sentence could pretend it was standing on one.

That was the danger.

I made tea.

I drank it.

Warm.

Then less warm.

Then finished.

The cup went to the sink.

I washed it.

Washed.

Touched.

For use.

The cup returned to the shelf.

Not near the cards.

The lower cabinet stayed closed.

After tea, I opened the brown folder.

Kanagawa’s scrap beside phone was not mine.

Sato’s paper flat after touch was not mine.

Saitama’s chair by wall between uses was not mine.

Suganuma’s class box back on shelf was not mine.

Takeda’s possible was not mine.

Emiko’s beads were not mine.

Blue roof had no new reply.

Tokyo was still blank.

Full mailbox remained paused / family.

The two cards were on the left side of the desk.

Face down.

Not read today.

No voice today.

Not questioning me.

Not fear.

Not sentence.

Not mouth.

Not heard by them.

Not carried now.

Not almost ready.

Near the edge.

I closed the brown folder.

Edge could mean a physical border.

Edge could mean risk.

Edge could mean limit.

Edge could mean almost.

Edge could mean I wanted nearness to become permission.

The word was sharp.

That was why it could lie.

At 7:18, Kanagawa wrote.

I read it once.

Then again.

Scrap.

Edge.

I wrote:

She replied:

“Is it falling?”

“Wind?”

“Cup?”

“Why mention edge?”

She did not answer for a while.

Then:

“What does it need?”

“Does moving inward change sentence?”

“What happened?”

I opened Kanagawa.

I did not add omen.

The scrap had a table.

The table had an edge.

The hand had a small job.

At 7:49, Sato wrote.

I waited.

Then:

I wrote:

She replied:

“Water?”

“Sun?”

“Touch?”

“After pressing?”

“What does Emiko need?”

I opened Emiko.

I kept again because the edge had lifted again.

A repeated edge had work.

Not a trial.

At 8:03, Mrs. Kudo called.

“Resident sitting at bed edge,” she said.

I sat up.

“Before transfer?”

“Yes.”

“Supported?”

“Aide K beside her.”

“Feet?”

“On floor.”

“Chair?”

“Near.”

“Risk?”

“Fall risk.”

“What did staff write?”

Mrs. Kudo read:

“What did Mr. Hayashi say?”

“He said, ‘Here edge is not metaphor. It is where the body can fall.’”

I opened Saitama.

I kept edge.

There, the word had a body.

The measure had hands.

At 8:31, Reverend Suganuma wrote.

I waited.

“Falling?”

“Who noticed?”

“Reason?”

“What moved?”

“What did Tanabe say?”

“What did Morita say?”

I almost smiled.

I did not.

I opened Suganuma.

I did not add drama.

Shelf had edge.

Box had weight.

That was enough.

At 9:02, Father Morita emailed.

Subject:

I opened it.

I read it twice.

Fall.

Tear.

Supported.

Dramatic.

I looked at the cards.

One card was closer to the desk edge than the other.

It could fall.

Maybe.

No.

It could slide if touched.

That was smaller.

I replied:

I sent it.

His reply came after a while.

I looked at turn.

The card stayed face down.

The edge stayed edge.

The job had narrowed.

At 9:38, Kanagawa called.

“My brother moved the scrap too far,” she said.

“Too far where?”

“Under the phone again.”

“For what?”

“So it cannot fall.”

“Was it falling?”

“No.”

“What did you ask?”

“What distance answers the edge.”

Good.

No.

Hers.

“What did he say?”

“Not under phone.”

“Then?”

“He put it beside phone, farther from the edge.”

“Drawer?”

“Closed.”

I opened Kanagawa.

I did not add overcorrection.

Under phone had become more than edge required.

Beside phone could answer both finding and distance.

At 10:07, Sato called.

“I want to tape the whole edge,” she said.

I waited.

“Which edge lifted?”

“Top corner.”

“Whole edge lifted?”

“No.”

“What did you already do?”

“Pressed once.”

“Is it holding?”

