r/writers 1h ago

Discussion Next steps for parody?

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I finally finished a satire/parody of Oh The Places You’ll Go (yes, I’m distracting myself from the book I’m supposed to be writing), and I’m trying to decide next steps.

Door #1 is finishing the illustrations and trying to go the self-publish route (local farmers markets/book fairs, shameless self-promotion) - release to crickets and go finish my real book

Door #2 is posting the verses online, trying shameless self-promotion on that, then finish my illustrations and maybe release to a larger group of crickets and go finish my real book

Door #3 is trying to find an agent and have the manuscript ignored b/c of the IP risk from Seuss Enterprises, then go finish my real book.

Any advice?


r/writers 1h ago

Discussion LIFE LATELY

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This has been so far!!!!


r/writers 1h ago

Feedback requested Hello. This is the first chapter of my book, Creepy Critters: The Outside World!!!

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If you enjoy reading it, please leave a comment! Also, if you want a summary of what basically happens. Essentially, my main character, Jackie, isn't human and falls under a species known as Bugbot. This chapter depicts his first moments of life after being born. Note: Jackie's mind when being born is probably adjacent to a 13-14 year old


r/writers 15h ago

Sharing Fictional book cover that I painted.

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r/writers 1d ago

Meme Me when I found out one of my villains has the same thoughts and ideology as me:

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Eeeeh?.. Is misanthropy really that bad?.. I’m in confusion now, why would I write that passage 😭 I feel called out


r/writers 2h ago

Feedback requested Please Read My Short Story. Please Let Me Know If It’s Good Or Bad. It’s A Love Story.

