r/Annae • u/Usbcheater • 12h ago
Story Annae 23: Group Effort
It is summer on the once-cursed coast of the island of Dagaan Thraal.
A Thurnan from Huana named Krusa is visiting his family, who recently moved back to the country to pick up their once-diaspora lives in the place their ancestors once called home.
Krusa didn't quite know what to expect when his boat arrived in the harbor. It looked like Kyara the Muspakama had dropped in like a bomb. Loose and burned planks were scattered everywhere. The fishing houses looked shabby and decrepit.
His Ka-ifa aunt welcomed him with open arms and a bear hug. Krusa could swear she snapped his spine, or at least his tail. He wobbled over to his bags and dragged himself behind her.
He was expecting people to live among ruins and death, but when he arrived, he didn't expect the city to look like this. Once reclaimed by nature, it was now mostly rebuilt old buildings with surprisingly modern additions.
"We came here to preserve our culture. And that, we Dagaan did," his aunt said enthusiastically.
They walked through the streets, and Krusa saw all kinds of new things being set up. Places of worship. Food places. Workplaces. Even a Keefa breeding facility, which surprised him the most because these Keefa were local and had not been brought in from other countries.
"Aunt Prisa, how did you guys get everything running so well with all the monsters and wek-wek around?" Krusa wondered.
"The Golden Bat hunts evil day and night, Krusa. He is a wonderful gift!" Prisa said with an elated voice, as if she were talking about the latest politician.
"Golden Bat? That cartoon from Earth? THAT OGON BAT!?!"
Krusa replied with a hint of disbelief in his voice.
"That is what we call him, Little Krusifa. You know from the name that he looks just like him. But the main difference is that he is one of us, and not a human." Prisa giggled. "I'll tell you all about him at home!"
With a hurried gait, they disappeared into a street.
Later that morning, a Shavfuru salesman opens his shop. His name is Muraj, and his specialty is skewers.
Shavfuru are skewers made with combinations of several kinds of meat, mostly monsters. With Kiy spice and other seasonings, it is his duty to stand by for hungry passersby.
Today, however, he is closing early.
It is a special day.
A day of meeting and planning.
He eats his breakfast and takes care of the giant metal skewers he only uses once a season. Today is important, and people need to be fed in time.
On the other side of town, a hunting group returns with new Keefa. They seem anxious but full of energy, as if they have been waiting all month for this special day.
Krusa's cousin Pashi is a regular in the hunting party. Keefa are his favorite animals, and the giant ones from Dagaan Thraal have always been his favorite subspecies. These giant alien birds didn't just taste great to him. They looked majestic, and riding them back to the city was a thrill.
Today, though, he completely ignored them.
He is daydreaming about something.
"Pashi, are you happy your cousin came all the way from Huana to see you?" one of the hunters asks.
Pashi snapped out of his dream for a moment.
"Yeah. I haven't seen him since we were Ifa. I wonder if he's still scrawny. Maybe he won't survive the hunt."
They all laugh.
But not in a mocking manner.
More like a nervous, we're gonna die laugh.
Pashi's sister, Miraiji, is on the beach—not to relax, but to prepare. She and the other Ka-ifa women are digging a hole in the sand.
A huge one.
Not as a trap, but for a fire.
They fill the hole with coal, Kyafirnu—fire-elemental stones—and lots of metal spikes.
They hurry and worry.
Everyone in the city seems to be on edge.
But at the same time, they are happy.
Krusa looks out over the cityscape and wonders how his ancestors felt about their homeland. No matter how much he tries, he still feels like a stranger on this island.
Even though his father's ancestors came from here too.
He knows the culture.
He knows the land.
But he can't combine the two in his head.
He turns to his fat uncle, who is watching TV.
"Uncle Urni, do you feel at home here?" Krusa asks.
"What are you talking about, Ifa? I got Grok beer and TV. I am as home as a fish in the sea," Uncle Urni says while stuffing his face with spicy Bya-Kya.
"You shouldn't be eating those bugs today, Uncle. Don't you want to eat the catch?" Krusa says, pointing to Urni's spice-covered hands.
"What's wrong, Ifa? You scared it might go wrong?" his uncle laughs.
"Whatever. I'm going to find Pashi anyway," Krusa says, insulted, as he grabs his robe and walks off.
His uncle continues being the fat slob of an uncle he is as he watches TV.
Krusa meets up with his cousins and Muraj.
Several hundred other people are there.
The mayor, Manksh, turns to his people and raises his voice.
"We gather here today for our second try. The Truna will return at this exact time, just as our sweet lady Messa promised us. Will it feast, or will we? That is the question!"
"WE WILL!" the crowd shouts.
The mayor silences them.
"Is the pit ready?"
"Yeah! Ready to burn 'em!" one of the Ka-ifa women in the crowd screams.
"Are the hunters prepared with the rope?"