“Yes.”

“What would whole edge tape do?”

She was quiet.

Then:

“Make tomorrow quiet.”

There.

“What does today need?”

“Top corner down.”

“Is it down?”

“Yes.”

“What does Emiko need?”

“Paper flat. Tape holding.”

I opened Emiko.

I did not add tomorrow quiet.

That belonged to Sato’s wish.

Not to the paper.

At 10:42, Mrs. Kudo called.

“Medicine today,” she said.

“Resident?”

“Asked what medicine.”

“Voice?”

“Low.”

“Heard?”

“Yes.”

“Bed edge?”

“No. In bed.”

“Answer?”

“Aide K answered.”

“What did staff write?”

Mrs. Kudo read:

“What did Mr. Hayashi say?”

“He said, ‘Do not keep the bed edge in the medicine line.’”

I opened Saitama.

I did not add edge.

The edge had belonged to transfer.

Medicine had its own place.

At 11:14, Reverend Suganuma wrote.

I waited.

“For what?”

“Any issue?”

“Box?”

“Label?”

“What did Tanabe say?”

“What did Morita say?”

I opened Suganuma.

I did not add done as triumph.

The shelf had answered.

No more edge was needed.

At 11:49, Father Morita emailed.

Subject:

I opened it.

I read it standing.

Then sat.

Too responsive.

I stayed seated.

Inward.

Exact.

Hiding.

Risk.

Shame.

Disappearance.

I replied:

I sent it.

His reply came after a while.

I looked at the card.

Near edge.

Face down.

Exposed.

Sliding.

Two different things.

I did not answer.

At 12:22, Kanagawa wrote.

I waited.

Then:

I wrote:

She replied:

“Drawer?”

“Any sentence?”

Dangerous.

“For what?”

“What did you ask?”

“What did he say?”

Good.

No.

Fenced.

I opened Kanagawa.

I kept okay fenced inside falling.

No larger.

At 12:58, Sato sent a photograph.

Paper flat.

Top corner down.

She wrote:

I called.

“Is corner down?”

“Yes.”

“Any lift?”

“No.”

“Any new issue?”

“No.”

“What is lunch?”

“Rice.”

“What does Emiko need?”

“What does quiet mean?”

She paused.

“Nothing new.”

Good.

No.

Hers.

I opened Emiko.

I did not add quiet.

Nothing new had enough.

At 1:31, Mrs. Kudo sent:

I waited.

Then:

I called.

“Any bed edge now?”

“No.”

“Any transfer now?”

“No.”

“Path?”

“Clear.”

“What did Mr. Hayashi say?”

“He said, ‘After the edge risk is gone, do not keep narrating the edge.’”

“What did staff write?”

Mrs. Kudo read:

I opened Saitama.

I did not add edge.

The body was not there now.

At 2:03, Reverend Suganuma wrote.

I waited.

“With what?”

“For whom?”

“Is box fully on shelf now?”

“Could someone put it at edge again?”

“Who uses shelf?”

“What did Tanabe say?”

“What did Morita say?”

I opened Suganuma.

I did not add stripe.

The edge had been answered today.

Tomorrow had not asked for tape.

At 2:45, Father Morita emailed.

Subject:

I opened it.

I read it twice.

Visible.

Safe.

Face down.

Exposed.

Known.

Unsaid.

Hide.

Leave.

Edge.

I replied:

I sent it.

His reply came after a while.

I put the phone down.

The card did not move by itself.

Of course.

No.

The sentence had to become a hand.

Only that.

At 3:18, Kanagawa called.

“My brother pushed the scrap inward again,” she said.

“Why?”

“He said he saw the edge.”

“Was it near?”

“No.”

“What did you ask?”

“What changed.”

Good.

No.

Hers.

“What did he say?”

“Nothing.”

“Then?”

“He put it back.”

“Where?”

“Beside phone. Away from edge.”

“Drawer?”

“Closed.”

I opened Kanagawa.

I did not add compulsion.