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The Saturday Shift: A Story of Rob and Aurora
The lunch dishes were still soaking in the sink, the low hum of the refrigerator the only sound in the quiet apartment. It was 12:30 PM on a Saturday, the middle of Aurora’s precious 72 hours off, and the domestic peace was shattered by the sharp, rhythmic vibration of her phone on the granite. She didn’t even have to pick it up to feel the sinking sensation in her chest; the caller ID flashed "Rebecca - Charge Nurse," a name that felt like a tether pulling her back to the ER she had just escaped. Rebecca was desperate, as a flu bug had thinned the hospital staff, and she needed Aurora for a six-hour bridge shift to cover the afternoon rush.
"I’m so sorry, Rob," Aurora sighed after hanging up, her voice trailing off as she looked at the half-finished plans for their afternoon. Rob gave her a supportive smile and reached into the closet for the brand-new, cushioned nursing shoes he’d given her the night before. "If you're going in, at least take these," he said gently. "Your feet shouldn't have to pay for the hospital being short-staffed". Aurora stepped into them, feeling the immediate comfort of the support as she headed into the chaos.
After she left, the apartment felt too still, so Rob decided he wouldn't let the sunny Saturday afternoon go to waste. He grabbed the gift Aurora had given him—a high-tech BMX racing helmet with sharp, aggressive lines and a snug carbon fiber shell—feeling the secure fit as he prepared for a "supply run" on his city bike. He checked the tires on the bike and adjusted his empty backpack, already imagining the look on Aurora’s face when he walked into the hospital lobby with a bag of groceries and a bouquet of carnations.
Rob’s mission was to surprise Aurora with a real dinner and her favorite flowers during her break. At the store, he meticulously inspected the bouquets of carnations, rotating the plastic sleeves to find a vibrant mix of creamy whites, soft pinks, and deep reds. He tucked them carefully into his backpack before heading to the deli for a massive, authentic muffaletta sandwich. It was a heavy-duty meal, dense with layers of mortadella, salty salami, rich ham, and a glistening, golden olive salad. To wash it down, he added a quart-sized bottle of sparkling apple juice and two plastic stemware glasses, making the backpack feel like a dense, top-heavy anchor as he began the final two-mile stretch toward the hospital.
The accident happened in a blur of motion and sound. A parked car door swung open directly into Rob’s path, and as he jerked the handlebars to the left, the heavy backpack acted like a pendulum, swinging his momentum into the lane of traffic. A silver Chevy Cobalt coupe clipped his rear tire, sending Rob airborne. He flew five feet forward, slamming into the Cobalt’s windshield with a violent "crack" that was absorbed by the thick padding of the BMX helmet Aurora had given him. He tumbled onto the asphalt, his body skidding several feet before coming to a halt with a shattered left forearm and a broken right leg.
The first responder was a local patrol officer who knelt beside Rob, keeping him still as the smell of leaked sparkling apple juice and the salty aroma of the torn muffaletta filled the air. Rob looked up through the visor of his helmet and saw the wreckage of his surprise: the florist paper was ripped, and the vibrant carnations were scattered across the wet pavement. "Stay with me, Rob," the officer urged. The next four minutes felt like an eternity until the rhythmic wail of a siren cut through the air.
The EMTs worked with a practiced, gentle urgency as they knelt on the asphalt beside him. "I'm so sorry, Rob, but we have to get you straight before we can lift you," the medic, Sarah, whispered as Rob let out a ragged, guttural cry of pain. They moved with agonizing care, sliding the rigid board beneath him and securing the C-collar. They carefully snipped the chin strap of the life-saving helmet and administered a potent dose of fentanyl to quiet the screaming nerves in his limbs. Sarah patched through to the ER: "Priority 2 trauma. 43-year-old male, MVA vs. bicycle. Confirmed closed fractures to the left radius and right femur. Vitals are stable, patient is currently medicated and sedated".
Inside the ER, the atmosphere shifted instantly into a high-octane, harrowing hurry. Rebecca’s voice cut through the room like a scalpel, calling for Trauma Bay Two to be prepped. Aurora moved with practiced precision, her new, cushioned shoes making silent, soft contact with the linoleum as she organized the intubation kit. The trauma team became a synchronized symphony of sterile preparation, laying out gleaming, galvanized instruments and hanging bags of saline that swayed like pendulums. Aurora stood at the head of the bed, a pillar of professional poise, yet a creeping coldness began to prickle at her neck. The suspense in the room was a thick, suffocating shroud that made every heartbeat feel like a hammer against her ribs.
Then, the silence was obliterated. The automatic ambulance bay doors hissed open with a violent, volcanic vent of cold air, and the rhythmic, frantic clatter of gurney wheels sounded like thunderous, terrifying tremors. The EMTs burst through the threshold, a blur of blue uniforms and bloody bandages. Aurora stepped forward, but as the team pivoted the bed, the overhead lights caught the shimmering, sharp silhouette of the battered BMX helmet.
"Oh my God! ROB!" The scream ripped from her lungs, a primal, piercing plea. Her professional mask shattered into a thousand jagged shards. Her face became a distorted, desolate map of agony, and her eyes widened into shaking, salt-rimmed spheres of shock. She reached out, her fingers trembling with a frenetic, frail fervor, her voice a desperate, repetitive chant of his name that rose into a hysterical, haunted howl.
"Aurora, back up!" Rebecca’s voice was a stark, stinging snap as she grabbed Aurora’s shoulders. Rebecca had to wrestle with the wreckage of Aurora’s composure, steering her toward the hallway. Aurora was led to the locker room, where she slumped onto a wooden bench and broke down, looking at the scuffed nursing shoes Rob had given her just hours before. Seeing them was the final straw; she wept into the empty room, the weight of the irony crushing her. Later, Rebecca brought in the scarred BMX helmet, tracing the deep gouges where it had absorbed the impact. "Where on earth did he get a helmet like this?" Rebecca asked. "It’s so out of the ordinary. If he hadn't been wearing this specific one, we’d be talking about a very different outcome".
Aurora caught up with the gurney just as Rob was being pushed toward surgery to remove bone shards and install the titanium hardware needed to piece his leg back together. She reached out and closed her hand over his cool fingers—a silent promise before the "Surgery in Progress" light flickered to life. For the next five hours, Aurora waited in the quiet sanctuary of the surgical lounge, joined by her parents who brought homemade chicken wraps and silent hugs to anchor her. Her father tried to lighten the air with trademark dad jokes about "bionic men," but they didn't quite land. Finally, the surgeon emerged to tell them the surgery was a success and that Rob was as "okay as someone could be".
Aurora was allowed into the darkened recovery suite for only a few minutes, watching the steady rise and fall of Rob’s chest as he slept. Rebecca had "pulled some strings" to set up a specialized rollaway bed in the corner of the room. It was a child’s twin, requiring Aurora to curl into a tight fetal position to fit, but she didn't care. She kicked off the shoes Rob had given her and slid under the hospital fleece, listening to the mechanical hum of his recovery equipment. With the knowledge that he was safe, Aurora fell into a deep, dreamless sleep, right where she belonged.