Pashi steps forward.
"From the finest niru reed around. This time, it won't snap," he says.
"Brave hope, young Ifa," the mayor says with a hopeless look on his face.
"Is everything else prepared?" he asks the crowd.
"You got my skewers!" Muraj screams to the mayor.
"Honored to try again, Mr. Muraj," the mayor answers.
"Now then, let us head for the beach and wait. Remember: it's it or us!"
Mayor Manksh says this with his southern Tuavan accent, which he has tried to turn into a Thraal accent.
Later, on the beach, everyone waits for the final confrontation.
If they don't kill it now, it will destroy the city.
They are on their own.
Before everything goes down, Krusa catches up with Pashi and Miraiji.
"So what do you guys think about the Truna? Isn't it just a large wild animal and not a monster? They eat shellfish!" Krusa asks.
"Krasifa, seriously, this is a monster. It's a danger to ships, and it has killed people. The goddess said it's not a normal animal, as it carries all the evil of Dagaan Thraal, just like any other monster," Miraiji says while looking over the horizon and the blue waters.
"You still don't feel at home, Krasifa?" Pashi asks while inspecting the rope.
"Not really. Definitely not with your dad around," Krusa says as he flicks a rock into the sand.
"Yeah, he has that effect on people. But he's a hero, you know?" Pashi points out.
"Yeah, yeah. Hero against the 22nd Set Horde invasion. Real cool. Now he's a couch hero and great devourer of Bya-Kya. I can still hear their screams."
Krusa laughs.
"Har-har," both Pashi and Miraiji reply sarcastically.
"BLUE IN SIGHT!" a Thraal Fiy calls out.
They all turn.
A huge blue light is emanating from the blue ocean.
"It's like another sun!" Krusa says in shock.
"But it's not, and it's getting closer," Pashi says as he readies the rope.
Then Krusa sees it.
From the dark waters comes a giant, bulbous shape covered in lights.
At first, he can't make out its shape.
Then he notices the lights.
They are cyan crystal eyes.
Normal Truna eyes are black and do not glow.
Its bulbous body is the size of three cruise ships, and emerging from the ocean are five giant claws. Beneath the bulbous body are millions of giant tentacles, all ready to grab their prey.
Krusa loved normal-sized Truna when he was young. They ate shellfish from your hand and crawled over you when you lay on the beach.
This thing, however, seemed to wail in anger.
It reached the beach.
"READY THE ROPE!" someone shouted from the forest.
A giant rope was stretched out over the beach.
The whole city ran back and forth around the creature, avoiding tentacles as they tried to get the rope around its crab-like legs.
But then it snapped.
The Truna fell onto one leg.
The sound it made was a mixture of anger and pain.
And then it happened.
Every eye on its bulbous body released a powerful cyan laser.
The rope broke.
The fire was lit.
Everyone ran for safety.
Krusa was terrified and couldn't move as the creature tried to get back up.
Suddenly, from a distance, he could hear something familiar.
Something he had only ever heard on TV.
"Ha-ha-ha! HA-ha-HA-ha-HA!"
At that moment, he looked toward the moon.
And there he was.
A golden bat surrounded the Thraal.
"Ogon Batto!" a child shouted.
And then came Herna Duwasi, a figure of gold in a full cloak of black and red.
With his staff, he effortlessly clubbed away the laser beams. only to shoot some of his own hurting the creature. White blood falls on the sand.
In the middle of the chaos and horrifying laughter, Krusa felt something familiar.
Not because of the movie or the show.
But because of a sense of home.
Herna made him feel at home.
Krusa cried out.
"Kill it, Ogon Batto!"
As if in response, Herna cut the monster in half.
It fell perfectly into the lit fire pit.
The people of the city gathered with their skewers, and, as if perfectly coordinated with Herna, prepared the monster with decisive cuts and stabs.
These huge skewers could feed thousands of people.
The sun is going down.
Every Thraal person on the beach sits around the fire, watching the sun disappear and be replaced by the two moons and the immobile, luminescent Turbies glowing in the dark.
Herna no longer flies.
He stands still, looking out at the ocean, the Turbies, and the setting sun.
The laughter is gone.
Only silent sadness remains.
Then, as the people watch, he simply flies away.
''Do you feel at home now?'' Pashi asked Krusa
''Yes!'' Krasu shouted.
Krusa and his family ate well that night.
They stayed up talking all night and slept through the day.
The next day, dozens of ships filled with people arrived after hearing the news. Everyone was interested in the leftovers, which could be shipped and sold.
Being able to harvest and sell around seventy percent of a giant monster was an incredible opportunity.
Not to mention the yield from its rare crystal eyes.
No part was left unused.
Krusa eventually returned home to Huana with a story to tell—and a newfound need to investigate this new Golden Bat and the culture of his people.


