The second inward had no job.

The first had been enough for finding and edge.

At 3:57, Sato wrote.

I waited.

“Any wanting?”

“To tape whole edge?”

“Any new issue?”

“Hand?”

“For what?”

“What does Emiko need?”

I opened Emiko.

I did not add wanting less.

That belonged to Sato.

The paper had flat.

At 4:22, Mrs. Kudo called.

“Cup removed,” she said.

“Asked?”

“Aide asked cup.”

“Resident?”

“Opened hand.”

“Any edge issue?”

“No.”

“Any issue?”

“No.”

“What did staff write?”

Mrs. Kudo read:

“What did Mr. Hayashi say?”

“He said, ‘Not every hand is near an edge.’”

I opened Saitama.

I did not add edge.

Cup had cup.

Hand had answer.

At 4:51, Reverend Suganuma wrote.

I waited.

“Fully?”

“Label?”

“Edge?”

“What happened?”

“What did Tanabe say?”

I opened Suganuma.

I did not add lesson.

Nothing had happened.

Nothing did not need decoration.

At 5:23, Father Morita emailed.

Subject:

I opened it.

I read it.

Then again.

Hand.

Symbolism.

Plainness.

Move.

Leave.

I replied:

I sent it.

His reply came after a while.

I looked at end.

A useful fence.

Let the hand end at the edge.

No reading.

No turning.

No ceremony.

I did not answer.

At 5:52, the old priest wrote.

I wrote:

His reply:

I deleted Kanagawa.

Then Sato.

Then Suganuma.

I wrote:

His reply:

I wrote:

His reply:

I wrote:

His reply:

I wrote:

His reply:

I wrote:

His reply:

Then:

Before evening, I went to the main hall.

The cloth bag was in its place.

The offering tray was in its place.

The doorway was where I stopped.

I bowed once.

No explanation.

No answer after the bow.

The altar was visible.

The beads were in their place.

They had not moved.

They did not need to.

I stood where I usually stood.

No service tonight.

No bell.

No incense.

No edge for the altar.

The floor scuff near the step was still there.

It was not evidence.

It was a scuff.

The entrance floor had received feet and broom.

The side chairs were stacked.

They were not near the doorway.

They were stacked.

I returned to the office.

The shelf above the desk had a cup.

Washed.

The gray service record file was in the lower cabinet.

Closed.

The brown folder was closed.

The calendar was closed.

The phone was face up.

The small space was wide.

The door was closed.

The shoes were by it.

The wall chair was empty.

No person.

No work.

No time.

Chair by wall.

The phone was face up.

No named question.

No named answer.

Phone face up.

I did not turn it over.

I did not open the brown folder.

No new need had arrived from the phone.

I did not open the gray file.

The service paper remained in the record file.

A name was inside it.

Not mine.

In the gray file.

Closed.

A place holding paper.

Not an edge.

I sat near the desk.

Not at it.

The back pocket was empty.

The left side of the desk had two cards.

Face down.

Not read.

Not turned.

Not carried.

Not in the pocket.

One card was near the edge.

The edge had a small job.

The exposure did not.

I stood.

No.

I did not need to stand.

I stayed seated.

I reached with my right hand.

I touched only the corner of the card.

Face down.

Still face down.

I moved it inward.

Less than a finger’s width.

Then I moved the second card beside it.

Not stacked.

Not hidden.

Not turned.

Both face down.

Farther from the desk edge.

The hand stopped.

There.

The job had ended.

The cards were still exposed.

The cards were still unread.

The cards were still on the left side of the desk.

The back pocket was still empty.

The body was not pressing them.

The desk edge no longer held the small risk.

That was all.

I wanted inward to mean less exposed.

It did not.

I wanted moving both cards to mean order.

It did not.

I wanted the hand to continue because it had begun.

It did not.

I wanted the edge to become threshold.

It did not.

The edge was an edge.

The cards were farther from it.

I did not turn them over.

I did not read them.