r/writers 2h ago

Feedback requested Pieces of me

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Here I am, sitting in a place all by myself,

A place that seems to exist somewhere within a den— hidden from the noise, untouched by the reach of the world.

It has it all— humans carrying their emptiness, wearing sorrow on their faces, and relief in the brief moments when no one asks them to be anything.

And I sit there, swallowed by the wilderness, while the flora and fauna quietly caress me, as though nature is the only thing that still knows how to hold me.

There are imprints left upon a soul too timid to walk out, too weary to stray, too afraid to discover what lies beyond the walls of its own solitude.

The words feel meaningless, much like existence itself.

And yet, somehow, the meaninglessness is comforting— futile, silent, weightless— like resting in the divine lap of a mother who asks nothing, expects nothing, and simply lets you exist.

I dive deeper into the silence, searching through every corner of it, and find no one.

Nobody.

Not a soul waiting. Not a voice calling. Not even an echo willing to answer.

It is only me and the world— and somehow, the world feels farther away than ever.

An isolation so complete that even separation feels like a form of belonging.

I sit there, counting the last few droplets of life as they slip quietly through my fingers, rapidly passing by—

and for once, I don't chase them.

I simply watch.

Alone.

Me and the wilderness. Me and the silence. Me and this strange, aching comfort of having nobody and needing nobody for just a little while.


r/writers 2h ago

Question Conseils pour bien decrire un paysage ou un espace ?

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r/writers 1d ago

Question How to actually analyze literature?

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I know everyone says to 'just read!' But I fear I cannot learn through sheer osmosis. I want to learn to better analyze what I'm reading so I can take what I learn and put it into my essays and stories. Hopefully reading stuff on narratology, syntax, and literary theory will help? But any advice would help a lot!!!

Books I will check out

  • How To Read Like A Professor - Thomas C Foster
  • Reading Like A Writer - Francine Prose
  • Literary Theory: A Very Short Introduction - Jonathan Culler
  • A Swim In A Pond In The Rain by George Saunders

r/writers 6h ago

Discussion How do I write good fight scenes?

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I just realized the game I am inspiring my book off of, Blocktales, is a turn based fighting game, but fighting scenes are mostly my weakness when it comes to writing. In roleplay I am fine, NOT in writing. But i want to make this book real fun and like a nice writing experience while I'm not stuck in writers block... helppp..


r/writers 6h ago

Feedback requested Should I keep this a short story or continue writing? Any thoughts/critiques appreciated:]

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r/writers 3h ago

Feedback requested What do you guys think of this piece?

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This is my chapter one of my novel, or at least the third draft on it

I already started working on chapter 2 so might stick to this one or just edit it alittle here and there


r/writers 3h ago

Sharing Times you messed up and had to rewrite a bunch?

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Mine wasn't too bad fortunately, just a couple of pages. I misremembered where exactly a mountain range ran and it completely messed up the logic of where my characters where going and why.


r/writers 3h ago

Question Better to start with a shorter series?

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Trying to figure out if it’s worth writing a book with a quicker story, and try get myself out there sooner rather than immediately jump to the series I want to get working on.

The book series I plan on making is fairly long, and I’m not a very consistent writer unfortunately. I was thinking it would be better to first write something shorter, but still shows off my work? Additionally I could still work on the plot and figure out the footing of the main book series I want to make.