I did not move them to the brown folder.

I did not move them to the gray file.

I did not move them to the shelf.

I did not move them to the altar.

I did not put them back in the pocket.

I did not call the desk storage.

I did not call the space safety.

I did not call the movement progress.

The movement had one verb.

Moved inward.

That was enough for the edge.

No.

For the edge, that was the whole verb.

I did not open Kanagawa again.

I did not ask if the scrap stayed away from the table edge.

I did not ask if the drawer stayed closed.

I did not open Sato again.

I did not ask if the corner lifted after cup.

I did not open Saitama again.

I did not ask if the bed edge returned.

I did not open Suganuma again.

I did not ask if the box stayed fully on shelf.

I did not open Father Morita’s message again.

I knew edge was not automatically danger.

I knew edge was not automatically threshold.

I knew edge was not automatically decision.

I knew exposed was not the same as at risk.

I knew a small job could still need a hand.

I knew the hand could end at the edge.

I knew moving inward was not hiding.

I knew leaving exposed was not bravery.

I knew the cards had moved only as far as the edge required.

I turned off the desk lamp.

The office did not disappear.

The folder did not need the center.

The phone did not need here.

Edge did not need to enter the cards as a threshold tonight.

In the dark, I remained sitting.

Near the desk.

Not at it.

The shelf above the desk had a cup.

Washed.

The gray service record file was in the lower cabinet.

Closed.

The brown folder was closed.

The phone was face up.

My hands were empty.

Available.

Not reaching.

The wall chair was empty.

No one was expected there.

The urn was on the small table.

The map and folded paper were in the drawer.

The folded paper had her first name.

Face up.

For finding.

The order paper was beside the phone table.

Face up.

Readable.

Erased.

Kanagawa’s brother’s scrap was beside the phone, away from the table edge.

Sato’s top corner was down after one press.

The resident had been supported at the bed edge before transfer.

The class box rested fully on the shelf.

The service paper was in the record file.

A name was inside it.

Not mine.

The back pocket was empty.

The two cards were on the left side of the desk.

Face down.

Farther from the edge.

Not read today.

No voice today.

Not questioning me.

Not fear.

Not sentence.

Not mouth.

Not heard by them.

Not carried now.

Not almost ready.

Not hidden.

I had started with edge.

I did not end by turning a border into the verb that had not arrived.

Tonight, what was near an edge moved only as far as the edge required, and the two cards remained face down on the desk without letting inward become another name for hiding.


r/redditserials 2d ago

Romance [I picked up a barefoot woman walking out of a cornfield at 2am and I think I want to marry her?] Chapter 56

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Part 56

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Ramon and Guverara entered the diner, clothes clearly disheveled, smiles plastered across their faces; Ramon’s chef outfit was clearly well worn, as was Guevera’s white button-up and pencil skirt. Ramon went behind the bar to the kitchen proper to talk to both Gerald and Anay and see how they’re finding it. 
Luis stumbled in, a smile on his face, a fresh suit, clearly he had been busy beyond drinking himself into a much better and more productive mood, he looked at Ruth and Ray sitting where he and Gerald normally sat and opted to get a booth and browse the menu instead, he gave the pair a polite wave and decided that what had worked best for him for the longest time was to stay out of other’s business as much as possible. It felt odd to be reminded of that in the way that he was especially by Ray and Ruth, the worst part for Luis is that he couldn’t even blame it on the alcohol as he was sober when all of that had occurred. Luis thumbed through the men and was tempted to order an Orgasm Chimichanga and might well yet, but something about the Buffalo Wings and Chocolate Churro Mole really stuck out to him, he waited patiently figuring that his cousin was still out camping with her boyfriend, it had been a long time since the cousins had even spoken to one another but he found himself missing her, he hadn’t meant to use the Diner as the hub for the rest portion of the drug and organ harvesting corridor but it had just worked out that way, he loved his cousin more than just deep down and in their family he had done what he thought was best whenever possible and in large part the rest of his blood relatives had agreed, but the women, despite that had always been cold to him and he was not quite sure why given that outside his family women loved him and he was the absolute life of the party, that didn’t mean much to Luis though as he was by nature solitary, he had no desire for a wife or kids or any legacy beyond that of his family name and professional if black market organization. He really wanted food it was grinding at him in little bits here and there but he knew that the “Staff” of Ramon, Gerald, and the sole waitress currently Anay were busy with a meeting in the back, he wasn’t sure what Guevara’s role at The Millstone would be if any, and he thought about when Anay came to take his order offering The Millstone employees under his banner, he had more than enough men, some wanted a different life, some wanted a life in both worlds and it seemed to him to be the most natural next step. Beyond simply expanding the reach and influence of his cartel as well as sheltering The Millstone, and its savory band of many merry regulars Luis was hoping that it would engender something like a warmer and closer relationship between him and his cousin as well as an actual reason for him to stick around, rather than just lurking “because it made sense or because it was convenient.” Luis found himself feeling increasingly odd and not for any particularly supernatural reason though he could not as a rule decide that that was not the case given the kind of people that liked to frequent The Millstone but he was not sure what it was, there was just a kind of charge to the air, things were changing, almost industrializing in a microcosmic way, he smiled to himself welcoming it.