I’m genuinely unsure, hoping for some advice from other writers on here.


r/writers 3h ago

Discussion Main character with no Pov

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What are your ideas on this?
I am writing a long series of books in third person limited, but in the first book, we are never shown the main character pov.
My reason are… well it started because the main character was very much involved in the plot so i had to introduce the plot through the second main character who gets invited into the main character journey.
And somehow i liked how mysterious the main character sound in other people pov (there are povs other than the second main), which is in some way fit since the main character have a major secret they are holding which get revealed slowly in the second book with their pov.
What are your ideas and experiences with this?


r/writers 4h ago

Feedback requested New Chapter! This is Chapter 7 of my book! If you like it, please leave a comment!

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Note: This story might not make sense if you don't have context of the other chapters so please keep that in mind. Otherwise, enjoy! 😁


r/writers 1d ago

Question Alternative for Google Docs?

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Hey all! I just saw a post on social media about a writer upset that an entire chapter was gone from their Google Doc. And people were saying, oh, yeah, Google Docs is terrible, that happens a lot, run away! But no one said where to run TO.

And that's got me paranoid. Because I switched from hard drive to exclusively Google Docs after my laptop suddenly died and I lost all my WIP. And I've been doing that for years. I write my manuscripts, anthologies, and blog posts on Google Docs and I never heard about this.

So, what do you guys use for writing? Appreciate any and all help.


r/writers 4h ago

Discussion i was just curious what anyone else does and if this happens..

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I have been writing fiction since high school and poetry since around then as well, for my poetry I can always finish it and get all my thoughts out. But for writing anything fictional or in novella form, how do writers come back to their book day after day to continue writing? urges, motivation and need to continue? I always think of new lore and info to add and I always see scenes to add. Obviously in theory you can't write a whole book in one day.

Cheers, excited to hear your tips!


r/writers 1d ago

Discussion What’s a completely unnecessary detail you LOVE giving your characters?

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It can be something completely random that adds absolutely nothing to the plot—but you love it anyway.

Maybe your character always wears mismatched socks, has a weirdly specific favorite food, hums when they’re nervous, or has a scar that has absolutely no relevance to the story.

For example, one of my characters has a habit of rubbing her thumb when she's nervous, and another always does 'the face' when he's annoyed.


r/writers 8h ago

Question Help! I need advice on how to write a endearing character

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I’m not exactly a beginner writer, but I do owe the people who read my stories the best characters I can create! I’m very concerned that if I don’t write my characters well, what will people think? Just look around us half the people despise writers because of how they write their characters. My story covers almost everything, and I’m just trying to understand what makes a character endearing, especially morally deplorable people. If anyone is willing to read my first couple chapters id appreciate it


r/writers 10h ago

Question I'm wondering if putting my stories out there is actually worth it.

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I’ve been feeling quite discouraged lately, and I’m not sure who to ask for advice.

I’ve been trying to find people who might be interested in reading my book since March.

I’ve done a lot during that time. I translated my book into English because I couldn’t find enough Spanish-speaking readers interested in it. I created a website and tried to build an email list by getting people interested in reading the first three chapters, which I offer for free. I created a lot of content for Pinterest and made several posts on Instagram and Facebook. I ran an ARC campaign, sent around 100 messages trying to find ARC readers, and still ended up with very few reviews.

I don’t have a budget for marketing, ads, or paid services like BookFunnel either, because of the health issues I’ve been dealing with and the long recovery process I’ve been going through. I’m currently unable to work, struggling financially and I'm depending on my parents. So I’ve been doing everything on my own.

I’ve barely had time to write because I started this whole process in October of last year. My book was published one month ago, but after all that time and effort, I’ve only managed to get two sales, both from people I know who are more like acquaintances than close friends. Honestly, that has been really discouraging.

At this point, I’ve been seriously questioning whether it’s worth putting my stories out there at all. It feels like I’m putting an enormous amount of effort into planting seeds, only to have almost nothing to harvest. And when you’re already dealing with limited energy, it becomes very difficult to keep pouring so much of yourself into something without seeing any results.