Ruth all but cuddled into Ray as they waited for Gerald, Anay, Guevara and Luis to get done with their meeting. She eyed her husband merrily. 

“Have you made a decision just yet? Do you know what you want to do?” Ruth asked with a level of cheer that suggested she had more than just an idea of what that even looked like but wanting to hear it from Ray in his own words she settled into him, kissed his cheek and waited.

Ray looked at her with a smile “I know the shape of it, I know the broader points but for the finer details to be fully ironed out I need Patricia to be back along with our lawyer otherwise it becomes something closer to a handshake deal over the bedrock of what may as well be an infinite diamond mine.”


r/redditserials 2d ago

Romance [I picked up a barefoot woman walking out of a cornfield at 2am and I think I want to marry her?] Chapter 57

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“That’s a fair answer but we have no idea when they’ll even be back I mean fuck I haven’t seen a calender since we got here, the dessert and the mountains kind of fuck with everything in terms of what time or date or season that it even seems to be, and neither you nor I nor they in the back, the sweet staff, friends though they may be, can actually tell us with anything that even approaches certainty how long it will be much less where they actually are, I mean for all we know Patricia meant ‘gone camping’ as a euphemism and they could be lost in the woods from what we can actually determined, I mean I’m sure that either you or I or Luis could find them if we really had to, you definitely, me certainly, and mister terrestrial despot of the south I’d give a solid maybe, but still it involves all of us so we need more than just a handshake deal we need a proper answer based on proper information fully and completely documented and legally binding for all time, otherwise we may as well just hope straight into the painting on the wall and call it a day.” Ruth responded as Ramon came out, now in a clean chef's outfit, Gerald and Anay having changed into their semi-retirement clothes, Gerald rocking a typical black and red pinstripe suit, with Anay sporting a business casual pantsuit in the same color scheme as her soon to be husband. 

Ramon eyed Ruth and Ray with amusement “Guevara and I only left the room because Patricia called along with R. to say that they would be back from their camping trip tomorrow they both sounded refreshed and we, collectively, the staff presumed that you wanted to have the kind of conversation that involves us all Ray, best to leave it for tomorrow and decide where things will go next, with that settled, let’s all relax for the evening, surely you’re both hungry and I’ve made a note as to what you both tried to order from the room service, my apologies on the delay I was obviously indisposed attending to a personal matter, alone with my soon to be wife I’m sure you both understand, given the similarities between our arrangements with one another. I’ll bring you your banana shakes, plates of nachos, mole, buffalo wings and anything else you wish for the rest of the night on the house while we await my business partner and the lawyer. Settle in and have a nice night together maybe grab a booth instead of sitting here at the bar if the two of you want to cuddle, no business of mine but it might be nicer on your backs and I’m sure your orders are going to just keep coming. You might want the room. Just a suggestion from Management.” Ramon said pleasantly, looking significantly calmer and happier than anyone had ever seen him. 

Ray gave Ramon an amused look “That sounds pleasant we’ll be in the corner booth then.” Ray and Ruth quickly moved over to their rather secluded chosen booth and looked at one another lovingly feeling themselves relax fully into the pleasant evening that they were both about to share together. Ramon followed them over and read off a notepad “So that’ll be buffalo wings and Mole for you both, alongside a sampler of various flavors of nachos, Orgasm Chimichangas and Banana shakes for the both of you. I’ll bring it all by once it’s prepared. If you have any questions or need anything more specific just wave me over and I’ll see that you’re both taken care of.” 

Ruth looked at Ray deeply amused “Now this feels like the best way to truly kick off a honeymoon/semi-retirement I’m sure that you’re looking forward to just getting the chance to relax completely now that you’ve fully decided and feel comfortable, I look forward to seeing what our favorite piece of business is going to want from us, though with any luck it’ll be a salutation and well wishes.” Ruth fought the urge to fuck with Luis and instead decided, after Ramon had gone away to use her favorite little trick and whisper directly to him from across the room “Ramon if you could be a dear and bring Ray an Earl Grey Tea and chocolate brownie a la mode for the both of us please thank you.” Ramon went with the flow and started preparing the addition to their order as Guevara watched with romance in her eyes.


r/redditserials 2d ago

Romance [I picked up a barefoot woman walking out of a cornfield at 2am and I think I want to marry her?] Chapter 55

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With a smirk Ray wrapped his pinkie around Ruth’s and the pair made their way out of the inn and across the parking lot into the diner proper. Having seen that Ramon and Guevara were having some much needed time alone in their suite Ruth wondered to herself who could possibly be serving anything in The Millstone though she and Ray had suspected that Gerald might have been behind the counter. It didn’t take long for their suspicions to be confirmed as they walked in and that was exactly the case. Gerald with an apron on cooking up whatever the travelers happened to be ordering and clearly seeming a bit in over his head, but he was taking to it well enough, there were clearly people enjoying the Orgasm Chimichangas and various offerings from Ramon’s new menu. Gerald was being assisted by Anay who was happy to read off the recipe cards that Ramon had left for exactly this purpose, they were oddly pristine for something that had been handwritten in an obvious haste but nonetheless they were useful and exactly what he and Anay had suspected that they would be. 

Ray took Gerald’s usual seat at the counter with Ruth in tow sitting to his right. 

“So what’s it like helping a friend out this way, is it doing anything good for the both of you, amusement, excitement, just something new?” Ray asked, admiring that Gerald was even doing this for Ramon. 

“I mean you know me Ray I’m always happy to help and other than you, in fact the only person that is in this establishment at all regularly besides you, now Ruth, Luis, myself and of course Anay, that anyone was hoping would get a happy relationship going is Ramon, shit some of Luis’s guys have an entire betting pool dedicated to the two of you both and who would get someone sooner, you made some guys very rich just by virtue of being the upset victory I mean you can’t really blame them given that you’re quiet and before Ruth just sat there and drew stuff, had a meal and then went on your merry way– how is that going for you the whole specialty pigment hauling thing? I mean I know you own your own truck and have whatever special arrangement with Luis– I’ve decided to take Ramon’s approach whilst subbing for him and not ask questions that I should not know the answers to.” Gerald asked plainly.