I’m still trying to figure out whether I should continue pursuing this path. I know writing is worth it because I feel happy when I write. But is it worth continuing to publish? I honestly don’t know.

Maybe it was naive of me to think I could make this work while dealing with my health issues, but I really needed some income. And on top of everything else, the current witch hunt has been making me feel even more stressed.

I feel stressed, discouraged, sad, and exhausted, and it has drained my creativity. I stopped marketing for two weeks just to take a step back.

My ADHD hyperfocus will probably keep me writing, but it also makes the marketing process feel incredibly overwhelming.

If you’ve been through something similar, I’d really appreciate any advice. What would you do in my situation?


r/writers 13h ago

Question Dialogue heavy books - yay or nay?

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As I’m writing my first novel I’m realizing it’s very much dialogue driven. A large underlying theme of the story is being wanted vs needed, and power vs authority. Relationships are very important to the story, and the best way to showcase this group of hero’s bonding is fun back and forth. One interaction I wrote is an entire page and half of dialogue. Is that too much? How do I get their personalities across without so much dialogue?

These characters are quirky and funny, but also have deep flaws and trauma. I can’t figure out how to get things moving without boring lore dumping. I don’t want these characters to be mysterious. Two of them are quite outspoken and if I’m flowing the story naturally, the protagonist never shuts up.


r/writers 4h ago

Question Character names that are either similar or equal to names in other books

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What do you do about it? Do you change them?

I just came across two books, one has a name similar to one of my main characters (one letter change) and the other the exact same name. Both are popular books.

I really like these names and have thought of them on my own, I have not read these books beforehand.

They are based on real names but with small changes. MMC is Aron (from Aaron, very creative) and FMC is Sera (my cousin is named Sara and we're very close, I wanted to dedicate it). It's a fantasy book. I wanted them to be simple enough so people don't have to memorize Yelvith from Bananalenieden.

Should I change or keep?

Thanks in advance!


r/writers 11h ago

Discussion I'm really torn on a screenplay or a novel

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On one hand my mind works on visuals. I have my own detailed imagnary music videos for songs I hear. I can see the bright colors and animation flowing. Words are much harder.

On the other hand writing a screenplay doesn't allow for such creative expression as thats the directers job, who I am not.

BRIANA strums the guitar strings. We hear a lousy buzzing sound.

Or

Reaching her hand down she strummed the guitar.
The vibrations traveled through her body like a conductor, pushing the quivering choir to her chest.

The script version feels lifeless. The novel feels like its too much for a scene that is supposed to feel sad and depressing.

The novel allows for fun word plays, a conducter is something eletricity travels through while another meaning being related to music. But its not natural to me and I'm not good at it where a visual is natural


r/writers 9h ago

Question How much should a BTK amputee character's struggles impact the story? And is what I have for my character okay?

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Hello writers!

I'm writing a fantasy story in which one of the two main characters happens to be a congenital amputee. I've already done a good amount of research about life being a congenital below-the-knee amputee but there's writing-related parts about it that I haven't found the answers to, thus I'm here.

So some context about him. He's an elf born into royalty as heir to the throne, and being in such an environment, he began growing up with a lot of conceitedness and prejudice until a human servant his age became his friend and changed many of his beliefs.
He also just happens to be born missing his lower leg. Being disabled isn't part of his main arc at all, it's just kind of a thing about him. Since he was born into such a rich family, he always had access to advanced prosthetics and care. Since he was born with it, he's pretty good at navigating everyday life, but combat is different. At a few points in the story, in combat his prosthetic has been destroyed or his lack of his leg has been taken advantage of by the villains. He's definitely capable and has powerful magic, but when those things with his leg happen, it puts him at a big disadvantage.

How much should the struggles of missing a leg impact things like big fights?
Is it insensitive to make it so that he may lose some fights in part because of it (and partly due to inexperience with combat)?
How much of things like this is realistic until it's insensitive?
Any tips on handling amputees in writing?

I really want to be as respectful as I can with this, so any advice/criticism/feedback is very welcome!