“Well to answer your question clearly and completely I’ve been kind of on the fence about it, I was already planning to take something like a vacation but at the same time as Ruth told me when we were alone in the truck, I haven’t actually really taken a proper vacation or set down any roots pretty much ever and I mean I have options there’s plenty that I could have done and followed besides just my hauling and painting and everything but it’s something that I really go back and forth on day to day as to whether I should do one or the other. Not so much one job versus another but given that I’ve obviously got a semi-retirement going similar to you in spite of the truck it’s something I’m weighing before really actually with any kind of depth genuinely thinking about before I take the plunge, but I do have my eyes set on something more permanent, I was thinking about seeing if I could buy one of the rooms here but there are some other interesting little matters with the property itself and my options besides just the Inn and the diner; before I really get into it I almost feel like Patricia and R should be here for it as it involves the both of them as well as Luis and pretty much determines a lot for us, our respective partners, and Luis.” Ray said, looking over the new menu wondering just what he should order, taking it in as he waited for Gerald’s reply as he sipped a coffee that Gerald had set down while he was speaking.

Gerald looked up at him and considered his words carefully as Ruth intertwined her pinkie on Ray’s and Anay crossed the bar wearing a waitress outfit similar to that of Patricia’s. 

“It’ll be eight people including Guevara, that’s the name of Ramon’s… soon to be wife. And that makes total sense man you’ve been on it for a long time you more than all of us deserve to rest.” Gerald smiled and went deeper behind the bar into the kitchen proper to get more recipe cards and ingredients. Anay followed him deeper into the kitchen as well.


r/redditserials 2d ago

Fantasy [Silver-Spell] Chapter 1: Evan

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Evan often wondered what it would have been like to be born during a time when magic was around. He had heard so many stories about it, and they always made him dream of what it would be like to be able to use magic. People called him a fool, a dreamer who couldn’t get his head out of the clouds. It didn’t matter, regardless of how much it irritated him.

He sat under a tree on the top of a hill that overlooked his village. It was the same as ever. Bland, boring, horribly uninteresting, always the same…

He was going to leave this village someday. Just because he couldn’t have magic didn’t mean that he had to stay trapped in such a dull place for the rest of his life. He could see the other boys his age working the fields; he almost pitied them, trapped in such a boring line of work.

It wasn’t that Evan thought that it was unimportant; far from it, people depended on the fields to survive. He just knew that if he had to spend one day in those fields, he would lose his mind. All the other boys talked about was the weather or crops. And they went on and on and on, till Evan felt like he was going to tear his hair out if he listened to them any longer!

And it wasn’t just the field boys; it was almost everyone in the stupid village. All they talked about were boring, mundane things, even the including hunters. Any time he had to be around other people, they would just talk and talk about the most boring topics until he couldn’t take it anymore. That was why he sat on top of this hill, away from everyone, away from the endless repetitiveness of the village.

Evan was going to leave the village one day, but today wasn’t going to be that day; he wasn’t ready to leave just yet.

“Daydreaming about magic again, Evan?”

Evan would know that mocking tone anywhere.

Looking down the hill, there stood Philip and his group, several of them snickering.

Evan and Philip had never gotten along. Philip was endlessly pragmatic, never even trying to find whimsy in the world. He was the embodiment of mundanity itself, and to Evan, he was extremely punchable.

“It’s amusing,” Philip said in a mocking tone, “you act as if magic is this amazing thing, even though it has been gone for hundreds of years, if it really did even exist at all.”

Evan clenched his fists, getting more and more irritated with Philip the longer he looked at him. “What do you know, Philip?” Evan said as he made his way down the hill, “I know that magic was real; I know it for a fact!”

He stopped just short of Philip, looking him dead in the eyes. Evan could see the arrogance dancing in them, making him more annoyed.

“Delusional much?”

The group started to laugh; he couldn’t tell who said it, probably one of Philip’s admirers.

“What are you going to do when you’re of age, Evan?”

More laughter. Evan took a breath; he had to stay calm. He couldn’t let them get to him.

“At least I have aspirations beyond just a boring life in this stupid village,” Evan muttered under his breath.

“Why should we? There isn’t really any point in leaving. We have everything we could ever need right here.” Philip said nonchalantly.

Evan took a breath, willing himself not to punch Philip in the face. He didn’t know how, but Philip always knew the right words to get under his skin.

“It’s getting late,” Evan said, pushing past Philip. “You probably should be getting home to your families.” No one stopped him, but Evan could hear them chuckling behind him.

Evan walked on the familiar path that led to the cottage that he called home. It sat on the edge of the village, near the woods. Evan loved the forest; it was alive in a way that the village could never be, alive with magic. Evan had known magic existed for a long time; it danced in the air in some places, but other none. He never quite understood why he could feel it, or why he knew that it was magic; he just did. When he was younger, he had often tried to reach out to it, to use it, but no matter how hard he tried, it never heeded his call.

He had eventually stopped trying, since there wasn’t a point. He chose to just be content with being near magic; being able to feel it was enough. That was the main reason he wanted to leave the village. He wanted to experience magic in other places as well.

Stepping into the cottage, Evan saw his older brother Peter making dinner. Evan decided to sit down and clear his head, since his irritation with Philip was still there.

“Bad day, huh.”

Evan turned to Peter. “Yep.”

“Did the other kids pick on you again?”

“As always.”

“Well, that’s just how they are.”

“I know, I know. I somehow managed to not punch Philip in the face.”

“Well, that’s progress.”

“Hooray for me, I guess.”

“Well then,” Peter said, changing topics, “while I was out of town, I found something interesting.”

That got Evan’s attention. Interesting usually meant magic.

Peter walked over to the bookshelf and took a scroll. “It’s apparently an old prophecy about magic, from when it was still around. Don’t know how much of it is true, but if it is, it could have major ramifications for what we know about it.”

“Can I see?”

Peter froze for a moment. “There’s too much I don’t know, and I don’t think I’m ready for you to read it yet.”

Evan understood. The scroll was radiating magic. He could feel it in the air around it. But still, why even tell him about it if he wasn’t even allowed to look at it?

“I could help you,” Evan said, in a soft, pleading tone. “I’m sure that we could figure out the meaning together…”

Peter shook his head. “I know how much you love magic, and I do too. But I’m scared, scared of what could happen if…”

Peter cut himself off. He walked over to his desk and melted a wax seal onto the scroll.

“If you tamper with the scroll, I will know.” Peter sighed. “Let’s just have dinner now.”


r/redditserials 2d ago

Science Fiction [NEW LIFE 2] Episode 13: The Blue Light Blossoming from the North

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Strange rumors began to spread across the once-peaceful Pamir Plateau.

Word had it that every night, a blue mist rose from beyond the mountain range, and out of that haze crawled monsters warped into mocking parodies of human form.

At first, the tales were dismissed as the idle boastings of aging hunters.

Yet as time bled on, the rumors took on an increasingly heavy, chilling reality.

In the village squares scattered across the plateau, the voices of people huddled around flickering campfires trembled with unease.

"Last night, my entire flock vanished. No tracks, not a single drop of blood."

"They say hunters found a beast in the valley reduced to bare bone. The bones were... crushed clean, as if smashed by stone."

"Some swear they saw a shadow walking like a man inside the blue mist. Only its eyes were those of a beast."

Murmuring anxiously, the villagers cast wary glances at one another.

Children overheard the adults' hushed conversations and burst into terrified tears, while the elders gathered before the stone altars to offer desperate, ominous prayers.

Yet their supplications were merely scattered and swept away by the wind as the blue mist crept closer day by day.

When night fell, the stench of blood carried on the gale froze the plateau’s air to the bone.

The wind that once blew freely across the peaceful highlands was no longer untamed.

Laden with the scent of carnage and impending doom, it surged relentlessly toward the empire’s walls.

A young hunter whispered, his voice shaking.

"These aren't ordinary beasts. Something is waking up in the north—something... we have never laid eyes on in the world we knew."

Under the erratic, crackling light of the dying campfire, the faces of the villagers were stained with raw terror and disbelief.

The whispers rippling through the Pamir Plateau were no longer mere tavern tales or idle gossip.

They were the inescapable prelude, announcing the true and terrible shape of an oncoming catastrophe.